The Heavenly Dao Reviews the Great Tales: Han, Tang, Song, and Ming

The writing is good, but Jiang Wei's writing is too long. It is best to end each character in about 20 chapters. If you write forty or fifty words per person at a time, many people will not have the patience to finish it. Overall, the author wrote very well. Come on!

What should I say? You'd better not have more than 70 chapters per character [awkward laugh] If you're going to write about modern times, it's best to have two or three characters at the end

The inventory is quite detailed, but in the official history, Jiang Wei made 11 Northern Expeditions, not the 9th Northern Expedition. In the novel, it is the 9th Northern Expedition. I hope the author can investigate more historical materials so that people can better understand the details of history. It is recommended that the author concludes with a character inventory after 30 or 50 chapters.

It's okay, but I suggest you go straight to the point. What you wrote earlier is too long.

The writing is okay, the author, come on, come on, come on

The writing is very good, but could the author proofread it after finishing a chapter? From time to time, several problematic paragraphs appear, which affects the viewing experience [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Come on, author, the writing is very detailed. It is different from other popular sky curtain review articles. It has a very special angle of description and interesting viewpoints. I hope you can stick to it.

I feel like it's well written, good luck to the author! Come on

Nice! Come on, author

Well written, I like it very much