HP: Miss Heartbreaker and the Ambitious Boy Riddle

It's great. Someone finally suppressed Riddle. Many book heroines either supported him or had the same goal. Anyway, no one fought back against him. I like how the heroine has stimulated and deviated from Riddle's expectations many times, including the fact that the heroine's own values are similar to mine. She is not a virgin, but also humane and kind. And the grades are good, and the inner activities are normal, that is, the thoughts are not too out of the ordinary, and it does not make people feel dark. I have no suggestions for the work. It is enough for the author to continue to maintain the current state. It's beautiful. Please come and interact with me. It feels so deserted😁

The old enemy CP is too easy to beat! ! ! ! ! ! Riddle, who is emotionally cold, is hard to get emotional to begin with. The author has done a great job in shaping his character, which is very appropriate. He is vicious, arrogant and inferior, cold-blooded and lonely, longing for love but despising love. It is rare and valuable to have an old enemy who can accompany him, whether it is love or not. Even an old enemy has become a powerful medicine to heal him. It is better for two people to compete with each other than to move forward alone. He pretended to everyone, but would reveal his anger in front of her. Two people will guard each other, fight each other, secretly observe each other's performance, compete with each other, and lock each other in a sea of ​​people. He would see her boasting without hiding his smile, and would unreasonably demand that she not leave him behind. Will hear her accident looking for her location with a blank expression. She will uncover his scars, she knows his vicious thoughts, she will be with him but she will still choose to save him. I'm looking forward to the day when Riddle realizes that he is emotional. The author must write it well. I have high expectations for you. We must continue to shape Riddle well!

It's really good to read. The author's psychological description is very delicate. He narrates and comments from the perspective of the heroine, which makes the whole story full of cold humor. Haha. The tone of the entire article is cold, but there are always some flickering warm spots under some detailed descriptions. It is very comfortable to read, like reading a heavy but interesting memoir next to the fireplace in the Slytherin lounge. By the way, I want to ask, is the character of Charles the second male lead? The main reason is that I really like this character. After all, Tom is a bit too dark, and the heroine I think is actually a kind-hearted and awkward little eagle hhh, and she is also very smart. I really like the author's Ove. I hope my wife will give Charles a good ending (?) I really can't control this kind of character. I also look forward to the subsequent love and death between my daughter and Tom hahhh

I feel like Riddler's portrayal has a more normal growth pattern compared to other books, rather than being born a super hero (I'm fed up with those villain settings like super heroes), so Tom, the bad boy with bad nature, is particularly cute. The heroine is also very special. It is rare to have a normal outlook on life. The mutual understanding between the heroine and her mother gradually increases, which makes people feel warm in their hearts. The characters are very comprehensive, from family to classroom to dormitory. Charles is also my favorite character. The calm little lion who looks the same on the inside is really cute.

Written in the style of a life memoir, the plot is smooth and natural, and some relevant magical knowledge appears from time to time. The heroine is a native wizard, unlike other books where the heroine travels through time. Da Da is very good at character creation, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional. This is the most satisfying book I have read so far. It is basically impeccable. If you like this type of book, you can read it with your eyes closed. [Full]

It's great. Although the CP is Tom, it's not like other novels where it only revolves around Tom all day long. At the same time, he portrayed the characters very vividly, which is in line with the colors that should be expected for this age. Mainly the characters' personalities and the language are very interesting. I think the author wrote it superbly

It is a first-person perspective novel in the original style. It does not have the problem of overly focusing on love and not focusing on the characters. The writing style is also very good and it is refreshing and enjoyable to read. . . It's just because there are so few people that the ratings are confusing. The old enemy is going to become his wife!

It's not OOC at all. It's a very good book. It has a superb sense of fatal pull between old enemies. Both sides want to put the other to death. There was no groveling, kneeling and licking Riddle, and then having a sadistic love affair. Or maybe he is arrogant and thinks he can change Riddle, and then falls in love with OOC. Moreover, the abnormal love of my parents was very good. They could not give me too much love and care. They were stubborn and could not express themselves. It felt like a wet coat to me.

To be honest, it's really hard for me to come across an HP article that makes me follow it for so long. But this book written by the author is different from any book I have read before. The heroine did not appear in the world for redemption or to meet Riddle. She has her own parents, family, and complicated relationship changes with her roommates. Everyone is very real in the author's writing. The heroine will long for her mother's hug and feel overwhelmed by her ability to read minds. She came to this world, she came to us, not for someone, but to be herself. The author jumped out of the original plot of HP, so readers can see the huge magical world through the text. Not only is it magnificent and magical, but also how terrifying the decaying society is. There is strong oppression (school bullying, etc.), And there is also silent resistance (Ernie, he really made me cry to death!) Personally, I hope that fan fiction is not just about taking readers through the plot, nor is it just about satisfying readers' regrets, but it is about enriching the characters and the world in the book. It is to attract more people to know and fall in love with HP. Finally, I would like to praise the author's writing power, it is terrifyingly strong! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

It's nice to read, and the author's writing is very smooth. There are no logical contradictions and it's not embarrassing. The writing is quite comfortable to read. Unlike other HPs I've seen before, it's either very awkward or seriously OOC, and it feels like it's covered in skin.