Harry Potter: Harry's Twin Brother Is in Slytherin

I like the setting of the lure very much and look forward to the future direction of the design in the future. The current description of the plot always feels a bit hazy, and something seems wrong, but at my level I can't tell what the problem is. Come on!

It's really great to read. Unlike other articles about Harry's brother, this one has a sense of mystery, and the background arrangement is also very reasonable. He is also very strong, has a growth process, and has reasonable experiences. It is not like other articles where he is invincible or weak at the beginning. Also, Xiao Luya's childhood is also very miserable, which attracts me. His personality is also different from other HP male protagonists. He is either a little fox, very wise and almost a demon, or he is just having fun. People, on the contrary, have a feeling of drifting with the wind. They do not deliberately win over others, but rely solely on their own strength to attract the little snakes. They are also very peaceful and gentle to people. Even when they entered the principal's office, they did not forget to give a handful of candies to the little snakes when they left (he really made me cry to death) [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Personally, I think the early pacing was too fast, and it felt a bit inexplicable. It was foggy and foggy, and many rewritten plots were passed by in one stroke, which made people confused. I hope the author can write more clearly and richly. But the protagonist setting is very good, and the overall plot and characters are very full. Overall, this is a "slightly flawed" novel. (The above is just my opinion, not meant to be disparaging)

In fact, I was attracted by the big daily updates. The protagonist is very full-bodied, and the writing style in the early stage was a little immature. But after reading the introduction, I thought that this description might be used to express the suffering that the protagonist suffered in childhood. The emotional expression in the later period was very strong, and it moved me very much. The writing gradually matured, allowing me to see a different Slytherin. I really like the feeling of the protagonist guiding Slytherin to glory. The little snake calling the protagonist His Highness is really touching. Also, I feel great. When does the love line begin, I almost have to look for the love line with a magnifying glass. I also like the big setting very much. It is very different. Another thing that attracts me very much. In my words, the world of Harry Potter is like a background board. I added my own thoughts to make it a whole new world. There is also the protagonist's friend Jin. It really made me cry. Maybe it's because my tear point is relatively low. The big writing is really good. I believe that in the future, there will be more protagonists leading Slytherin to win glorious moments. I like to watch this kind of thing. I hope there will be no interruption in the update. It will be updated three times a day. The last one, is Xiaolong attacking?

How can I put it this way? I quite like the first part, but the second part is near the tulips (I guess I haven't gone back to read it). The plot makes me a little confused. There are not many cp lines, but there are more family lines at the moment. Every original character is OK, with distinct personalities, and the original characters don't feel OOC. There are too many characters to remember, but I can barely remember Lie and Edward. There are many names, but I still can't remember the characteristics of this character. To be honest, I originally came here with CP skills, but now that CP skills have not reached the point where I have almost become the poisonous Wei of Luya [cover face][cover face][cover face], let me focus on CP. After finishing the review, I went back to read today's three chapters (mostly lately I've been reading because I didn't fully understand the plot)

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The book is very interesting, but I don't know why. Maybe it's because I read too little. Isn't it the story between the protagonist and Draco? From the front, it looks like the protagonist and Harry [something]. Maybe I've seen too little. Please give me some advice [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] The book is really good. Come on ^o^

It's a very nice article, with many original parts, the character settings are also very touching, and there are many elements. However, maybe because it is too diverse, my personal knowledge scope is too narrow, and I can't understand it very well. It gives me a feeling that although I can't understand it, I know it is very interesting. The relationship between the characters and the logic of the plot are all worth analyzing in detail, but it is obvious that I am not very good at analysis. It's just a pleasure to read, but I still think the core of this book is very good. I don't know why the score is so low. It may be because of the twists and connections in the plot in the early stage, which are a bit difficult to understand. Oh, I really don't understand it until now, but it does not affect my satisfaction. There is an inexplicable sense of satisfaction that is illuminated by the blind spot of knowledge. It is very interesting. Come on, author.

At present, it seems that there is no particularly outstanding OOC, and the plot line is relatively smooth. It can be said to be a good fanfic. However, the progress of the emotional line in the early stage is too slow. I look forward to the author's big update. Come on! 😚

After watching the first half, I really like this kind of Slytherin. He is united and friendly, and everything is for the glory of pure blood. He is smarter than his peers, but sometimes he is like a child playing in the snow. He has an elegant posture and good upbringing, and has a unique romance that belongs to Slytherin.