HP Granger Advises You to Stop Studying

It's the first time I write an hour-long review. It's so real. I haven't finished reading it yet. It's like a microcosm of my student life. I have to abide by the rules, don't dare to get sick, want to be first in the exam, crazily squeeze my time and experience, feel guilty when I am relaxed by PUA, a lot of homework, after-school promotion, being suppressed and not being proud. The imaginary world describes a lot of student life that we didn't notice. The unreasonable phenomenon, the writing is very good, and I also see a lot of tenderness in it. Xiaoying Xiaoguan, who will suppress the heroine and punish her for things that are afraid of her being excluded, will directly give points to the heroine and praise her professors. This is a world full of love. I hope that the heroine can slowly become herself in this world, not just for learning, not for anyone, not blaming herself for wasting time, loving herself and being surrounded by love.

It satirizes real-life issues, is cleverly conceived, and integrates issues such as responsibility and learning into HP's world view very well. The characters are also well portrayed. This book deserves a full score, and its strength is definitely more than 9.2.

The writing is not bad, the setting does not deviate from the HP worldview, and it is overall reasonable. The most illogical thing is why Lin Yue listened to Hermione. The author did not do enough foreshadowing here, and it feels like the plot is forced. However, this is the first time I have seen a dual female protagonist in the HP worldview. I encourage and encourage you to give it a five-star rating.

My mom, it's so beautiful. In fact, I was attracted by the title of the book, but I thought it was just a top student studying crazily and accidentally killing Voldemort. No one told me it was Le. As a Le, seeing the way Lin Yue and Hermione get along, it is my ideal state, stable and reassuring. The setting of the original world is also good. I think the subject matter is very novel. Lin Yue's life-threatening learning method is heartbreaking. The author is so cruel (just kidding). Hermione is really like a little sun, warming Lin Yue. I really love this setting. I have to say that it is really amazing to be able to combine the two themes.

Big! I'm hungry! I want to eat! ! ! The protagonist has a full character, the Chinese education theme is also very novel, and Hermione and other characters also fit the original work very well. Wow, there are so few stories about Hermione with two heroines, I'm going to keep chasing them!

Well worth a look! ! ! Recommendation index: full star! Lin Yue is a very complex character. She is not only a character in the book, but also a projection of the hatefulness of Chinese education in real life. After seeing the world she lives in, where the last one-third of the students in the school will be destroyed, I really have mixed feelings in my heart. Yueyue was also destroyed. She personally witnessed her own death, and she witnessed the death of thousands of others. Fortunately, everything did not stop. She came to Hogwarts and became a Ravenclaw, and even a crazy Ravenclaw. Every line reflects that Yueyue is a meticulous "machine" and a "madman" who learns, but madmen will also usher in redemption, and that is Miss Hermione Granger. The friction between the two top students is really sweet. Hermione taught Yueyue a lot, and Yueyue also taught Hermione a lot. They broke the foundation of traditional education and became a better Yueyue, and also became a better Hermione. The two children learned to love and give love, which truly showed that love and care can really change a person's future. The whole book is a mix of sweetness and sadism, and it doesn't just follow the plot. Yueyue also has many of her own scenes, which is also very sad. I only hope that Yueyue can have a bright future, and love will change her. This love is not only the love brought by Hermione, but also the love brought by Potter, Ron, etc. They change Yueyue, and Yueyue also changes them. I'm really looking forward to the next direction, and even more so, how Yueyue will face this journey when her emotions sprout again. In addition, I hope the author will update more and add more updates, and I wish you good health and happiness every day. I also wish that all people in the world who love others can get what they wish for, be healthy and happy every day.

Very nice and logical. Then there is the typical Chinese education, which is suffocating. Although I know there will be a happy ending, I still hope that the author will not imitate MiHoYo and use less swords.

The character design is very creative, and the recovery process of the protagonist in the early stage is very interesting. The plot after the fifth grade may be more ambitious and idealistic, and it does not look as natural as the early stage. Okay, this is not the point. The emotional line is very sweet. You can watch it with confidence. But the author really likes to arrange for them to hug/kiss in front of others. It's so sweet, so awkward, so sweet, so sweet, so sweet, so awkward, so sweet! Why are everyone in the restaurant watching? So sweet! Why at three school dances! So sweet! Why are you on the street, why are there professors, why are your parents nearby, and Harry Ron is the hardest hit area. I was "tortured" like this. Maybe in my opinion, kissing is more personal, and kissing in a space between two people is more comfortable.

This book can be said to be really well written, and it can even be said to be my enlightenment book for Lily. Because I went from only watching romance movies to only watching original movies, I had some inexplicable resistance to lily flavor, and I couldn't even understand it myself. But I accidentally read this book these days, and it directly made me feel that if you can accept Yuan Dan, why can't you accept Lily? The love between two girls can also be very beautiful. The author's writing style is very vivid and vivid, and it specifically describes a protagonist who is stuck in a quagmire without knowing it, and is waiting for redemption. However, her redeemer does not directly pull her out of the quagmire, but guides her out of the quagmire bit by bit, which is the so-called guiding lover. I was really moved when I watched it, and some parts were obviously very ordinary sentences, but they made me cry suddenly just watching it. It also made me realize that the person who truly loves you will feel distressed and pity for everything you have suffered, will only want to hold you in his arms, and will cry because of your experience, even if you are not aware that it is a cruel experience. This is the first time I have written a long review, and it is also the first time I have written down my feelings about a book before I have finished reading it. I can only say that this book is worth sending [hearts] and [blowing kisses] I really feel sorry for Lin Yue, but at the same time, because of the concern of the people around her for her, and the pain and anger caused by everything that happened to him, it is really easy to make people cry.

HP double heroine story, the original heroine enters Ravenclaw. She comes from a high-pressure and different world that treats children as commodities (a bit like the beasts of the Colosseum). After being destroyed, she comes to the magical world, re-cultivates feelings and corrects the process of cognition. The target is Hermione, and there are many deputy CPs, such as the two founders of Senior Sister and Eagle Badger. However, in addition to the relationship, a lot of content is also written, and the plot basically follows the original timeline. As a precaution, the setting is more like a fairy tale/fable, which means there are not many detailed settings. In addition, some settings in Harry Potter have inconsistencies and social defects. There is not much complexity and information that needs to be deduced. There is no need to study the logic in detail (for example, the heroine had her brain cut off. What will happen to the xx part later? There is no point in delving into this part) Just treat it as a setting, including the protagonist later telling him that he comes from a different world. This is actually a bit shocking in some articles, after all, it is linked to the danger of life, but for this article it is not a big problem, because everyone is pretty weird (no)... In addition, it discusses the rights of children in education, etc. It is not in-depth, but the expression is quite good and integrated into the content. It is not a thesis originally, but it is very confusing to suddenly become dark and incomplete or discuss it in a big way. Some authors who have encountered a desire to preach sometimes do this, which is a headache. However, the author interprets the content he wants to express very movingly, and the description of the emotional exchange is admirable. Through the changes of the heroine and her companions, everything is expressed without saying anything. But fairy tales do not mean that there is no abuse. The setting of the heroine is destined to be a difficult thing for her to change. Giving birth to new flesh and blood also involves a lot of pain. However, many relationships have been restored so far. Please feel free to read it. There is also a lot of emphasis on the power of the masses, as well as the friendship between the hospital, the relationship between teachers and friends, and the family relationship. This is very good. After all, in such a big background, it is really thin to only talk about love. The treatment of other characters is also relatively objective. For example, Malfoy, this is simply a detector of my HP profile. He means that I will leave when he kisses me... After all, this person's actions are not authentic in the original work, but because of his appearance as a movie actor, he is whitewashed everywhere, which is really unbearable. This article has given enough lessons, but it has not really caused indelible harm or made a fool of people. It just allows them to learn a lesson and avoid making bigger mistakes. Other characters, such as the teacher and principal, are affirmed but are not given the setting of omniscience and omnipotence. They also have their own thoughts and flaws, and they are also subconsciously thinking about their own path. They are not just a template of "justice". The classmates and relationships in the college are also deduced accordingly. The emotional lines of the two heroines may be a little abrupt, especially the heroine's preference for Hermione is a bit inexplicable at first? However, the content is not too exciting. Hermione's role in changing the heroine in the later stage is also very obvious. Maybe it is just a smart child who is quick to learn. Hahh, the heroine is also heart-wrenching after watching it. The heroine goes to spend the holidays with the Granger family, etc.

It's so beautiful. It really shocked me. I thought it was an ordinary redemption novel at first. I also hesitated that the early part was a bit too long for me. I didn't have the patience, so I continued reading after a while. The relationship between Lin Yue and Hermione was also very sweet. It was my ideal way of getting along with a lover. Mutual trust and help. The further you read, the different you will find. The author's writing style is really good. At least in the eyes of someone who can't write, I can clearly feel the various changes in the characters. For example, Lin Yue was transformed from a "robot" because of the continuous help and guidance of friends. He was very patient and kind, so he later escaped from that world and became a living person. You can feel the author's good intentions and have an original world view. It is perfect and huge. It can be seen from the comments of readers that in the end, there were characters from other books who were connected together. And the best thing is that the ending was directly sublimated. Forgive me for not understanding what was written at the end. I still have a few chapters left to read, but I saw red, red spirit, which was the most shocking to me. I never thought it would be like this at first. This can be regarded as one of the best novels in my mind. It allowed me to see real characters, as if they were no longer words in the book, but flesh and blood. My evaluation may be a bit confusing, using inappropriate words and so on. Don't mind. At the beginning, I was still cautiously guessing the upper and lower positions, but luckily I got it right😋 Well, in the end. Why is there no process? In the chapter about Lin Yue coming of age, I thought that I didn't even blink. How come it was an afterthought? If there is no process, I will deduct points [crying][crying][crying] Ahem. In short, this book is really, really beautiful! The most impressive thing after watching it is "raised eyebrows" [laughing] I feel like it happened many times

I've been reading this for a long time, but I haven't had time to comment. I feel good about myself, and it's considered a good HP article. But I feel so sorry for Lin Yue. When will Lin Yue realize her feelings?

It's beautiful and beautiful. The setting is really novel. The heroine is so heart-wrenching. Can you reveal it quickly? I really want to get in and yell [cry][cry][cry]

Delicate emotional description, special but correct viewpoint production, in the author's writing, every character is three-dimensional and alive, whether it is a positive character or a negative character, every action and every dialogue has a reasonable explanation. This is a very rare novel. In this novel, through the character creation of Lin Yue, the author attempts to discuss propositions such as chicken baby education and equality of life, and explains his thoughts on these propositions through the mouths of various characters in the magical world. Through constant thinking and reflection, readers can continue to deepen their understanding of these propositions. Thank you very much for reading such an article. Thank you.

I'm glad to see a Lily-themed hp fanfic in 🍅, Lin Yue x Hermione is really sweet! I have not read the original HP book, but the general direction of the plot is similar to the movie. It is worth reading due to the wonderful reactions of the protagonist. But what fascinates me is the emotions. I think the author's description of emotions is very cute. Maybe it's a contrast to a high-pressure world, so I think it's really good. The essence of education, a kind environment, longing for it because it is beautiful, not to mention this magical adventure, this is extremely interesting to read. After reading it, after a long time, I watched the HP clip for a while, as if to confirm something, and then I was relieved. I think this is suitable for people who suppress themselves. It just tells you what you have known for a long time. I hope every little eagle that fails to grow up can grow up well and slowly. Maybe just slow down, slow down, be kind to yourself, and thrive.

To be honest, this setting is very beautiful, and the rhythm is also very suitable for me. The author is also very careful in writing. Each chapter is about 4,000 words. I really like it. Everyone can take a look. I really recommend it.

How should I put it? This is the first time I write a book review for a novel on Tomato, because for the first time I have such a good feeling about this HP novel that I can't help but recall it in school during the day, and it has a strong sense of immersion (you will know after reading it, the psychological pressure is huge). I personally think that the reasons why it attracts me are as follows: First, the book itself does not violate or greatly tamper with the world view of the magical world. The main plot is roughly similar to the original text. There are almost no surprises. Basically, it does not miss all the points of the book with a rating of 9.0 Or above (except that one book a day is not enough). The article itself about the two heroines is also very, very, very attractive to me! ! ! Secondly, although the description of emotions and thoughts in this book does not reach a profound level, it can still make people feel as if they are personally there. Although it has a certain connection with Chinese education itself, it does not deny the author's great writing style. I have reached the point where I can't bear to read it and appreciate it from the beginning again from time to time. Moreover, the descriptions of character traits such as Professor Maomao's reasonableness or Professor Sri Lanka's tsundere are also very apt, making people feel no sense of violation and the sense of substitution is really strong! ! The third point is also one that is difficult for me to let go of. The theme of this book is unforgettable for me: on what disasters Chinese-style education has brought to human society. Although the world view of "if you don't work hard, you will be destroyed" exists in the article, it is still difficult for a high school student like me not to empathize with the heroine's perspective. This is also one of the author's more clever techniques. He did not directly write about the heroine's character, because no matter what the heroine does, someone will criticize her. Instead, he uses "intracranial surgery" This method can directly put aside the worries, and at the same time, it can more clearly highlight the ____ (Nanping) of Lin Yue's parents. Every time he sees the heroine punishing himself or being emotionless and studying lifelessly, it is inevitable to combine it with his own private life, and then he sympathizes with the heroine and pities himself (I am so angry that I want to send a knife to Dad). Although there is an exaggeration, Hermione and other Western experts did not expect that the study diligence of this Eastern face can better highlight the Chinese rote memorization ____ (everyone knows it) In fact, I can write a lot more about the third point, but considering your time and my own overwhelming mood, I can only write so much. If anyone has different opinions, you can come and fight with me. I happen to have twenty-three test papers that I haven't written yet and I want to vent (thank you)

Hmm... The character design of the protagonist is quite novel, and the character image is relatively three-dimensional. Because the protagonist is originally a learning machine, there are more descriptions of inner struggles in the article, but it feels quite good. I hope the author will get better as he writes more.

The language used is rough, but the protagonist is very much in line with Ravenclaw's aesthetics. I believe no Ravenclaw can reject such a female character who is constantly absorbing knowledge. In the overall character creation, the protagonist can be said to be the best portrayed, but in the process of shaping, the author's method can still be improved. For example, there is no need to directly present the character's psychology and feelings every time. In common literary works, a better way of expression is to see the protagonist's fall from the perspective of a bystander at the end of a chapter, such as using Hermione's feelings, and then describe the protagonist's feelings in a new chapter. Then in common literary works, we will choose to describe the scene directly at the beginning of the article. Then the scene description does not indicate that it is the protagonist's dream or feeling. The more realistic the scene description is, the better. Just like in a movie, the protagonist walks into a certain forest, and then he starts running without explaining the reason. The viewer will be curious about why the protagonist is running there, and then suddenly some natural disaster or accident occurs. The protagonist wakes up, and then tells you from a camera angle that it is a dream. You can even use a montage technique to combine them here, but in fact the two are not connected. In addition to the writing techniques that could be improved, I felt that the supporting characters were too labeled. The best part is that although each professor only uses a few words, you can feel their personality. But the classmates, including the protagonist group, including the Weasley twins, and the protagonist's roommates, felt like their original characters had been wiped out. Even including Hermione, it can be felt that her existence serves the protagonist. The Ravenclaw-like part of her character was serious and rigorous about learning and knowledge; the Gryffindor-like reckless courage in her character was not shown at all. Then there's the emotional aspect. The protagonist's relationship with Hermione progresses quite well in a normal plot, but whenever the plot develops into the two of them being alone, the emotional description becomes cliché. In their respective life development processes, there are some candies that can be seen everywhere, which are very easy to crack and fit their characters very well. They are not suitable for that kind of sticky emotional description. Finally, there is the consciousness of the world and the founder of the college. These holes were dug early and have not been filled. Every time it is brought up, it will be ignored because of the current situation. But after the current situation is dealt with, won't you think of this information and bring it up to discuss it with everyone? Including some very painful parts of the protagonist. Sometimes when a memory or feeling is described repeatedly, in fact, you only need to mention the key words, and there is no need to write the entire paragraph again. I asked a lot of questions, and I feel that if the author did it, the word count would indeed be reduced a lot, and I also understand the situation as an online author. Maybe I asked more questions and the requirements were higher, but I do feel that the work can reach this level if I work hard. Mainly because I really think this protagonist is pretty good, and I think she deserves a better description. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author does write very well. After reading it, it gave me a feeling of utopia. Lin's absolute excellence overcame the difficulty of the whole text. I prefer this book to be a redemptive and refreshing text that abandons some logic. There are some minor logical inaccuracies, but the whole book is still very readable and gentle. It's heartwarming, and Lin Yue's growth is also visible to the naked eye. From Liangbao's first grade to seeing them over two hundred years old, I really couldn't bear to see the ending, including senior Wenli's love for her juniors, the professor's protection of students, and everyone's unconditional trust, which makes people feel warm in their hearts. However, I feel that Hermione's characteristics have been weakened, and the description of Hermione can be more detailed.

It's so good to watch, I immediately followed it to the latest chapter [laughing] [like] Each character has a distinct personality, and the continuous improvement of the protagonist's character is touching. Lin Yue was finally redeemed by Hermione [crying] The description of the magical world is fascinating. To be honest, even though I have never read the original novel or the movie, I was very attracted to it. The storyline can be said to be well detailed and enjoyable to watch. I am looking forward to the following plots. I have followed the author's other book, Canberra the Titans. [Liked] that book is also good. By the way, I recommend it, friends in the comment area can check it out. Finally: Come on, author, wish you a great work, just don't update too often.

Five stars, a very good book. The protagonist kills decisively and does not hesitate. He kills when he should and punishes when he should. There are some knives in the front. The protagonist loses his emotions after being operated on. After his death, he travels to the world of HP. He slowly regains his emotions and becomes friends with Hermione. He also has two adoptive mothers. Although there are some small knives interspersed in the middle, such as punishing himself, it is overall very sweet. The knives account for about 1%. There are very few knives. The protagonist slowly Improve your strength and become the strongest in the book. This book is also a bit group portrait. Although many people in the book are not the protagonists, they still have their own charm. The knife in the original show "almost" saved Harry's parents, Ariana, and Sirius's younger brother were all saved by the protagonist through time. It is very good and worthy of recommendation [Like] [Like] [Like]

It's really beautiful. Although Lin Yue's world is a bit exaggerated, it is the epitome of our current study life. I feel really sad when I see her like this. But in this world, he has met real good friends, teachers and classmates. Lin Yue is also slowly changing. Overall, this article is very well written, and the storyline is closely related to the original work. The plot is compact and makes people feel that the author is very attentive. Anyway, it is very beautiful! ! ! [Adoration]

Some people in previous book reviews said that Lin Yue's setting is a bit fragmented, but this actually does not exist. There is something called love at first sight, and a heartbeat. Lin Yue compromised for Hermione for the first time, maybe because of feelings; and the subsequent concessions were not the result of Hermione's concern? I think this is reasonable. The author's writing style is good, the storyline is also good, and the subject matter is relatively new, but sometimes the segmentation is uncomfortable, but this is just a small flaw, and it doesn't really seem to have any problems. All in all, I like it very much.

The writing is okay... But there are too many descriptions of the protagonist's mechanical voice and lack of emotion. I know that I want to express the protagonist's human-machine feeling... But I don't need to describe these too frequently. I add... After every sentence and idea. This will give people a visual fatigue. You can mention it occasionally but not too often (´△｀), which will affect the perception.

It was a bit confusing in the early stage, but it is really good. I saved up for more than a month before I started reading this book. Whenever I read it, I always thought it was really good. Sometimes I really wanted to cry, but this book made me express my feelings. There was no way I could make this book, and there was no way I could do it. It's like a reflection of real society, but not so comprehensive. This is a very realistic and ideal book, and the author may not have written it comprehensively. The characters written by the author are not all-round. But he is indeed alive in front of my eyes. Alive in my mind. It is active. The illusion of being more real than real. He has a very good fusion of characters. Whatever is wrong is wrong, and what is right should be right. What I said may be a bit absolute. But it seems to me that he is. Like this book very much. I hope the author can continue to update it. I want to see the ending. Lin Yue's ownership... Thank you. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Salute][Salute]

This is the first time I read a Harry Potter fanfic, and it was unexpectedly very good [Thinking]. The heroine is really miserable, so pitiful. I look forward to the day when my relationship recovers. Please be more tolerant to yourself. Children don't have to be so harsh on themselves. It will make me feel sad [I feel sorry for you]. Looking forward to the heroine and Hermione's posts, please come on, author! [Laugh]

It looks good, but I actually think Lin Yue and Hermione are a bit weird in the back. I can't put my finger on it. It's weird. Maybe I think Lin Yue is most suitable for not having CP. I think it's fine if they are friends.

Not much to say, the author's writing style is great and the plot is delicate. Maybe you will think that the early writing is not good, but if you look at the back, the later stage is very good. Believe him and the author. This is really a good story! ! ! The author never messed up from beginning to end, he knew exactly what he needed. This author is very powerful. As long as she continues writing, there is a high probability that there will be an author like Sanjiu.

God, for this book, I thought about how to write a book review for the first time. What I said below can be used as a basis for everyone to read this book, but it is only for reference: 1. The author's writing style is very good, and he depicts the characters' expressions, movements and emotions very well. When there are not many action scenes, other descriptions are ignored. The creation of the protagonist is very mature. I feel that Lin Yue really appears in front of me like a flesh-and-blood person. In addition to the description of the protagonist, other characters in the original work are well described and their personality characteristics are depicted. 2. I really love the selection, because we also received a Chinese education, and we can really sympathize with the protagonist's experience. While empathizing, we can also see that she is much more miserable than us, and we can't help but feel sorry for her. Watching her slowly get better, I feel very happy. What I like most is that it is not just one person who saves the protagonist, but everyone in Hogwarts. I don't need to say more about the charm of the group portrait. 3. Regarding the content distribution of the whole book, I would also like to say that this is the first book that I like to death, but does not have a particularly strong withdrawal reaction. The previous part of the book depicts the characters' previous experiences very well, so the experience in Hogwarts is like a smooth journey. The feeling of water pushing a boat, the emotional transition is very smooth, and the ending echoes the beginning and the end, which shocked me greatly. The ending was also handled in an extremely good way. Although the readers are still unfinished, the story is complete and deeply won the hearts of the people. In the second half of the article, some memories from the past are interspersed from time to time. Following the author's thoughts, it is easy to recall the content of the previous chapters. You can really feel the gratification of watching the protagonist get better little by little. I really like it. All in all, I highly recommend this book. It has a novel concept and excellent writing. I have finished reading it for the first time, but I am willing to read it a second time, a third time, or even a fourth time. Strongly recommend everyone to come and see it! ! !