I Brought the Supernatural into the World and Saved It!

Hello everyone ~ I am the author of this book, a ten-year-old bookworm. This article is mainly a growth article, not the type that makes you invincible from the beginning. I know that this book has many shortcomings and shortcomings, and I have the courage to accept everyone's criticism. I am also grateful to every reader who encourages and supports me ~ Give yourself a good review first. [Send heart][Send heart][Cry][Cry][Cry]

It's okay, the writing is quite childish. The male protagonist I wrote earlier seems to be a bit of a tease because he doesn't have much money, and the foreshadowing of the person who is bestowed with extraordinary powers is a little too short. Just a few sentences about his tragic life experience. I hope I can write a short story with two or three chapters. By the way, there is also the issue of the official background. Being able to protect the rear for 20 years and being eager to be extraordinary and not vigorously searching the area seems not very serious. I just understand the situation in the city and the protagonist does not jump out and is not discovered at all. It feels that the official is very casual. In fact, at this time, a plot with official means can be added. For example, if we inspect the matter for the purpose of arresting prisoners or conducting a census, we can still ask questions without causing a big commotion. (The following is my personal opinion) In this paragraph, you can add an official staged contact with the protagonist and a representative role of the organization (that is, an official witness of a major event), such as a police officer or an important official role. There are no big problems. It's a very good debut novel. I hope the author can stick to it and write the next work.

This is a salvation novel that truly fits the theme. The protagonist saves the world by creating an organization and granting extraordinary power. This is not the kind of pseudo-salvation article that talks about saving the world but kills some people first. At present, it seems that the pace is a bit slow in the front.

Alas, I want to see the kind of boss behind the scenes, but I don't feel any pleasure at all.

Simply rate it Let's talk about the advantages first. The ideas in this book are worthy of recognition. The sequence setting is actually not uncommon, and it's really good that the author can come up with new tricks. Then there is one thing that surprised me. This book has a very accurate selling point. It knows which readers it is targeting and will not miss the key points here and there. That's how I was attracted too Then there are the disadvantages The writing seems to be relatively immature, and the pace is a little too fast. The characters are short and one-sided, and they are all facial expressions. The structure of the sentences could be refined to make it less awkward. And the timeline and emotional fluctuations of the characters in the previous chapters are a bit out of context. It's really confusing to read quickly. The settings can be thrown out a little slower, and each organization member can be written separately. There is no need to gather together to inherit the sequence. However, character creation depends on the person. If you read a lot of books, you may not be able to read them. Of course, it is fine for some newbies to read them, and they cannot have high requirements for cool writing. It depends on what kind of positioning the author wants to give this book. Does he want to write it well and shape it well, or does he want to write it as a purely refreshing article?

Yes, the author can include more extraordinary people [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I'll keep watching it, and I'll continue watching it if it's good to watch.

It looks good, the pace is slow in the early stages and the writing is immature, but it's still good later on.

The writing is good, but it's a bit of a middle-of-the-road [laughing and crying]

I prefer various sequences of combat skills. The writing is very good, the language is humorous and vivid, and it has a cheap feeling, not rigid.