Spiritual Qi Revival: I Have a Penitentiary Bus

As a monthly planner, this is a more pertinent evaluation, with many advantages. For example, the writing of the fight scenes is better than many others, but the main reason is that some parts are indeed a bit unnatural. For example, when writing, I hesitated for a long time before picking up...

I'll update my review. Don't let this book's ratings fool you. This book should actually be considered a masterpiece. It's just that I got a low score for no reason. So I really recommend everyone to read it, please. [Cover face][cover face]

To tell the truth about this book, there is no problem in giving it a five-star rating. The rating of 6.3 Is a bit too low, 8.5 Is normal. It's a very good fan novel, and the main character has a strong urban flavor (to be honest, this book is the strongest one I've ever read, and I couldn't stand it for a while). If the battle power is broken, it won't break after reading the whole text, and the monthly battle power is quite easy to break. As for the plot, it's pretty good, but I don't think I've seen it. I hope it's better for the author. Just keep writing.

Really good! Our Gu Ling looks a bit like a magical girl. How did she get so fat? The logic is very reasonable, and the combat power is also balanced. I like it very much. This is one of my favorite two monthly horoscopes and second creation books. I also like the fanart drawn by Pantai. By the way, if you have time, take a look at the drawings I made for Gu Ling. Currently, I have drawn Princess Ling and Maid Ling, as well as the frosty white elegance form. I have reset Gu Ling's hairstyle once. The only drawback of this book is that it is very slow to update! !

Finally, there is a rating, but this rating is a bit surprising to me. It should be a cool novel with a score of about 9 points, and the author also knows a lot about Yueji, but why is it given the same rating as those nonsense Yueji novels that disrespect the worldview?

Your work is being evaluated... Your work's rating is: A+! This masterpiece will shock the entire software and put everyone who sees it in the supreme artistic realm. Even the ring master will be fascinated by it! "Translation: Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you."

The reason why there are no 5 stars is that the author should update the prequel [Petrochemical] after 8 months, and I feel like I haven't even finished writing the Earth chapter yet. The so-called going low and opening high must make people feel like they are high. I know the author has two books, and he is still a student. He also said he would finish the first one and is writing a prequel, but there is no so-called redemption at all. City There is no hope for this chapter, and I have to write about Outland later. The author wrote 20 chapters in 7-day copy for about 2 months. Now I am updating every Monday, which is even more difficult. Instead of being a cool article now, it is better to improve the other one first, and then take the time to code some prequels. When the other one is completed, the prequel will probably have better details.

It looks so good, it's finally not a funny man or a funny woman, this is the taste of urban people

Objectively speaking, this book does have shortcomings and there are areas that can be improved. However, the image of the protagonist and the character of Fengpi portrayed by the author are very distinct and quite in line with urban conditions. Everyone has their own preferences. In fact, the setting of becoming a sinner is still a bit abrupt (?), But it is still possible to change the setting of extracting the mirror world. I hope the author will continue to work hard, learn from the shortcomings, and use the strengths.

Floating Gate Eternal, the fighting and the protagonist's character are very good