Playing the Crimson Mist in a National Fate Challenge: Becoming a God?!

I thought she turned into a red sister and killed people without thinking, but I didn't expect it would be a bit of a plot.

I gave this a five-star rating just for being a monthly person, but in fact, I personally thought it was good-looking but not worthy of a five-star rating. First of all, the pacing was fast and there was no priority. In the early stage, it used a lot of space to describe the external comments, but there was not much description of the actions of the protagonist group, so the impression was not very good. Then it was a bit confusing. At the beginning, it was said that I would play the role of Yin Hong Mist, with a male soul and a female body. This feeling was very strange. Then he said that there is no color grade. If there is a name but no color grade, it will be difficult to stretch. The choice of time point is also very confusing, (I can understand here, the setting of the monthly schedule itself is a bit messy, and there have been cases of eating books.) But it is best to explain clearly here. Sister Hong was already a color when she joined the institute, but not when she first came into contact with Carmen. It is easy to be ambiguous if it is said directly "before joining the institute". It is normal for someone to make modifications, but try not to use something that is ambiguous before and after the modification. I also hope that the author can give explanations in the comment area of ​​some special terms, or specify the person who explains them, so that people who don't understand the monthly calculation can understand them more easily. Finally, it can be seen that the author is actually a newcomer (I also had these shortcomings when I wrote before, and I was not satisfied after self-examination several times, so I deleted all my manuscripts in a fit of anger). I can give you affirmation and encouragement, and hope that the author can write better and better.

It's a good book, but the plot seems to be too fast, and the combat power is a bit chaotic but not to the point of collapse. It's obvious that he is an experienced monthly planner.

A good book. There are not many books in Yueji. This one can be considered a good fanfic. However, there are some problems. The plot jumps a bit. Each part of the plot is slightly short. Readers may not understand it carefully before entering the next part. As for the issue of combat power, considering Sister Hong's setting, always play small. The blame is indeed not good, and it can be seen that the author is trying hard to prevent the battle strength from collapsing. In short, I hope the author can write this book better and better, and not become a brainless article. Finally, the author will update it soon, tnnd I finished it in less than one night, how can I live without you updating it [please read carefully]

The current look and feel of the article is probably that of a novice. The author's handling of details and some foreshadowing planning are currently lacking. Overall, the sense of perception is good (that is, the first 50 chapters I have seen so far have no fatal poisonous points. In addition, the author is also very positive, so I praised it. For the SO book, the plot is three points, the novelty +1, and the author +1, so the overall five stars [laughs]

Not bad, worth joining.

Although I am not a very qualified monthly accountant, I am a bit cloudy, but it does not prevent it from looking good. Five-star praise (≧∇≦)❤️❤️💝💘💗💛💚💙🧡 💕🍩🍫🍿🍦🥧🍰🎂🍮🍬🍭🍺🥛🍪🥨🥟🍻🍼☕️🍔🍟🍳🥓🥩🥞🍤 🍕🥫🥘🥗🥙🍟🍔🌭🥪🍖🥚🍝🌮🌯🍥🍣🍱🍛🍙🍘I'm grabbing something to eat on the way

(When I read the closing remarks, I don't know why, but I remembered the joy of the prisoner when he beat the devil (l... (I don't know how to fight))) (Anyway, it's pretty good. I watched most of it elsewhere.)

It is recommended that the author put: or month meter: in the front lobe of the book to facilitate book readers to check the book. This is how I read books myself.

It's okay, but I feel that Angela, Shao and Sister Hong are a bit weak. Maybe it's because I think they are too strong.