White Jade

Let's talk about it briefly. The disadvantages are the following two points: First, the author's writing style is not very good (but it is better than mine). As this is the author's debut novel, it is not too harsh. Second, there are too many typos, and I often miss a word or a short sentence. There was even an error where the main character's name was wrong for an entire chapter. The advantages are the following three points: First, the author's updates are quite stable (updates are only added after 15 comments). It can be said that adding updates is free of charge (free of charge is happiness). Second, the plot concept is quite good. Although yandere literature is everywhere these days, the author's entire be literature is different from other yandere literature. Third, the author is just a blank sheet of paper. What does this mean? This shows that the author's growth is difficult to estimate. Because it is a blank piece of paper, you can quickly learn the advantages of other texts and improve yourself. Finally, author, you don't want me to give you a 5-star rating 5 times, right? [Shy][Shy] @ Let me explain here that this is the author's debut novel, so there is no need to be too harsh. I feel I should retract my criticism of the shortcomings cited by the author. The author's writing style is much better later on (how can I say it before? It's not very good-looking, mainly because the words "shuo" and "dao" remind me of my composition inexplicably, which makes people not want to read it). It's very good when it comes to strength later on. The typos and omissions have also improved a lot. It's okay to be abusive. (I want to see blood flowing like a river) I want to see Bai Yu kill Gu Nan, and I want to see Bai Yu succeed in his revenge. (Of course, this is just a thought, and it does not mean that the author must write it this way) The ending of the yandere novel Be is so beautiful. (Of course, it also depends on the category. If the author writes sweet stories about sick girls, it means healing, not depression. If the ending is be, then you can consider sending some razors to the author) Finally, let me make it clear that if this book is popular, I am the veteran. If this book is not popular, I am still the veteran. (I have military training on the 15th, so I can't go home for a week, and I can't read the book. I'm sad) Come on, author, don't stop updating.

Wow wow wow what a great author likes it

This book is indeed quite good. It's great that a new author can write it like this. I feel that the male protagonist is too miserable. I hope the author can work harder.

Big cheers for the author! The subject matter is very novel, and many of the sentences are beautifully written! [Love][Like]

In response to that sentence, human desire is like a rolling stone on a high mountain. Once it starts, it can never be stopped. It starts because of desire and ends because of desire. There is no position to speak of.

Female video? [Holds face] After watching it, I realized that I had entered the wrong room. It was uncomfortable to watch from a male perspective. Thank you for your hard work. Come on!

The author remembers to go to the Shuhuang Circle to promote books.

Why is no one reading such a good book? The author can try writing about yandere (next book)

It's good-looking. It's rare that it's not a yandere from Mei Zhai. It surpasses most yandere stories.

The regrets that went round and round were finally resolved with gentleness. Bai Yu's forgiveness and Gu Nan's redemption made all the missed and hurt come to an end. After reading it, my heart was filled with warmth. It is a happy ending that can heal all the difficulties! [Cry]