Did the Immortal Sect's Number One Ice Beauty Hide My Swaddling Clothes?

It is indeed a very good book! The author writes very carefully❤️Come on [laughter]

The writing is very detailed and good, but it is a bit too detailed. I feel that some descriptions can be simplified appropriately. There is also a question, will there be a mother-son relationship later? I have never read this type of novel 😳

It's a very good emotional portrayal, and the writing is excellent. It's a rare work in Western countries. It's currently in its seedling stage. The plot design is slightly flawed, but overall it's still excellent. However, the track is still too bt. I always feel that it is difficult to survive this book to the end. Authors with such strong writing skills are quite rare in Tomato. I have read a book about elves before. The writing style is okay, the plot design, and the character portrayal reveal a mindless human-machine feeling from the beginning to the end. She abuses people simply for the sake of abuse. In contrast, although the process of the heroine's identity transformation in this book is not smooth, it is at least reasonable. Every logical thinking has traces to follow. It is a "brainy" book. I'm not sure if it's a cool article at the moment. I feel like the author wouldn't be able to write such a white article with his writing skills. However, the mother-child article is still exaggerated. I feel like the limitations of the platform have come into play. When can I see it in the moderators [Chigua]

The plot is very detailed and not what you can see in Tomato now. It is more like the traditional fantasy novels I read 7 or 8 years ago, but it is a bit too detailed. You can cut out some unnecessary details and environment descriptions. The setting is very good and highly recommended.

Although the theme of mother and child is not a moral theme, the author has a strong grasp of the plot. Although the character description and storyline are suspected of being exaggerated, overall it is still flawless. Moreover, in the subsequent plot, the author's writing power is soaring to the naked eye. The characters are three-dimensional and the plot has ups and downs. It is no exaggeration to say that this is the most valuable scene in Tomato.

The setting is quite novel, just wait for the filial piety to deteriorate, but it should not be given on Tomato. You can also write about pure love between mother and child. After all, there is no law that stipulates that novels must write about love and love.

The plot is okay. The relationship between mother and child is a major highlight of this book. The descriptions of the environment and facial expressions are very detailed, or rather too detailed, a bit too detailed. These descriptions account for at least half of the word count so far. It would be nice if it could be shorter.

I dare not give high marks because I am afraid that the book will be gone. Overall, the writing is pretty good, there are no serious loopholes in the plot, and the author's attitude is also very good. However, the male protagonist, a time traveler, is too naive and has no character characteristics. It is recommended to patch it up. There is also some stiffness in describing the psychology of dialogue between characters, especially in some big occasions and when there are many characters. Also, this book will definitely revolve around the male and female protagonists. I believe that most readers are here for this, so I hope to continue to improve the description and production methods of the emotions between the male and female protagonists.

The quality is so high that it far exceeds the average level of Tomato and even the starting point. Will demons from outside the world come to Tomato to preach?

It can be seen from the article and introduction that the child is his own flesh and blood. But it can be seen in the introduction that the heroine's own child died in the mirror world in the first chapter. Later in the second chapter, the heroine saved her child (the hero) again. Later, it seems that the child lacked the memory in the mirror and was accepted by the heroine as an apprentice. Later, the child confessed to the master (her own mother 😅) and the heroine told her child (male protagonist) everything 😂. It was good. I will give it five stars first.