After Faking My Death, Why Have They All Turned into Yanderes and Come After Me?

I originally thought it was a mindless pursuit of husbands and the crematorium. After watching it for a while, it seems that it is not that. So far, I personally think it is quite good. The heroine is also well portrayed. However, at the beginning, I felt that the background was not very complete. For example, in the original Destiny Child, the undescribed heroines regretted it inexplicably. It was a bit too fast. Overall, it is very good to watch. 😋

I want to be realistic. There is no problem with the subject matter of the author's book, but there are other problems, including the protagonist's character, the structure of the entire book, and the logic of the whole book. The problems are not small, and it is difficult to achieve a good result. The author can use this book to test the water and polish it, and gain momentum for his next work (of course, if the author wrote it out of interest, just pretend I didn't say anything). I have read many books with similar themes. Compared with other books of the same type, this book does not have very outstanding advantages. On the contrary, it will attract bad comments from some people. I sincerely hope that the author can consider it carefully and wish the author a successful career🙏

In terms of setting, the four female protagonists will correspond to every part of the male protagonist who seizes the body, thus foreshadowing the subsequent encounters. Generally speaking, it is a new style, but I personally have two points. First, I still like to see how ambiguous each female protagonist is with the male protagonist. The Shura field can be appropriately increased. After all, the scene between two yanderes or multiple yanderes is quite good, even if it is an ordinary form of internal fighting, hhhh. Secondly, I would like to put more details on body movements. After all, when reading yandere novels, the desire for possession and seizing one's body is indispensable. You can also incorporate more connections between the male protagonist and the other four female protagonists (even if it is included in the original text, I think it can be written more [smirk])

It's so good. The plot feels a bit like a witch novel I've read before [Thinking] It's not fast enough [Crying]

It is also possible to add some first-person authors to give a more sense of substitution. For example, at the end of the second chapter, Yue Qing said it would be better to change it to me, because this is what the character said, and there is no need to use the third person. Yue Qing said that Yue Qing looked like this and there was no sense of substitution. It would be better to say Yue Qing: I can't wait. And the end of Chapter 3

Why do you feel like the plot is the same as The Witch Next Door?

It's beautiful, I really like it. More love to see [like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] It seems to be the novel Chasing the Husband's Crematorium. Two heroines died. I don't know when those heroines will die.

This kind of mysterious plot was actually written by a human being. I couldn't fall asleep while listening to the book at night, not because it was very interesting, but because the next plot always made me get up and turn on my phone to watch it again to confirm that it was something that a human could come up with.

Good! The author takes advantage of this, unlike other authors who have to write that the male protagonist has to pull a lot of strings before accepting the female protagonist [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The writing is very delicate, especially the portrayal of Miss Elf. The first few chapters may be hard to watch, but as you go on, the author's portrayal of the characters gets better and better. "The redemption of the yandere myself is also the redemption of the male protagonist's past." I hope the author can give a happy ending, keep up the good work