After Faking My Death, Why Have They All Turned into Yanderes and Come After Me?

I initially thought it would be a mindless, angsty romance about a woman chasing her husband, but after watching for a while, it seems that's not the case. So far, I personally think it's pretty good, and the female lead is well-developed. The only downside is that the background information wasn't fully established at the beginning; for example, the female lead's supposed "chosen one" status…

I want to be realistic. The subject matter of this book itself isn't problematic, but it has other issues, including the protagonist's character design, the overall structure, and the logical flow, among others. These problems are significant, making it difficult to achieve good results.

In terms of the setting, each of the four female protagonists will possess a part of the male protagonist, thus foreshadowing their subsequent encounters. Overall, it's a new style, but I personally have two points to make. First, I still enjoy seeing how ambiguous the relationship is between each female lead and the male lead.

It's good! The plot feels a bit like a witch novel I read before 🤔 Updates should be faster, I can't get enough! 😢

Adding occasional first-person narration is acceptable for authors, as it enhances the sense of immersion. For example, at the end of Chapter Two, Yueqing says, "Why not change it to 'I'?" Because it's a character's line, not a third-person statement. Instead of saying "Yueqing says Yueqing," it lacks immersion. A better approach would be "Yueqing: I can't wait!" And the end of Chapter 3

The plot feels similar to The Witch Next Door.

It's beautiful, I really like it. I love watching it even more! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 It seems to be from the novel "Chasing Your Husband to the Crematorium." Two female protagonists died; I wonder when the other female protagonists died.

This kind of mysterious plot is actually written by a human. Listening to audiobooks at night keeps me awake, not because they're so good, but because the next part of the plot always makes me wake up, check my phone, and reread it to confirm that a human could come up with it.

Great! The author is quite clever, unlike other authors who have to write stories where the male lead drags through a lot of trouble before accepting the female lead. 😄😄😄

The writing is very delicate, especially the portrayal of the elf girl. The first few chapters might be difficult to read, but the author's character development improves significantly as the story progresses. "The redemption of the yandere is also a way for the male protagonist to make amends for his past." I hope the author can give it a happy ending. Keep up the good work!