I Clung to a Powerful Patron, and Everyone Thought I Was His Wife

It's okay, but the downside is that there are a lot of things that are not clearly written, and the relationship suddenly develops by leaps and bounds, and it feels like a big part is missing [something]. Most parts are expressed in words. It is recommended to write more about the protagonist's mental journey to overdo it (no malice, it's okay if you don't listen). He Xun got the idea very quickly. After knowing that it was a mistake, he kept chasing Jiang Ming. The contrast between his personality before and after was huge [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. At first, Jiang Ming was friendly with He Xun, so she was carefree, but then she started to run away when she found out that He Xun was plotting against him. Of course, he didn't succeed but was taken down by the big bad wolf [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]. What can be said is that this book has a lot of room for improvement and many areas need to be improved. I've finished reading it, don't say I'm talking nonsense [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

Very nice... This is my final bottom line, because there are too few. If the author writes about the two of them in a more detailed way, I will... Heeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheehee~👉👌

The plot is very good. The aloof persona of Gong is gone forever, and he is heading in the direction of being like a clingy puppy. I look forward to the sweet life together. Deputy CP, please add some firepower and let me see your sweet life as soon as possible. I look forward to [love]

It's a bit exaggerated. The plot feels like a lot of foreshadowing was written at the beginning, but then it suddenly ended. . Moreover, I have almost been writing about the mission to investigate the alien beasts, and I have not explained what exactly caused the alien beasts to come out and become restless. If this plot was well written, I feel that it could be 300,000 words long. There was also the foreshadowing of an earthquake when everyone went to the rescue together. I thought I would explain the reasons why the alien beasts came out earlier, but it didn't happen. I just came up with this plot out of nowhere as I thought about it. The emotional line is also a bit baffling. Anyway, looking at it, I feel like I am falling in love with you. But Shou was not interested in Gong, but Shou suddenly became interested in Gong again, and no longer resisted those intimate behaviors. It's strange to see them together again. The setting is very interesting, and it is also relatively short. If you want to read a bedtime cookie, you can give it a try. If the author is a novice writer, he is actually quite talented. If you carefully practice the plot and emotional lines, this will be a very good book.

This is my first whistleblower. It's quite good-looking. I think the small drawback is that there is very little inner description of the two people, and the emotional transformation is a bit strange. There is not enough detail in the writing. Of course it's true, it's really, really beautiful! Like! Come on, madam! The writing is really good, but the details must be perfected, and there are some holes that feel like they haven't been filled in yet. Well, the above are all my own opinions. If you don't like it, I'll delete it.

The characters are well created, and the characters in it are all vividly written. I always had questions when I first watched it. After all, the protagonist traveled through the past alive, and there are many family and friends in real life. However, after reading it later, I felt that it was best to stay with He Xun. The extra story also tells about returning to modern times, which can give me an understanding of that world. Overall, it is good.

It's really beautiful! ! ! It's also very funny, the characters are all very good, there are no disgusting supporting characters, overall it's great, but there are so few updates, more more more more [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I read it all at once, it was very interesting. The main text was finished off guard. I felt a little unclear about the strange beasts. The extras are also very interesting. Zhou Yan's deputy CP is also super awesome. Baozi 99 (♡>𖥦<)/♥

It's a super interesting story about Shao Xiang, but his sudden ending caught me off guard. I thought there would be a gradual upgrading process later on, but it ended up with a side story. However, the side story was really good, but the story felt a bit short. But overall it's still very nice, I like it

It's great, but it feels a little short. I think it ended just after the climax of the story. Both Gong and Shou were very talkative. It was quickly made clear whether they were younger brothers or wives. Gong and Shou's feelings for each other were very clear and they didn't delay. Like it! In the early stage, Shou's personality was a bit young, but he was originally like this (squeamish?). After getting familiar with the battle, he immediately became arrogant and favored. I think some people in Duan Ping were surprised by this, but it was quite normal. In the original world, Shou was originally a young master, and then it was the spiritual body and matching of two people. What about the black tiger and the colorful bird? . It's very cute. I originally thought there would be a plot where two people go to the battlefield to save the world together. It's actually not bad, but the ending is still a little sudden. In the end, the age difference is 7 years, right? Have a great year! I hope the two babies will live in this world for a long time. I also thank the author for bringing such an excellent work. Hehehe [Thinking] The setting really pokes me. Come on, boss.