A word of advice: Be careful about eating gossip you find lying around. Bai Jili uses a soul-transmigration experience to show you what “gossip with caution, or a crash can ruin your life” really means!!!
Bai Jili is the direct heir to a family of traditional Chinese medicine practitioners. His father is an acclaimed master of Chinese medicine, and his mother is at the very top of the medicinal cuisine world, with wellness dishes so sought-after that even a fortune can't buy them. After earning his master's degree, he could have stayed at the family clinic, taking pulses, prescribing medicine, and experimenting with medicinal cuisine as he enjoyed a peaceful, health-conscious life. Instead, he got caught up in some street-corner gossip.
That day, after leaving the clinic, he came across three men arguing in the street. Curiosity got the better of him, and he stopped to watch. The more he listened, the more engrossed he became, until a delivery rider, just as caught up in the gossip, knocked him down with his bike. The back of his head slammed hard against the curb.
When he opened his eyes again, his soul had transmigrated to the interstellar age. He was now an F-rank guide, the lowest rank, with no spirit form, stranded on a wasteland planet with an appallingly harsh environment.
To survive, Bai Jili bet everything on applying for a job at the Black Tower, known as the “Sentinel Graveyard.” His job was to soothe sentinels whose levels of agitation had gone through the roof, the same sentinels that even SSS-rank guides couldn't handle.
There, Bai Jili met a whole host of sentinels with broad shoulders, slim waists, and long legs. Biceps, lats, pecs, abs... Good heavens, all he had to do was soothe some agitated sentinels. He could do that. He really could!!!
By examining, listening, questioning, and taking pulses, he'd find the cause. First, a massage and acupressure to calm the mind, then acupuncture to ease the pent-up tension, and finally medicinal cuisine to strengthen the body's foundations. What agitated sentinel? He could handle them in no time!
Highlights: One-on-one, both leads are each other's only partner | Older male lead and younger male lead | Interstellar sentinel-guide | Traditional Chinese medicine meets agitated interstellar sentinels | A powerful team
[Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it] As a differentiated dark horse in the interstellar sentinel track in recent years, the most eye-catching aspect of this work is that it uses the core setting of "Chinese Medicine to Treat Manic Sentinel", which directly breaks the solid narrative logic of similar works that have long relied on "hard spiritual guidance". Within the familiar framework of Sentinel, the entire system of traditional Chinese medicine's observation, hearing, asking, acupuncture, and medicinal diet is deeply bound to the Sentinel's manic and soothing mechanism in the interstellar worldview.
The protagonist, Bai Tribulus, is a direct descendant of a family of traditional Chinese medicine. After passing through his soul, he made a counterattack from the F-level guide at the bottom of Desolate Star and broke into the black tower of the "Sentinel Cemetery". The 1v1 double love line with the powerful sentinels in the black tower advanced in a relaxed and natural way. There was no industrial saccharine forced on the whole process (it is plot-oriented). Overall, it follows a light and relaxing line, relying on hard-core Chinese medicine methods to deal with the manic sentinels who are helpless even to SSS-level guides. Famous scenes such as the sentinels collectively soaking their feet, all members practicing Tai Chi, and the detection of breast hyperplasia of the sentinels are full of funny moments.
The focus of the current plot is almost entirely on the daily diagnosis and treatment inside the Black Tower. The background information such as the overall interstellar environment and the deep origin of Sentinel's mania is relatively shallow, and the depth of the world view is slightly lacking. The protagonist's transition from acquaintance to revealing his feelings is short, and the details of some emotional progressions are not fully laid out, and the character arcs of many supporting characters have not been fully developed. On the whole, it is a highly complete and differentiated novel. In the highly homogeneous online writing field, it has achieved its own recognition with its unique setting and relaxed narrative. (Just because the author promotes the cultural inheritance of traditional Chinese medicine is worthy of five-star praise (*≧∪≦)👍🏻)
Not bad. The setting is quite good, and this type of book is very enjoyable to read. But my writing power is a bit weak, and my writing is a bit indifferent. The content is not something that ordinary people can write. I don't know if it is correct, but when I look at it, it feels very professional because I can't understand it at all. Either it is a major from AI or the author is studying this, and what he has learned is so solid and awesome. It makes me want to study Chinese medicine. In addition, the protagonist is half charming, has great love, is frank and sincere. But it really feels like a karma brain. The first time I saw Gong, I had a nosebleed, and then I thought about sweet love every day. If you change the gender, it doesn't feel out of place to watch it as a BG. Isn't it good for sweet love to happen naturally? You have to make the little guide look like he can't live without a man. Seriously, how many days have he had enough to eat? I don't hate cp, but this hard-written industrial sugar is really hard to beat. But overall it still looks good. The emotional line is just a matter of my personal preference. There are definitely sisters who like this type of thing. It's just a comment, everyone expresses his or her own opinion. Hope you don't mind. It's still pretty good-looking, otherwise it wouldn't be tied in one go. Come on, author.
The subject matter is quite good, and the writing is okay, but the rhythm is a bit unsmooth. Sometimes it progresses very quickly, and sometimes some irrelevant details appear repeatedly, and the same sentence is repeated in the two paragraphs before and after. Logically speaking, the part that should be fun, the process of treating patients and saving people, quickly became a group favorite and a national treasure. There was no more communication and stories with real people, but instead I wrote a lot of setting, ideas, and conceptual content. Although I know that I may continue to write about treating patients and saving people in the future, but after all, there are only a few hundred thousand words at the moment, so I feel that it is not exciting enough. I stopped before treating a few people and wrote tens of thousands of words of other content. Also, the protagonist's emotional line is too sudden, and it is very lazy to use the love at first sight setting of falling in love with the appearance at one glance. This is also common, but later it is written that the protagonist feels that he is a perfect match for the other person, and the other person will be his person sooner or later. How can I put it, it feels a bit male-female, not that he is not worthy, but this idea is a bit low-key.
But overall it's still worth reading. I pick so many thorns because I feel I could write better. Come on, come on.
Overall, it's pretty good-looking. The first part is relatively new and I haven't seen it look good before. But after the Chinese medicine technology is exposed, the plot direction can be predicted. It feels like the direction of the scientific research group. Then there are guides or sentries who come out as villains to stir up trouble. I don't believe it to create conflict, and then the protagonist It was proved that Chinese medicine is useful, but it was snatched up by major scientific research institutes or other things. Then the protagonist shared Chinese medicine on Star Network. Everyone lamented that it was not hidden, and then some people licked it and couldn't read it anymore. The career line is like this, and the emotional drama can be seen at a glance [face covering]. The writing style is okay, and it is quite comfortable to watch. Some parts of the logic are taken for granted, such as the part where the protagonist is very convinced that Chinese medicine can help the sentinels relieve their mental stress. Of course, the biggest problem is that the rhythm is not very good, and the cool points come out too early.
The writing so far is very good and fascinating. Different from the general whistle-blowing articles, the mental counseling in this article is based on traditional Chinese medicine. It uses the theoretical knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine to talk about how to treat mental riots and how to treat them. It is really interesting. The writing is also very fluent. There is no vernacular or embarrassing writing. The author should have checked it carefully. There are many and solid theories in it, or he is a student of traditional Chinese medicine. I give it a thumbs up. It would be great if it could be updated to 6,000 words a day [shy]. Not many people read it now, so it should be because the number of words is too small. Generally speaking, the first A page of tweets should have about 150,000 words, and it would be around 20,000 or 300,000 words. The author needs to work harder to write more words to get traffic. The number of words is still too few to recommend. I can find it because I usually like to read this type of content, so I will recommend it to me. People who have not been in contact with it may not be able to see it.
Come on, author, don't stop updating, you write very well [Add one to the bookshelf][Already planted][The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food]
The subject matter is very novel, the overall feeling is good, and Xiaobai is also very cute. It just uses words to repeat, such as slowly, slowly (this word appears three or four times in Chapter 41 alone), steady, steady, full, full. There are too many idioms (I marked nearly eighty in Chapter 41, maybe it's because I understand idioms too broadly). The description relies too much on idioms, the narrative is straightforward and lacks focus, but the plot is bland and heartwarming (maybe just for now), and the treatment process is a bit complicated and lengthy. The language features of the character dialogue are relatively simple, and I can't tell much about the character's personality, but the character design is still good. The above are my feelings after reading Chapter 41 so far.
Come on, little author, you are my first author to post a book review [KISS]
Overall, it's pretty good-looking. The setting of traditional Chinese medicine combined with interstellar whistle directions in the opening chapter is particularly novel. I've rarely seen this kind of imagination before. The protagonist's use of acupuncture and medicinal food to calm the Sentinel's manic mood is very interesting. The emotional lines of the two-way healing of the two male protagonists are clean and delicate, and the 1v1 mode of the two men is very comfortable to read.
Qi Sili, please go home [crazy] Don't use Yiyou
Overall, it's a good story. It's a slow-paced writing. I like the gentle style of telling stories. Personal highlight. From time to time, the protagonist gets emotional and hugs the person next to him. If his sexual orientation is of the opposite sex, from the perspective of the same gender, he is a good sister or brother. There is nothing embarrassing about hugging, but judging from the description, every time the protagonist hugs someone, both he and the person being hugged will blush and be embarrassed😅. Because their sexual orientation is same-sex, just like at work, girls hug boys from time to time, or boys hug girls from time to time, or hug different people. Then this boy or girl has someone he likes.
The plot connects smoothly, the characters are very attractive, and the logic is quite logical. However, there is a section in the middle that sounds a bit awkward because I don't know if it was taken from a medical book. It sounds like an old-fashioned niche. Forget about being a civil servant in the army. Why do soldiers go to war and speak in a polite manner? Hahaha.
[Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it] As a differentiated dark horse in the interstellar sentinel track in recent years, the most eye-catching aspect of this work is that it uses the core setting of "Chinese Medicine to Treat Manic Sentinel", which directly breaks the solid narrative logic of similar works that have long relied on "hard spiritual guidance". Within the familiar framework of Sentinel, the entire system of traditional Chinese medicine's observation, hearing, asking, acupuncture, and medicinal diet is deeply bound to the Sentinel's manic and soothing mechanism in the interstellar worldview. The protagonist, Bai Tribulus, is a direct descendant of a family of traditional Chinese medicine. After passing through his soul, he made a counterattack from the F-level guide at the bottom of Desolate Star and broke into the black tower of the "Sentinel Cemetery". The 1v1 double love line with the powerful sentinels in the black tower advanced in a relaxed and natural way. There was no industrial saccharine forced on the whole process (it is plot-oriented). Overall, it follows a light and relaxing line, relying on hard-core Chinese medicine methods to deal with the manic sentinels who are helpless even to SSS-level guides. Famous scenes such as the sentinels collectively soaking their feet, all members practicing Tai Chi, and the detection of breast hyperplasia of the sentinels are full of funny moments. The focus of the current plot is almost entirely on the daily diagnosis and treatment inside the Black Tower. The background information such as the overall interstellar environment and the deep origin of Sentinel's mania is relatively shallow, and the depth of the world view is slightly lacking. The protagonist's transition from acquaintance to revealing his feelings is short, and the details of some emotional progressions are not fully laid out, and the character arcs of many supporting characters have not been fully developed. On the whole, it is a highly complete and differentiated novel. In the highly homogeneous online writing field, it has achieved its own recognition with its unique setting and relaxed narrative. (Just because the author promotes the cultural inheritance of traditional Chinese medicine is worthy of five-star praise (*≧∪≦)👍🏻)
Not bad. The setting is quite good, and this type of book is very enjoyable to read. But my writing power is a bit weak, and my writing is a bit indifferent. The content is not something that ordinary people can write. I don't know if it is correct, but when I look at it, it feels very professional because I can't understand it at all. Either it is a major from AI or the author is studying this, and what he has learned is so solid and awesome. It makes me want to study Chinese medicine. In addition, the protagonist is half charming, has great love, is frank and sincere. But it really feels like a karma brain. The first time I saw Gong, I had a nosebleed, and then I thought about sweet love every day. If you change the gender, it doesn't feel out of place to watch it as a BG. Isn't it good for sweet love to happen naturally? You have to make the little guide look like he can't live without a man. Seriously, how many days have he had enough to eat? I don't hate cp, but this hard-written industrial sugar is really hard to beat. But overall it still looks good. The emotional line is just a matter of my personal preference. There are definitely sisters who like this type of thing. It's just a comment, everyone expresses his or her own opinion. Hope you don't mind. It's still pretty good-looking, otherwise it wouldn't be tied in one go. Come on, author.
The subject matter is quite good, and the writing is okay, but the rhythm is a bit unsmooth. Sometimes it progresses very quickly, and sometimes some irrelevant details appear repeatedly, and the same sentence is repeated in the two paragraphs before and after. Logically speaking, the part that should be fun, the process of treating patients and saving people, quickly became a group favorite and a national treasure. There was no more communication and stories with real people, but instead I wrote a lot of setting, ideas, and conceptual content. Although I know that I may continue to write about treating patients and saving people in the future, but after all, there are only a few hundred thousand words at the moment, so I feel that it is not exciting enough. I stopped before treating a few people and wrote tens of thousands of words of other content. Also, the protagonist's emotional line is too sudden, and it is very lazy to use the love at first sight setting of falling in love with the appearance at one glance. This is also common, but later it is written that the protagonist feels that he is a perfect match for the other person, and the other person will be his person sooner or later. How can I put it, it feels a bit male-female, not that he is not worthy, but this idea is a bit low-key. But overall it's still worth reading. I pick so many thorns because I feel I could write better. Come on, come on.
Overall, it's pretty good-looking. The first part is relatively new and I haven't seen it look good before. But after the Chinese medicine technology is exposed, the plot direction can be predicted. It feels like the direction of the scientific research group. Then there are guides or sentries who come out as villains to stir up trouble. I don't believe it to create conflict, and then the protagonist It was proved that Chinese medicine is useful, but it was snatched up by major scientific research institutes or other things. Then the protagonist shared Chinese medicine on Star Network. Everyone lamented that it was not hidden, and then some people licked it and couldn't read it anymore. The career line is like this, and the emotional drama can be seen at a glance [face covering]. The writing style is okay, and it is quite comfortable to watch. Some parts of the logic are taken for granted, such as the part where the protagonist is very convinced that Chinese medicine can help the sentinels relieve their mental stress. Of course, the biggest problem is that the rhythm is not very good, and the cool points come out too early.
The writing so far is very good and fascinating. Different from the general whistle-blowing articles, the mental counseling in this article is based on traditional Chinese medicine. It uses the theoretical knowledge of traditional Chinese medicine to talk about how to treat mental riots and how to treat them. It is really interesting. The writing is also very fluent. There is no vernacular or embarrassing writing. The author should have checked it carefully. There are many and solid theories in it, or he is a student of traditional Chinese medicine. I give it a thumbs up. It would be great if it could be updated to 6,000 words a day [shy]. Not many people read it now, so it should be because the number of words is too small. Generally speaking, the first A page of tweets should have about 150,000 words, and it would be around 20,000 or 300,000 words. The author needs to work harder to write more words to get traffic. The number of words is still too few to recommend. I can find it because I usually like to read this type of content, so I will recommend it to me. People who have not been in contact with it may not be able to see it. Come on, author, don't stop updating, you write very well [Add one to the bookshelf][Already planted][The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food]
The subject matter is very novel, the overall feeling is good, and Xiaobai is also very cute. It just uses words to repeat, such as slowly, slowly (this word appears three or four times in Chapter 41 alone), steady, steady, full, full. There are too many idioms (I marked nearly eighty in Chapter 41, maybe it's because I understand idioms too broadly). The description relies too much on idioms, the narrative is straightforward and lacks focus, but the plot is bland and heartwarming (maybe just for now), and the treatment process is a bit complicated and lengthy. The language features of the character dialogue are relatively simple, and I can't tell much about the character's personality, but the character design is still good. The above are my feelings after reading Chapter 41 so far. Come on, little author, you are my first author to post a book review [KISS]
Overall, it's pretty good-looking. The setting of traditional Chinese medicine combined with interstellar whistle directions in the opening chapter is particularly novel. I've rarely seen this kind of imagination before. The protagonist's use of acupuncture and medicinal food to calm the Sentinel's manic mood is very interesting. The emotional lines of the two-way healing of the two male protagonists are clean and delicate, and the 1v1 mode of the two men is very comfortable to read.
Qi Sili, please go home [crazy] Don't use Yiyou
Overall, it's a good story. It's a slow-paced writing. I like the gentle style of telling stories. Personal highlight. From time to time, the protagonist gets emotional and hugs the person next to him. If his sexual orientation is of the opposite sex, from the perspective of the same gender, he is a good sister or brother. There is nothing embarrassing about hugging, but judging from the description, every time the protagonist hugs someone, both he and the person being hugged will blush and be embarrassed😅. Because their sexual orientation is same-sex, just like at work, girls hug boys from time to time, or boys hug girls from time to time, or hug different people. Then this boy or girl has someone he likes.
The plot connects smoothly, the characters are very attractive, and the logic is quite logical. However, there is a section in the middle that sounds a bit awkward because I don't know if it was taken from a medical book. It sounds like an old-fashioned niche. Forget about being a civil servant in the army. Why do soldiers go to war and speak in a polite manner? Hahaha.