An Inventor in Another World: A Bratty Girl Wants to Kidnap Me

How to say it? The writing is pretty good, but some parts may not be to my liking. Maybe the author can publish it on a different platform. For me, the Japanese light flavor is too strong. Whether it is the plot design or the writing style, it has a Japanese and Western fantasy style, but maybe it is also for this reason. There are many poisonous points: for example, the protagonist is obviously very awesome, but he is forced to suppress his strength, and the protagonist's strength cannot rise, which is against the sky; and the dragon lady is a bit incomprehensible. , Old-fashioned misunderstandings (I really want to say it here, isn't the protagonist very smart? He couldn't even guess the identity of the dragon lady earlier, and it looked very retarded, and it was very awkward before he recognized it. If the plot was changed to the male protagonist recognizing it, then this can be said to be some strange play, but he didn't recognize it, and it would be very uncomfortable to watch), suppression. . . At present, this book feels promising, but I can't stand it. . . Maybe it's just because I don't have an appetite. The author's writing is quite good. Come on

The theme is okay, and the part about stir-cracking the little ghost is satisfactory. However, it looks good so far. I just feel that the overall rhythm is too fast. There are too many words in the previous part to reflect the arrogance of the villain and the arrogant little ghost. The article mainly describes the protagonist. This kind of redundant text will become anti-customer-oriented, which will make the effect of suppressing first and then promoting become too much, making the cool points burst and recycle. The effect of weakening will make people feel that it is not satisfying enough. Including the protagonist being defeated and not being reversed within one chapter will weaken the special element of the protagonist. If it is not enough, fewer people will read it. I hope the author has time to try to change the previous article to reduce the description of the villain and add more descriptions of the state of the female imp after the protagonist stirs up the female imp. At the same time, I wish the author's novels will get better and better [Sending Hearts]

Chapter 16 is about Se Se, and it has to be you [laughing evilly]

The story is okay, but the pacing in the middle of the story is too slow and indulgent. Although I know she will definitely become the heroine in the future, it really brings down the rating. Fortunately, the plot at the end saves it, so I give it 8 points.

The plot is okay, but don't spend too much time on the supporting characters. For example, A clearly wants to kill the protagonist B. B has been frustrated for several chapters, and just thought he was satisfied, in the next chapter you say how miserable A is. At present, it is confirmed that it is the harem, a younger sister, a female imp princess, the emperor's giant r attendant, and a little dragon girl. The younger sister may be the main palace. It is not ruled out that the female imp and the little dragon girl steal the house. After all, the female imp is the first one to hit the base [laughter]

Super invincible. . The top western fantasy hero novel. It emphasizes love and justice. Although it is a harem, the emotional lines of each heroine are well described. It's so good to watch, and it can also help you think about the brainstorming between the hero and the villain. The foreshadowing laid is also quite good. So pretty. It can be regarded as the second best-looking western fantasy novel I have read so far [cool]. Why is the rating so low? The writing is really very beautiful. If you ask me, it would be around 9.5 Points. I read it in one sitting. There are very few novels that I can finish reading in one sitting [Like][Like][Like] Shennong, who didn't know why after watching it for thirty or forty minutes, started to comment. Let me tell you, at first it seemed like a revenge novel, but later on it turned out to be all kinds of conspiracies and the people behind it started playing tricks on their brains. He didn't pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger. The male protagonist in the first half is indeed not strong in terms of physical strength, but he just barely has the world's most powerful prop master and most talented magician written on his face. And the hard power was quickly strengthened. It's really not the kind of mindless and cool article, it's written quite logically. No matter how good a novel is, you should read it yourself and don't leave a stereotype based on other people's words. It's really pretty, and I didn't find anything bad about it. Although it has multiple female protagonists, the emotions are portrayed well. I really hope everyone will check it out and read a few more chapters. It's been a long time since I've read a novel like this in one sitting. I don't want a good novel to be covered in dust [crying]. Moreover, if you sort by the latest comments, most of them have just been read and have given good reviews. And those who gave it very low marks, most of them watched it for thirty or forty minutes and gave him a bad definition very early. [Top post]

This work only lacks an opportunity It is a Japanese light novel that is not fully Chineseized. You will see the male protagonist Asashi who is not very powerful but is a theoretical genius, as well as the supporting characters who generally have low intelligence. Watch the male protagonist play with these fools with normal intelligence. His sister is caught, and then he sings and dances all the way to save her sister, as well as the Riddler and the yandere who cannot speak human words. For those who are used to reading Chinese online novels, it is a unique torturing experience. (After all, there are many plot designs in it that are contrary to mainstream concepts. For example, the male protagonist does not pay much attention to his own strength, so the early plot is about people who have not been able to save before, and now they have to find strength to save them.) The most difficult thing to accept is that the author, in order to be able to freely write the plot, has a very vague setting of the male protagonist's combat power. It's the kind of thing where the author makes him strong if he wants him to be strong, and makes him weak if he wants him to be weak.

It's a pretty good book. The protagonist has a "despicable" and "sinister" personality and is good at planning. I quite like it. The emotional line is okay, just so-so. It's just that the plot feels a bit strange. According to the previous development, shouldn't the male protagonist develop his strength like crazy? Why is it still lv2 at the end? Looking at it from the front, I felt like I wanted to kill him immediately. My sister is still in dire straits over there, but in the second volume, the elderly care office meeting begins, and all kinds of girls are recruited? It's okay to read a different world romance light novel, but other things are not so good.

I have only read fifty chapters, so I will say one thing. I will not comment on the chapters that I have not read. I will just say that the quality of the first fifty chapters is definitely the best among Western fantasy novels. There are not many people commenting now, so the rating is not high. In my mind, I have at least a 9.1-9.4 Rating. However, it seems that the ratings of harem works on this website are generally not high. I predict that the future ratings will be stable around 9.1. I have read all the latest chapters so far. Although the writing in the later plots is not as polished as the previous plots due to the daily update of 3 chapters, it still does not have a bad habit of crazy word count. One plot is basically finished in one or two chapters and then moves on to the next plot. And it can be seen that the author has made a very detailed outline before writing the book. Whether the plot has logic and whether a detailed outline has been made can often be seen after writing a book. Rating: 9.4 Points for the first 100 chapters, 9.1-9.2 Points for the last 170 chapters

Please... Please... Please, I... I still want to read, give me one more chapter... Just one, I can't help it. Half a chapter... Even half a chapter is fine. Please give me more... Please give me a chapter.