An Inventor in Another World: A Bratty Girl Wants to Kidnap Me

Well, it's not badly written, but some parts just don't suit my taste. Maybe the author could publish it on a different platform. For me, the Japanese light novel vibe is too strong, both in plot design and writing style. It has a strong Japanese Western fantasy style, but perhaps because of this, there are quite a few flaws: for example, the protagonist is clearly incredibly powerful, but his…

The subject matter is good, and the scene of the female demon being roasted is satisfying. Overall, it's not bad, but the pacing feels a bit fast. There's too much text in the beginning to emphasize the villain's arrogance and the female demon's swagger.

Chapter 16 already has some slutty moments, and it has to be you! 😏

The story is alright, but the pacing was too slow and indulgent when writing about the dragon girl in the middle. Although I knew she would eventually become the female lead, it really lowered the score. Fortunately, the later plot saved it, so I give it 8 points.

The plot is fine, but don't spend too much time on supporting characters. For example, A clearly wants to kill the protagonist B, and B suffers for several chapters, just when you think they've had their fill, the next chapter shows how miserable A is. It's currently confirmed to be a harem: a younger sister, a female princess, the princess's large-breasted follower, and a little dragon girl.

Absolutely amazing! A top-tier Western fantasy hero novel. Loyal and righteous, although it's a harem novel, the romantic relationships of each female lead are very well-developed. It's so good, and it even makes you think about the mental battles between the male lead and the antagonist. The foreshadowing is also well done. It's so good!

This work is just missing a catalyst. This is a Japanese light novel that's not entirely adapted for Chinese audiences. You'll see a kind-hearted male protagonist who's physically weak but a theoretical genius, along with a cast of generally low-IQ supporting characters. Watch the protagonist, with his normal human intelligence, outwit these idiots in their battles of wits.

It's a pretty good book. The protagonist is "despicable" and "insidious," and good at scheming, which I quite like. The romance is alright too, nothing special. The plot felt a bit strange. Given the initial setup, shouldn't the male protagonist be frantically developing his strength? Why is he still only level 2 at the end?

Having only read fifty chapters, to be fair, without commenting on the unread chapters, the first fifty chapters are absolutely top-notch in the Western fantasy genre. The low rating due to fewer reviews is a strong point; in my opinion, it deserves at least 9.1-9.4.

Please... Please... Please, I... I want to read more, just one more chapter... Just one more chapter, I can't hold back anymore. Half a chapter... Even half a chapter will do, please... Please give me another chapter!