I Have a Stand, Yet I Pretend to Be an Onmyoji in Tokyo

I have seen the latest chapter. There are some poisonous points, whether it is the Dianzhongdian helping others department or the iceberg poisonous tongue minister. However, the plot is not so protracted and you can just skip it. After reading the whole story, it is still acceptable and I can give it an eight points. The protagonist's use of weather is quite novel. He went directly into the eye of a typhoon. He really knows nothing about electricity, and he flew like a brick with pure force. My personal suggestion is that you can add some bold settings in the later stage. It would also be interesting to add some unpopular urban legends and weirdness. There are too few good novels about stand-ins. The author hastened to update them. There are not enough!

Soon Generally speaking, my favorite of the characters created by the author (except for the male protagonist) is Shiraishi. Although he has a vicious tongue at first, he later turns out to be arrogant and very protective of the protagonist. The author's writing is not bad. It can be said that he is more arrogant than arrogant [licking the screen] (in my personal opinion) But what makes me feel uncomfortable is the character named Chinatsu, who has no sense of proportion (this is really annoying). I am now reading the latest chapter. Three people came to visit the protagonist together. (The author said that it was Chinatsu who found out that the two were coming to visit the protagonist, and then insisted on coming together.) Then as soon as Shimizu and Chinatsu entered the door, they ran to the protagonist's bedroom and rummaged through things. (This Point, the author actually portrayed it very well. You can deeply understand the protagonist's indifference to her, the imbecility and lack of sense of this hot girl [awkward laugh]) This hot girl was saved by the protagonist from the hands of the monster, but it gives the impression that the two people are in a dominant position, and vice versa (maybe the author just wanted to write it like this, and then highlight the powerlessness of this hot girl that makes the protagonist 😄) In short, except for this character, which is a little bit toxic, I think everything else is okay (self-opinion, don't criticize, but I really hate this character 🤦) Finally, I have written it anyway. I hope that the author can use Shiraishi as the main character to describe the heroine (she gives me a really good impression), and slowly marginalize the character of Chinatsu. Oh, of course, you don't need to accept my suggestion. I just want to express my feelings. [Send my heart] Finally, come on, the author. I still like the stand-in to fight monsters and do some daily work. I will also read it in the future. Come on [sending my heart]

I feel like the protagonist could be more mature

It's okay, but this seems to be a harem. I originally thought it would be the type where Shiraishi is the single female protagonist, and then there are other female characters and single arrow protagonists, but when I looked at it, I found out that it was a pure multi-girl drama, with four girls already liking the protagonist. ... I can't stand many female protagonists. Can anyone recommend me a novel that has a single female protagonist, and the protagonist's setting is similar to the one in this novel (appears to be an ordinary male protagonist, but is actually an Onmyoji magician who eradicates evil)?

I saw a soil spider for the time being, even though I knew there might be a soil spider, and someone else saw a big white spider web. I didn't say it was dangerous to run away, but I wanted to lose the last 1% of the summoning value. It's a code within a code. It was said earlier that a tall person will be able to stand up if the sky falls.

Well, it's a very good book. It has a few innocuous problems. The plot is great and makes up for it. It doesn't overwhelm the fighting spirit. It's fun when it's fun. It's restrained when it's time to restrain itself. The pacing is very good. The characters are well drawn. The plot is not that abrupt. So far, it's very good.

There are many traditional comprehensive comic settings, such as the iron-clad Yukino and the cute characters Jing, but this book has traditional advantages, but does not have traditional shortcomings. It does not overwhelm combat power, and does not accept commissions inexplicably. It is just a bit lacking. I read other comments. The main negative comments are about the male protagonist's shyness and combat power. The first impression is mainly about the genre. This novel is relatively Japanese-oriented. In Japanese novels, the male protagonist's character is already relatively tough, which is normal. The Japanese male protagonist in this kind of novel can make you mad to death. In light novels, the combat system is already very rigorous😅. I can't say that the author understands this system very well. At least he is a normal fan. At least he followed the second part to the fourth part. The author had better quickly add a Japanese light novel label.

Not bad, but some places still have a bit of an AI flavor. For example, in order to make up the number of words in the general AI spoken language, there will be a lot of humanized pronunciation, such as "gaoaojiner" and the like, but normal people will not add it in writing, and there are also very AI sentence patterns such as "almost xx xx"

I don't think the substitute should be too strong. He should be injured when he should be injured, and he should be defeated when he should be defeated. Let's do some mind-suppression battle again. It will be more interesting to use some combat IQ and some Jojo songs and Jojo quotes. And I don't think there should be too many substitutes, otherwise it will look complicated and messy. The main thing is that the protagonist cannot be too strong. It would be boring to crush him all the way. After all, there is no absolutely powerful substitute. Only the ultimate technique. 😎😎😎😎😎

The plot is good, and the character of the protagonist is also to my liking. It would be better if I could play Su Nuo.