I Just Turned Eighteen and Inherited a Witch Organization!

The background is quite reasonable, but the author writes the characters, and when there are too many people and too many dialogues, it becomes difficult to tell who is who. The personal pronouns change back and forth, and while the pronouns keep changing, even the dialogue doesn't say who said it, it's all up to you to guess. Actually it's not impossible to guess, but as mentioned before, personal pronouns keep changing. And it's not like you say one thing and I say another. It may be that the first two sentences were said by a, and the last sentence was said by b, and suddenly it was a who spoke again. So the characters have a headache when they talk a lot, and they have to read it over and over several times before they can figure out who said which sentence. Oh, I almost forgot, there is a sticker on the work label, so will the protagonist change permanently in the future? Can it be within a hundred chapters? Or is it actually a male protagonist?

It's very nice. It's not someone who got to a high position and then retired and then came back because of his sister. But it's a pity that I came early, there are only fifty or sixty chapters, and I finished reading it in a few hours. Can the author give three updates? Two updates are too few and not enough to read [crying]. It's not too late to add two updates after a hundred chapters.

Not bad, it's pretty good-looking and has a good setting.

Finish writing it, if you can completely turn the protagonist into a girl

I feel like this setting is pretty good and worth a look.

Quick update, so pretty

It's a good-looking story about a group of mentally ill people saving the world.

Very nice, I don't know what to comment on.