I Stopped Acting Human, and Threw the Entire Ninja World into Chaos

It's very interesting, it really made me laugh. The protagonist is really Liu, and Nanao is also led into this character by the protagonist [face covering] I heard that it is a single female protagonist Ye Cang. Now it seems that it is quite interesting, not bad. The timeline is indeed a bit controversial. After all, the original work is full of bugs, but the author's handling is still very reasonable and beautiful. It's rare to find a Naruto story that is both funny and logically logical, and its combat power is not that bad. At least it can keep me reading.

This lao Liu is acting like a lao liu, the writing is good and delicate, and the imagination is enriched (the funny attribute needs to be improved, it should be shorter/more detailed, and you can feel the funny kind in one or two sentences), it is already on this path. If the male protagonist improves his martial arts/ninjutsu/bloodline limit/summoned beasts, he can evolve to a higher level, and there is no need to do so much (it must have his own characteristics, not to mention abnormality, just evolve what is available in Naruto, for example: Magneto evolves into Magneto, and repulsion and gravity are both within the scope of Magneto). To add a bit of passion, after all, they are all readers with flesh and blood and living emotions (all the joys, sorrows and joys must be arranged) I can see the "boring" feeling coming up in the later period.

It's very funny and interesting, but it's a bit overwhelming for the protagonist's fighting ability. Later, I changed my review when I encountered some bad points. I couldn't stand it anymore and deducted one star [eating melon] It's a bit poisonous, it's forced to subdue one's wits, and the behavior is inconsistent with the character…and there are a lot of typos, so keep reading…The writing in Chapter 43 is too stiff, and the thoughts are a bit polished. It's getting better and better, which is good. In addition, the author's attitude is quite good, but the word "water" is a bit harsh. . Please review the manuscript carefully and polish the quality. Don't be too hasty in updating. I have persisted until now just because I am interested in this book.

Okay, it's quite relaxing to watch. There aren't so many plots and plots, and there's no outrageous golden finger of being in the Super Movie on the 7th or being the Sixth Path in January. The character of the protagonist is also good. I've seen a lot of fan fiction where the protagonist is either a Chao Xiong brother or Long Aotian. Suddenly watching the old six protagonists is quite relaxing.

Not bad 👍. So far, the protagonist has not looked like a pig when he sees a girl. His fighting ability is OK and he can run and fight. The most important thing is that there is no sign of a harem. The less emotional drama, the better. [You taste carefully]

It feels okay now that I see it, but the main character is no longer a coward, and doesn't have any normal fights. He writes a lot of ninjutsu, but doesn't use it at all. The battles are mainly funny. You can add more normal fights. There are too many funny ones. It's generally okay. It's very interesting. Good luck to the author [Sending heartfelt wishes] After reading so much, I think it's okay. The main thing is that the protagonist can be cheap, but not too much, and the speed must be controlled well. At present, it seems that there is only one female protagonist. I am a local dog, and I like the single female protagonist. I also want to give my opinion on the protagonist's attack methods. The protagonist's Crystal Release can turn the water dragon bullet into crystal, Water Prison + Crystal Release; there is also a crystal powder that grows after touching an object. Adding the scale powder of the Nanao to the powder, I feel that these two skills should be able to do it, and then the author, come on, it looks good, I love to watch it (The Nanao is a bit too rubbish, and the attack methods are too few, I feel that it can be strengthened. Anyway, Naruto does not depict these tailed beasts much) [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] (By the way, it must be a single heroine, don't force me to beg you [Send heart])

This is the best Naruto fan fiction I have read in recent years [you carefully taste][you fine taste][you fine taste]

I have seen the best writing among all the Naruto fanfics. At least the protagonist's combat power is not suppressed at the beginning. Not to mention defeating the invincible opponent in the world, at least the flying thunder god escapes. At the beginning, the Nanao becomes a Jinchūriki. There is no plot where everyone looks down on him wherever he goes and then gets slapped in the face like crazy.

I personally like this book quite a bit. It is a book with mainly humorous themes. It is very funny with its characters including the God of Thunder and the God of Thunder. However, there are some parts that I personally don't like very much, such as the combat power. The protagonist has little combat experience, such as using his fingers to punch Raikai, such as consuming a lot of chakra to release large-scale ninjutsu with little effect. Then I feel a bit frustrated about some situations. For example, Danzo in Konoha F4 died very late, and the plot didn't torture Danzo very much (as for the explanation of the curse skill of tomorrow, it was just mentioned briefly, which made me feel angry). Mito and Koharu are also alive and well. The protagonist was bullied and basically didn't retaliate too harshly. For example, Kumogakure snatched the protagonist's daughter, and the protagonist just went to Kumogakure to rob the caravan to get money, etc.

The logic is clear, there are no obvious poisonous points, the writing is okay, and the plot is quite interesting. The only thing that fails is that it may be because it is a new book. When I read it, there were not many short reviews, and it lost a lot of fun [rolls eyes]