The Starved: A Second Chance at Fate

"Don't Liang know that dreams and reality are opposite? In other words, Liang will always remember Mansui, and Liang will always remember to love Sui'er." "We will always be together." I really couldn't hold it any longer, I just cried to death

First of all, the fighting scenes are impeccable. In terms of plot, the sudden appearance of extra chapters and the setting of meeting each other in different endings will make the plot a bit confusing, and the biggest point (for me personally) is that there are too many characters. However, it is not bad to have a few confrontations with each other. Yan and Li are equivalent to another version of Liang Sui. The snake king is introduced and they are also introduced. Huang Yu is not so well written and can only be regarded as a transitional role, but it also inspired Shi Hu. As for Liang Sui, my personal feeling after reading it is that the relationship between the two is still unclear. For example, Sui's illness, she was hungry for so long when she was a child, but after a few years, she was interrogated for a few days and it ended like this? (Maybe I didn't watch carefully). During the fight, Suidu encouraged Liang like that, but Liang still didn't dare to express his feelings for Sui. (If I missed it, please help me add it.) After reading it, I think it can be used as the first fanfic to read (there is a sword at the end, but it is a bit rushed)

First the five-star review, and then some small suggestions (the premise of my post is that I want to see this book reach its normal conclusion, and I definitely have no intention of teaching the author to write articles). Since it is a fanfic, and it is a magical modification of the original plot, it is better not to completely deviate from the original work. The changes must be made, but not in such a way that the original work is not seen at all. For example, Hungry Death itself is fictional History, it's absolutely fine to add a bit of Chinese fantasy to the fanfic, if you like to read it, but don't write about how you've started cultivating immortals, technology has soared, just, you've changed it too much (I'm not talking about this article, I'm talking about some other articles that are almost cool, at least this one is still being updated), if you read it for a long time, you will forget that you are reading the Hungry Death fanfic, the novelty will be over, and the data will soon decline. It's better to try to see some shadows of the original work, whether it's plot or emotion. All in all, I quite like the subject matter and writing style. Come on, author (

I've read half of it and the writing is okay, but some parts are not explained clearly enough, and there are some problems such as logic and repeated language expressions. If you are a new author, I hope you will get better as you write.

Tongsheng has seen a lot of ruthlessness, this is very refreshing.

At first glance, I thought there was a knife, but I was relieved when I saw the ending. No knife, high sugar. The plot has ups and downs, and Liang Ye is not as stupid as the original, and it heals the injured soul.

There are a lot of times of worshiping gods, but the plot is not mentioned. I have read a few starving death novels, and this is the only one that makes me nervous about Ryoho's future (thanks to the author's extreme cartoons [laughing]) The plot is quite eye-catching.

It's really novel and embarrassing to think that Yangzhou will be reborn in ten days' time [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Give yourself a five-star [star] Finished with flowers [love]

Love to read, this is one of the best stories about death by hunger and rebirth that I have read [Blow a kiss]