Just Back in Konoha, I Found My Whole Clan Gone

Yes, although the protagonist does not know the plot, he has his own way to become stronger. At present, it is Sage mode plus Eternal Kaleidoscope. He has his own thinking, and the timing of returning to the village is also very clever. There are no cliche plots written in the early stages of Naruto when he tortured Zabuza, and he did not miss the wonderful episode of Orochimaru returning to the village. As long as he keeps updating, he should become a masterpiece among Naruto fans.

I just discovered the book today, and I immediately caught up with it. It's really well written. The current plot is roughly divided into four stages: investigating the truth about the genocide → exposing Danzo/completely disappointed with the shinobi village system → joining the Akatsuki → turning to the industrial revolution. The plots related to Shikamaru are really well written. It's hard to imagine that these are high-quality content that can be seen in Naruto fandoms. The male protagonist is calm and calm when faced with the situation. He was not overwhelmed by anger when he learned that the Uchiha clan was exterminated. He slowly arranged everything while investigating the truth step by step. The relationship with other Konoha ninjas is also handled very well. The male protagonist does not favor anyone and has taken care of most of the original protagonists. The early transitional plot makes people very comfortable. In the middle period, the male protagonist gradually understood the truth. After being fully prepared, he was ready to deal with Danzo. He also respected Sasuke's opinion and allowed Sasuke to make his own choice. In the end, the two of them defected together. In the later period (currently speaking, in the later period), he joined Akatsuki and Nagato to explore technology and develop in Amegakure Village. Scorpion became the technical director to build tanks, fearing that Scorpion would have to drive a Gundam later. At the same time, through Shikamaru's perspective in Konoha, the story of the ordinary people at the bottom was shown, allowing Shikamaru to gradually discover on his own the fact that the village had been "eating people." It is already foreseeable that the major ninja villages will end up betraying their relatives and leaving their relatives, and everyone will join the male protagonist one after another. It really made me so happy that I couldn't help myself. I beg the author to update it quickly. It's completely unsatisfactory [crying] It's a happy ending, but it's a pity that the last part of the plot is a bit too rushed.

I am a time traveler, but I have never watched Naruto. It's an Uchiha, but he avoided the night of genocide, Sasuke didn't follow Orochimaru, and Sakura even learned earth escape. I think this subject is very interesting. Good luck to the author, I'm optimistic about you!

The visuals are quite good, and the description of the protagonist's character is also good. It's not that dark and incomplete. The plot is handled very smoothly. It doesn't deviate too much from the original work, but it also writes something of its own. The powerful description of the protagonist is just right, and it's not bad at all. I also prefer the relationship between the protagonist and the protagonist, who is both a teacher and a friend. I don't like the dark flow very much, but the author doesn't describe it too much. Anyway, Danzo will definitely be killed later [Thoughts] I hope to keep up the good work and work hard to update more [laughing]

It's not bad for now, but there is one thing. I hope the protagonist has his own opinion. He is a time traveler, and he must not be a dog under any circumstances. Although this novel does not have the plot of being a dog, but don't let poison later [send heart] The plot became a bit unsightly later on, and Shikamaru felt like he had been outwitted. It's more than just wisdom! Shikamaru has simply turned into a clear-eyed college student who was deceived by others, sold around and counted money for others [vomit][vomit][vomit]

It's beautiful and well written, especially the description of Shikamaru's psychological transformation. It's not just a cool story. It focuses more on the description of the character's psychology. Most of the plots show the character's personality and the transformation of the character. (I don't understand. The volume written by Shikamaru is obviously very good. But many people can't read it without reading the protagonist. Haven't you read enough stories where the protagonist is crazy and cheats and defeats everything?) (There are also some things that reflect reality and involve class and capital. And so on) (and he really has not forgotten the core. The darkness of Konoha and the mistakes of the ninja world. They are all designed and corrected with great efforts, and they do not just stop at the pain and pleasure of the Uchiha being exterminated. This is actually better than Kishimoto. Originally, Nagato Kishimoto pursued peace, and Obito pursued Tsukiko-eye. They were just hoping that there would be no war, but in fact they were ruined in the end. After Naruto became Hokage, these issues were still unresolved, and Mingmei's approach was similar to that of the first generation.) It can only be said that his rating is much lower than the quality he actually displayed. The actual quality displayed can at least give a score of about 9.5. In my opinion, 8:00 is more of a cool novel with some logic and battle scenes, but this book completely exceeds the quality of 8:00.

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and I have not seen such a pure fanfic for a long time. The main character incarnates in the plot, and it looks the same with or without you.

Don't brag, this book is really good. Currently, I don't think it has any bad points. The characters and Naruto plot are very good. The setting is also a well-founded extension and it won't be too abrupt. However, the updates are too Buddhist-style. It is fixed at 1:00 and 2:00 every day, which is really too little. It's a bit unfinished

Hmm... How to put it, given my personality, I like long reviews, so this article is worthy of my long review. I have read many Naruto fan adaptations, and this one can be said to be the best in my mind. The protagonist is time travel, but I haven't read enough of the original work. This is a highlight. After all, the second version of Naruto is basically about time travel and having read enough of the original work, and planning and development according to the original plot. But what's different about this article is that the protagonist doesn't know what will happen in the future plot, which gives me a sense of refreshment when watching it, because he doesn't know what will happen next, who is the BOSS behind the scenes, and all the plans are like a mud bodhisattva crossing the river, one step at a time, that's the only way to achieve success, and it is also in line with the major thing the protagonist wants to do, to unify the ninja world, which is not easy to do. If he knows the future plot development and has watched the original Naruto, maybe there will be a change in thinking. And it's not fun either. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] The way the protagonist Yelan handles the problem, and is very determined, even ruthless, about the genocide of Uchiha, I won't go into the specific content, but the author's attitude towards Konoha is not good, and the protagonist does not have a particularly favorable impression of Konoha like most second-generation characters. This is the charm of the original plot, because I have not seen it, so the protagonist's treatment of Konoha completely depends on how Konoha treats him. My favorite plot here is Yelan's teaching to Sasuke, his decisiveness to kill Danzo, Orochimaru's changed person, changing his name to Mi, refusing to admit that he is still the original Orochimaru, and his confession of his ideals after the battle with Hashirama, and Hashirama here is not a silly and sweet image! ! ! They directly sealed Tobirama [note] [note]. The most important thing is the plot the protagonist set for Shikamaru, which turned the brain trust flat. I like this plot. It can be said that it shows a large part of the ugliness of Konoha. [Cool][Cool][Cool] I think the author's handling of characters is okay. Characters I haven't had much contact with conform to my stereotypes, such as Naruto, Tobirama, F4... Overall, it's pretty good. Don't worry, there will be a little more plot in Konoha in the early stage. In the later stage, the main characters Sakura and Hinata Tenten appear less, and the ones who appear the most are Shikamaru's team. Hmm, it's almost 750 words. I hope it will be helpful to other people's reading [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua][Learned][Learned] I have my own personal thoughts, and if you have any additional information, please see my reply below. Gee, I feel like I can't stand the rest of it. The plot tends to be uniform and a bit boring, and the protagonist is already considered invincible.

This book is really a masterpiece among Tomato fanfics. The character logic and three-dimensionality are very strong, and the reduction of force value is a genius. The only flaw is that the world view is a little immature. The author has not fully checked the setting of Naruto. Apart from making some jokes, there is no problem. The highlight is the creation of the protagonist. It is too complete. If a modern person comes to the ninja world, it is extremely logical to do these things if you are more conservative. The character motivation is extremely accurate. If the protagonist himself is a radical, just do it directly The transitional revolution has been completed, and the conditions for the Ninja World are fully met. How to implement it in detail still needs to be studied. However, the Ninja World is half-employed, semi-feudal, class-based and has a solid social structure. Basically, it is easy to understand [Like] [Like] [Like], the author keeps working hard, this kind of Good writing is so rare in the fandom field. Firstly, writing about fanfics is so stuck in the original work that it is difficult to make a good plot. Secondly, writing about fanfics has a narrow audience and is not profitable. Thirdly, Naruto's values ​​are too low-key. It's hard for you to endure nausea and make the plot so exciting.