Honkai: Star Rail: Miss Herta, Please Marry Me

It is indeed rare to have a single heroine in The Dark Tower. I hope it can surpass Pumpkin God of War [laughter]

It smells so good, I love it! The Black Tower is a good civilization (๑•̀ㅂ•́)ﾉ➹♡

(After watching it for half a month, I found that I haven't rated it yet, so I'm going to give it a review.) Let me talk about the conclusion first. The writing is very good, and the plot development is not too dull. The relationship development rhythm of Heita and Lu Yan is quite tight, which is very suitable for those who like to watch the emotional line as the main theme. (I think many people are looking for a similar book after reading Tomato's other completed Dark Tower masterpiece (at least I am). This book is also the most popular among the Dark Tower fans, but I don't think this book is very similar to that one. The little plot in the early stage will give people a sense of familiarity, or I am subjectively looking for similarities) In short, in terms of style, this book may not be that artistic, but it is still quite interesting. On the emotional line, the two can't figure it out, and they are confused about such an unexpected and destined encounter (but I believe the author will give it a good ending [I'm about to cry]) In terms of love, I would like to give you some suggestions [laughs]. It feels a bit too daily, and this is not the daily life of Heita and Lu Yan. It seems to be a daily life that is almost incompatible. I know that the author is stacking buffs for the setbacks that the protagonist will receive later, but the push is a bit slow and the end cannot be seen. I believe that such a smart author will definitely get up and get passionate later, and then contact Heita to promote feelings. Before that, either add a sense of crisis that will come at any time, or use more emotional lines between Heita and Lu Yan to color it (readers may also like to read it more? Anyway, I am) (It's over, I wrote so much to make up for the rating, annoying)

The world is a mess, but there is still a clean and bright moon waiting silently in your sky. It turns out that this is love!

Come on, come on, this is Tomato's second solo release, Heitawen.

The structure is rigorous and the plot is logical. The author should be a qualified knifeman. If you like twists and turns, you can read it. The above are the advantages of this book. What follows are my subjective thoughts. Likewise, this book lacks interest. The author is good at writing with a story that first develops and then suppresses. Whenever the plot is about to reach an exciting point, the author will stop. It makes people frown while watching the plot behind it. This leads to a very poor overall impression, because I personally feel that a book can make you unhappy, but you cannot give hope first and then step on it, because it is no different from training a dog. Of course, this is a personal opinion, and everything is subject to your own perception. As for why I gave it a favorable review even though my personal impression of it was so bad, it's because crimes other than war are not a problem with the novel. Maybe it's because I don't like this genre. Because the quality of this book is not a big problem. At least in tomatoes.

So far, I like it very much, and the character design is not ruined [laughing] But, can you please don't kill me? Now I am scared, for fear that the knife buried between the lines before will suddenly attack me [crying] Also, come on, the author, I hope you can become the next Pumpkin God of War🥳🥳🥳, he wrote "Capture the Black Tower, or Be Captured by Her" I think it can be made a god. And the book you wrote, the author, is vaguely on par with him🥳 It can be said to be the two best books among the Dark Tower fanfics I have read [Like]

It's different from most other Beng Tie plots [Chigua] [Chigua]. It's not yet following the main plot. Ms. Black Tower is still so fascinating [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's very interesting, but it's too short. I want to keep it for a while, but I'm afraid I'll kill it by reading it! I can only read his two short chapters every day, wow wow wow, can the author add one more chapter? [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

The plot is quite immersive, a good Black Tower novel. I hope that the author will not forget his original intention, be firm in his own ideas, and insert some interesting side stories about the Black Tower and Lu Yan into the main plot. Finally, I hope that the author's writing ability will soar and write better novels. [Praise]