Help! I'm Surrounded by Demon Sect Fairies!

This is the only novel I've read this year that feels fresh. It's the same as the game at the beginning. I still like the little fox. Among so many women, I think the first heroine, if it were me, would think the little fox is the best. It's just a personal opinion. I thought it would be the same as the beginning, but I didn't expect that I would be so confused at the end [face covering]. At first, I just wanted to keep waiting and jump to watch the little fox, but... I won't say so much. Is there any novel with the same tsundere-like character as the little fox? Can you recommend it to all my good brothers?

It's so beautiful, the author's writing style is so good, it is indeed a template for re from scratch, a story about a lustful and mediocre male protagonist who relies on death to become stronger and may be able to win a beautiful woman. I skipped through two major modules. The first one was a sadistic master who was probably a stand-in. The second one was a tool that cut off love and would be discarded after use. The third one was just an unreliable fun-loving person who was sent as an undercover agent to the orthodox sect to survive a narrow escape. It made me feel really sad to watch it. It was indeed exposed in disguise. Why would a heroine who is so real and powerful in the world of immortality choose a good-for-nothing male protagonist, die a few more times, be tortured a few more times, and let her will, strength, and mind reach the top to become the harem king? As a reader, I would be convinced. After all, I have read too many Shuangzhu stories and there are too many male protagonists called Brother Zhu.

I've watched more than half of it, and I'm quite fascinated. There are obvious foreshadowings in many places. I feel that the dragon girl and the fox in the back are more like the main wife. The master is too abnormal, and they are used as tools for the protagonist. They have almost no emotional foundation. They can choose to abandon it directly after getting along. It can only be said that it has written the normal situation of ordinary people traveling to the world of cultivating immortals. It is very real. There are not so many Long Aotian plots, and some are more about their own hard work and the intrigues between people. The score is indeed low, maybe because most people like to read cool books, and it is understandable. After all, it is true that this book feels a little stomach-ache, but it is just a little bit rough. I believe that the protagonist will definitely win the ending he wants. I hope the Dragon Girl will also have a good ending. She seems to know that the protagonist will always be reincarnated, waiting for him at the end, and has been waiting in the secret realm. "We Will Meet Again" has this feeling.

Let me talk about the objections first. The protagonist is forced to practice magic with modern thinking. He is slightly out of tune with the monks of his generation. He has a relatively small-town personality. He is very passive during the advancement of the story. He has little strength and no human rights. He is often dominated. The author will write the protagonist as a little succubus, but the emotions are very detailed. I don't know if it was written by a female author. Therefore, the protagonist is a person who is not decisive in killing and has little strength. He is drifting with destiny. Reading is a screening process. If you don't like this kind of thing, just read the comments and don't click in. Then I think the writing is very good. The protagonist of the story explores a world of immortality. After death, he will be reborn. He has experienced different things. It can also be said that he fell in love with different people, mixed with some factors of reincarnation. The character of the protagonist is very vivid, with many bad qualities of ordinary people. It is very real. It cannot be said that the protagonist of every novel is Fang Yuan. Personal opinion, five stars

This book is well written, and the heroine is quite distinctive. But the plot can be arranged more smoothly. For example, the master and senior sister in the front are obviously not as attractive as the little fox and the cold junior sister, because bipolar disorder and the test of character can easily kill the protagonist and it is not likeable. In addition, there are many reincarnation plots in this article. I hope that the protagonist's past life will not appear. What we want to do is to have the current protagonist travel to the past to do things to attract female characters.

Advantages Novel and unique story setting The novel skillfully combines various elements such as time travel, rebirth, magic cultivation, and love adventure to create a world full of fantasy and danger. The protagonist Chu Jun accidentally travels from modern society to the world of demonic trials. This strong contrast and novel setting instantly catch the readers' attention and arouse strong curiosity about the subsequent development. In plots such as life and death trials and fairies competing for apprentices, the story constantly throws out suspense and twists, keeping readers highly interested in reading and immersed in the protagonist's thrilling journey in this fantasy world. It greatly broadens the creative boundaries of fantasy novels and shows the author's rich imagination. Distinctive three-dimensional character creation The character creation is excellent. The protagonist Chu Jun's character changes delicately and naturally, from being initially timid and timid to becoming brave and decisive under the test of life and death. His inner struggle and growth are vividly displayed on the page, making it easy for readers to resonate with him. The fairies have distinct images, such as Mu Xinlian's domineering yandere, Ling Juexian's cold arrogance, Zhou Yunmei's charming and cunning, and Bai Xianxian's gentle and kind-heartedness. Not only do they outline their peerless looks through physical descriptions, but they also dig into their character traits from details such as speech and behavior, making the characters full and vivid. The overt and covert struggles among the fairies and the emotional entanglement with Chu Jun form a complex and diverse network of character relationships, which further enhances the layering and drama of the story, as if these characters are vividly presented to the readers. Strong emotional rendering and tension The depiction of emotional lines is a highlight of the novel, and the emotional conflicts and entanglements between Chu Jun and the fairies are gripping. His yearning for the beauty and powerful power of the fairies is in sharp contrast to his fear of unknown dangers. The inner conflict and struggle make readers empathize with him. The complex attitudes of the fairies towards Lord Chu include admiration, use, jealousy and other intertwined emotions, creating strong drama and emotional tension. During the reading process, readers will unconsciously worry about Chu Jun's emotional choices and become nervous about the emotional development between the characters. This enhances the appeal and readability of the story, making it easier for readers to immerse themselves in it and find it difficult to extricate themselves. Disadvantages Poor plot logic and coherence There are some logical flaws in some plots. For example, the mechanism of Chu Jun's multiple rebirths in the demonic trials is a bit stiff and lacks sufficient foreshadowing and explanation, which makes readers feel a little abrupt when accepting this setting. In addition, at some key plot turning points, such as when Chu Jun discovers that he will die if he does not choose Mu Xinlian, the logical basis behind it is not fully displayed, resulting in the plot development not being smooth and natural, which to a certain extent affects the readers' understanding and feeling of the overall coherence of the story, weakening the credibility and persuasiveness of the story. Lack of depth and content Although the novel has an ups and downs plot and vivid characters, it is slightly lacking in depth of thought and exploration of connotations. The story mainly focuses on the adventures and emotional entanglements of the protagonist. It does not explore some deep-seated themes in depth, such as the conflict of values ​​between the evil way and the righteous way, the philosophical thinking behind the character's growth, etc. It only stays on the surface and does not trigger readers' deeper thinking and insights. This makes the novel lacking in literary and ideological aspects, making it difficult to leave a more lasting and profound impression on readers. After reading, it may only leave a memory of the plot, but lacks enlightenment on life, society and other aspects. Language and literary talents need to be improved In terms of language expression, the novel as a whole is relatively plain and straightforward, with a slight lack of literary talent. There is less use of rhetorical techniques, and the descriptive sentences are not delicate and vivid enough. When describing the fantasy scenes of the magical world, the complex emotions of the characters, and the fierce battle scenes, it fails to make full use of infectious words and sentences to create an atmosphere and enhance the sense of the picture. This makes it difficult for readers to feel the strong visual impact and emotional resonance through the text during the reading process, which reduces the aesthetic experience of reading. For readers who pursue higher literariness, they may feel a little regretful.

If it can be continued, it must be very good. Why stop? The ending is too hasty, so many things are not filled in. It is a very good novel. Why do you have to do it like this? I feel really uncomfortable [crying]

Okay, okay, looks good! At first, I thought it was just going back and upgrading, but then I saw that the protagonist had returned to the beginning and still had a certain level of cultivation, and the plot suddenly became richer. The protagonist changes from a single thread to multiple threads and develops accordingly. This idea is really interesting. There is also an environment where tsundere never retreats, Nanzhu yyds

It's so beautiful, come in and take a look, especially the ending is perfect [smile]

The plot is really well designed and really interesting. I kept laughing after reading dozens of chapters. This ending, if you, the author, could have put a little more thought into it, you can't be more sloppy.