The Yin-Yang Creation Furnace

After reading it, the author is level 5 and has a completed work, but I still feel that the writing style is slightly green, many details are not in place, the story background cannot be developed well, the characters in the article are a bit lacking, and many supporting characters have a strong NPC feel! Overall, it can be seen that it is about 8 points, giving 4 stars.

I have listened to Chapter 390. It is very good. There is a lot of dialogue between the characters, which allows the voices of multiple characters to play their best role. There is no overwhelming threat or ridicule by the villain, nor is it aggrieved. It sounds very comfortable. There is also no villain who likes a certain heroine and then sends his younger brother to target him, himself, the elders, and the family. The speed of collecting the harem. In fact, I personally think it's okay. Although there are so many chapters, only two of them have a relationship, but the daily love scenes are very delicate, because it is not good to have too many harems, and the old one will not be able to appear at all. If the word count is slowly increased by the process of recruiting girls one after another, the method of advancing the plot is a bit low-end. The current progress is really good, don't speed up too much [smile]

After searching for a long time, I finally got the money. I have read 80 chapters so far. There is nothing poisonous, the plot is logical, and the emotional description is also delicate. I feel that this book is not the level that Tomato should be. I hope that it will be as amazing as the beginning [Learned] Pure Liu Bei in the back

The author has a good sense of lightning protection, and his writing style is okay in the first part, but gets better later on. He knows what he writes to attract readers. Emotional dramas, the author's writing style is good at writing emotional dramas! The master is very cute and gives more scenes, and the other female supporting characters also give more! It seems that the author has been attacked by his peers. A bunch of people gave this book one star if the reading time is less than 30 minutes. The author's writing is very good and non-toxic. If you like watching harem, please read it boldly. Okay, now let's look at the latest two chapters, which are very poisonous. The male villain captured three female protagonists, and he did something unknown after a period of time in between. It's very poisonous.

This is a pretty good fantasy harem novel. Let's talk about the advantages first: First of all, in terms of the plot, there are no particularly big surprises, and it is still a good read. It is a little suffocating before chapter 400 and after that, it is basically a good read, and the pace is medium to slow. Secondly, the character creation is relatively good. The heroines are all more distinct and outstanding, and the speed of adding new heroines is also more appropriate. Furthermore, the author updates very quickly and is very comfortable. Let's talk about the shortcomings: First of all, in terms of plot, although it is a harem story, as of about chapter 760, the female protagonists who have relationships with the male protagonist are basically either forced, poisoned by love, or take advantage of the situation. Although a few of them develop normal relationships, it feels a bit strange, as most of the female protagonists are patients with Stockholm Syndrome. Secondly, there is a title scam. The things in the introduction are basically like a certain master's instant noodles, for reference only. All in all, this is a pretty good fantasy harem novel, and it is highly recommended to read. If you are a reader who likes pure love harems, it is not recommended to read.

I have seen more than 200 pictures, and I feel very good. It is one of the few good articles that can be found in Tomato. However, I feel that the world view is quite large. The author will not be too unfinished 🤔🤔🤔

It's a pretty good book, hahaha, I recommend you to read it. The combat power may not be very good, but the emotional scenes are pretty good, and you can drive a car, and the villain is not particularly brainless. This is not a popular book, it should be rated 9.0 Or above, it's not dragging 😜

If you like a harem with a delicate and emotional heroine, you can check it out, it's still very good. The emotional line is much better than other harem stories in Tomato. I didn't eat the first one or two hundred. Later, I felt better and started eating a lot. The only bad thing is that the pressure on the protagonist's combat power is a bit harsh. But it doesn't matter to me. I don't take it very seriously. Just look at the emotional line After reading Tomato for so long, this book is currently the only book I give as a gift, even though it is free. The emotional line is really great!!! It is highly recommended to focus on the emotional line and the three-dimensional character of the heroine. If you don't really care about the emotional line or if you like fast-paced and unbeatable writing, forget about eating and you can abandon the book.

The writing style is excellent, and the characters are full and distinctive. The disadvantage is that the pace is very slow. It is still in the middle stage of Qi training after a hundred chapters, and the meat is also very slow. I only ate one piece of meat after two hundred chapters. It is a bit like reading a harem fantasy novel ten years ago.

The emotions of the novel are sincere, no longer like the hypocrisy of plagiarizing Internet articles. There is emotional analysis, which allows emotional novices to understand the meaning. Personally I think it looks good, I'm an emotional novice. Also, I feel that the theme of the novel is centered around the description of multiple female protagonists, looking at different styles of emotional stories.