In the Hehuan Sect, My Senior Sister Is So Aloof

If you're new here, just read Chapter 16 of Explosive Thunder. If you can accept it, read it. I don't understand that there can be an abusive master in Tomato. I'm actually looking forward to it before Chapter 16. I can only say that the author should work hard.

Save time: Before Chapter 37, I was a sadist, just skip it.

Not bad, more to my liking. But I still want to point out some problems. The first is that the protagonist is too weak. In other words, the protagonist always provokes some people over his own power, resulting in being beaten violently all the time, which is somewhat uncomfortable to watch. The second is that the emotional lines are very messy. The protagonist really just likes each one when he sees it, and likes it when he says he likes it. It is as simple as going to the toilet. A harem story must have some emotional foundation. The character design of the protagonist is average, neither positive nor negative, nor negative (generally speaking, the bottom line is very low and flexible). Of course, the above are just some personal opinions, please tolerate any mistakes. Finally, urge for more updates [laughs][please update]

Although I don't understand the author's logical explanation of the system, I still find it amazing. The protagonist does not have a perfect personality and invincible fighting power, but he looks more real. He will definitely look good when he grows up 😘 Looking forward to it. Jpg

Your writing style and opening technique seem familiar to me, but this kind of writing style is not very popular on Tomato. They all like to read cool articles, but keep it up, it's pretty good.

I think it's good and the plot is okay (maybe it's just for me). Everyone has their own tastes, so don't leave negative reviews to give others some encouragement. Just read a book if you don't like it, so just change it to the next one 💕

I'm going to write a great article. It's a novel routine and good writing style. I have a chance to get 9 points. No, I feel a little uncomfortable and need to be divided into installments

No, you tricked your brother into killing him [smiles]

It looks okay, but there are too few chapters. I can look forward to the future. Not bad, the character of the protagonist is also acceptable. The supporting characters are not reduced to that level and are pretty good anyway. After reading the book for many years, I think it is still very good and I can keep reading.

I feel that the reason for this low rating is because the first 40 chapters are too abusive and not satisfying, but the writing in the later chapters is okay. Later, he started to abuse the master again. If you can accept it, watch it. If you can't accept the abuse, give up as soon as possible.