Reborn in Another World: An Alchemical Doll’s Journey to Save Her Nation

The writing is very good. Compared with the author's previous books, it does not cause discomfort. I finally like a girl. It is really a twist to save the country. It is not easy. The slime in the previous book has become the protagonist of this book. It cannot be said that it is a bit similar [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Such an advanced mental state. It always shocked me when I first watched it. The setting of Xiao Nanliang [face covering] for both men and women is quite novel, but the emotional line is a bit slow. By the way, is it really okay for the author to open the third line?

It's really pretty good. The setting is very novel. After genetic modification, the animals become giant and become a walking city. The protagonist is a pink-haired little boy. And to be honest, there is too little nonsense, so you can't skip reading it. If you glance at it for a moment, you won't know what you missed.

I have been reading it one after another for nearly half a year, and this book is probably the one that I like the most among all the books in Tomato. In addition to the characteristics of men and women, what attracts me most about this book is the combination of technology and magic, and the coexistence of games and reality. This ridiculous and reasonable magic theory really pricks me. There is also a self-contained worldview that is not only grand as a whole, but also realistic enough in its details. Especially the hive part, it really gave me a feeling of a living world. Originally I just came here for men and women, but now what attracts me more is the world itself. This feeling of bringing the world to life is what I have always wanted. I have also written novels, but it has always been a pastime on paper and I have not yet submitted a manuscript. There's nothing I can do about it, this is what happens when you live on campus in your senior year of high school. I can feel how bad my writing is, but I learned something from the author. I used to have a headache how to distinguish objective narration, character dialogue, and psychological activities, so that readers can at least tell which sentences are in which form. Now it's much better. Say something else. When I read in the author's words that the author had a child, I felt a little bit disillusioned. I had always subconsciously thought that the author was also a little boy, but suddenly I saw that the author already had a child. It felt like an ordinary person suddenly learned that Wu Yun was actually a boy (what are the unauthorized expectations and unauthorized disappointments) (? Also, Laoqing! 😭Hey, it's sunny! 😭 Lao Qing, when will you be able to stand up? 😡 Even if it's just once in a druid's dream? 😭(Although the prerequisites are not met) Is it good to have a lifelong cp group? 😭Vadasi can do anything! I am willing to be fucked by Monica for three days and three nights! Okay, now that I'm done with my madness, let's talk about something else. Regarding the issue of Chu Nan and Shen He deleting content, has the author ever thought about posting some extras or good news on ao3 or 01bz? After all, human beings have three major desires: appetite, appetite, and sleep... It's okay even if you don't have anything snakey! I must update the novel! How can I live without you? 😭 What? Why am I only giving it a five-star review after watching it for half a year? I remember I already fought...😳 But I don't know why. Looking at it now, I can't see it. What? Why haven't I given a few gifts after watching it for half a year? Red bean paste private Marseille Hida! 😭 I will give you all my future gifts as compensation😭 (If senior high school students could go home and touch their mobile phones)

It's very good, the world view is great, the character and appearance of the protagonist are also very vivid, and the plot is also very rich, but there is one thing that is bad, why is it so short? Note: The protagonist has some tomboyish tendencies I'm reviewing it, I've been watching it for a long time, and there's nothing serious about it, (with pictures) 👍, the protagonist's IQ and appearance are online, there's nothing wrong with the logic… Also… why haven't the protagonist and the heroine met yet?

The content of the novel is very interesting, please keep updating the author. The pink-haired gay boy protagonist is really awesome. The little boy and girl protagonist.

The setting is novel, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, and the world view is huge, making it hard to put down. But such a perfect book has one fatal flaw - it is too short! ! ! Why should I discover this book with this word count! ! !

The world view is very attractive, the detailed settings are also very novel, and the mobile mechanical city is really interesting, but the plot is difficult to comment on. The rhythm is very strange and makes people uncomfortable watching it. It has the taste of a Japanese light novel. I have seen more than 200 pictures, but I still don't understand the character of the protagonist, and I can't figure out what genre I want to write. It's a bit like a group portrait, but it's all a harem, which is a weird group.

... It's good-looking, with a rich plot, and some unique settings are very interesting. As a reborn protagonist, he discovered that he is crooked in this life, which is actually not bad. The main thing is that the brave protagonist directly chose to knock down his brother, which made me feel a little, um... Quickly, as for why I said so much? In fact, I originally planned to draw points, but the number of words was not enough, and then I felt that this book lacked detailed description of the characters, and it was a bit difficult to think about. If it weren't for the cover, I couldn't imagine it except that I knew that the protagonist was a man and an elf with pink hair. This is the most uncomfortable point in my opinion [Thinking]

I've almost finished reading it. I like the character of the protagonist very much. The shortcoming is that sometimes the story line turns inexplicably and the fighting scenes are relatively long. I still like to write more teasing scenes. The time also passes too slowly. It took more than 100 chapters and only 7 days.