I’m a Tough Guy, Not Your Hachimi!

It's very interesting. I just suggest that the author give some changes to the plot of the younger sister. It's really hard to accept that you still bully your brother like this when you know that he has depression and is extremely mentally unhealthy [face covering], but it's very good to watch the daily life of the school now!

This is my first time writing a novel, I hope you all can support me! ! [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

What can I say after reading this? I went for the setting of the male protagonist. Let me tell you my own opinion. The main reason is that the setting of the male protagonist's depression is a bit fake and is basically not reflected in the male protagonist. The second is his sister and his parents. My parents give me a feeling of indifference. They don't care about the male protagonist at all. My mother pushed him away when he needed care. My father is a little better, but he is more like the male protagonist. A guest instead of a son. My sister, a college student, is a bit childish. When dealing with a patient with depression, she still focuses on her own feelings and does not care about the male protagonist. The most important thing is that the setting of the male protagonist's depression is basically not brought out. These are my opinions on this book. There is no malice. I am simply expressing my feelings and suggestions for reading. I hope the author can write better and better in the future [Blow kiss]

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It's good-looking, and the male lead is so cute, both in character and appearance. Unlike many men who look like men but are ordinary men at heart, little men should be thoughtful, shy and sensitive! I want to see more of the plot of becoming the favorite of the dormitory group [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The character setting of the male protagonist is really good, but the ending of the plot is a bit rushed. I really want a sweet little wife like the male protagonist who can't get pregnant [Sending my heart]

Damn, this sister is so annoying

My sister's situation is so bad

I have nothing to say. The characters in this novel are very three-dimensional, especially the emotional scenes between Xiaoyan and Xiaoyue at the end. When I read it, I seemed to have already substituted myself. I am Su Xueyan, and this fantasy setting is also very novel. From the scenes between the siblings at the beginning to the back and around the ice moon, to be honest, reading it in school really made me think about it all the time. In the end, I just want to say, why is the author so short? ! !

Update soon! My 23-year-old aunt likes to see this! You must still have manuscripts saved! Hand it over to me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !