Death Game: Citizens of the City of the Dying

The game and writing are good, but the pace is sometimes too slow. It is recommended that games of 10 or below be completed within ten chapters (as much as possible), J's game has fifteen chapters, Q's has more than twenty chapters, and the future Q King has about thirty or forty chapters. When necessary, describe less and promote the plot more (of course, this only applies to situations where the pace is too slow) And if possible, make a big steel before playing a difficult game, otherwise it will be easy to mess up, and it will not be so exciting for book friends. A classic and exciting game is extremely important both in terms of game content and the game between players. For example, the reason why Alice's Heart Cell is exciting is inseparable from the players and the mechanism. Then, if you want to write a biography of a character, you have to wait until the role of the character plays a significant role. For example, a biography of Chapter 140 is too abrupt. It is written after the couple's game, but it feels quite fragmented if it is placed at the back. However, this is also a structural problem, and it can be understood for those who write about battles of wits. Finally, I hope this book will not end too hastily. If the character biographies were placed after the couple's game, and the descriptions of Cao Ye and Cao Ye were more delicate and profound, it might become the first Little Knife.

Overall, it's good. It's obvious that a lot of effort has been put into the battle of wits, and the game design is also quite interesting. However, the protagonist's weapon setting always feels fragmented, and it feels a bit like an invincible fantasy novel... When a character with omnipotence on the panel uses this kind of force to defeat ten enemies with one force. When solving the problem, it is difficult not to suspect that the author used the settings to smooth out various plot bugs. It does not mean that the protagonist cannot be omnipotent, but in the setting of a human flesh and blood body with no powers, it is somewhat unreasonable to be so strong... There is also a problem about the game. The sense of oppression brought by the game decreases significantly as the chapters increase, and the protagonist passes the level too smoothly. This does not mean that the author did not design the game carefully, but that he did not deliberately break the reader's safety zone when writing. Especially when the protagonist already has high martial arts and high intelligence, the reader's attitude towards the protagonist has changed from the tense and exciting feeling at the beginning to - the protagonist can survive anyway, just watch it. The author needs to use supporting characters, events, or the protagonist to bear pressure to invade the reader's safe zone. Otherwise, the reader will just maintain an expected and calm attitude towards each game. The reason I make this suggestion is because you, the author, are not writing for invincibility. Sometimes it is appropriate to suppress the protagonist's force. If the audience is always on the side of the protagonist who has a sense of security, it will completely fail to achieve the ideal style of a horror country of despair, cannibalism, and death games that the novel wants to express... I complained about what I didn't like and talked about what I liked. It can be seen that the author will also shape the characters of some supporting characters to flesh out their images. From this point of view, it feels good. It is not a routine where the supporting characters only serve the plot. Some of the rigorous settings of the game are also very surprising. Seeing this level of writing on Tomato, it really feels like you have struck gold, right? I hope that the author's subsequent efforts will make the content of the book more exciting.

The playing cards and rules are "Alice's Last Kingdom", and the life and death game over tea is "As the Gods Said". The last one eats ice cream and draws lots to decide life and death.

The storyline is so good

The overall feeling of the work to me is a bit like Detective Conan, not in terms of content, but in terms of the alternating rhythm between stories and events. It may also be because I prefer this kind of witty fighting works, full of stars.

After listening to the first 30 chapters, it was okay and I could listen to it. Come on! I hope the author can just follow his own pace. There are not many books that focus on the content now. They are either bad jokes or just rubbish. This kind of novel with high content quality and high enough information density is really rare.

It's good to watch. I love to watch more updates. It's really exciting to watch. The male protagonist is a pentagonal warrior. He is smart and can fight. The copy is beautiful. A very exciting infinite flow, with no messy emotional lines, no system, no cheats, it all relies on the male protagonist's IQ. A rare male protagonist with high IQ. The male protagonist has a high IQ, he can scheme against many people at once, and he is also very powerful and can kill a robot with one punch. The male protagonist is so smart. Why are there so few people reading it, and there is no traffic? It's such a pity. I feel that Tokazu Wan's writing is just average, and it's so popular. I hope the male protagonists can gather them all

It's really good to watch. Even if I watch it once, I definitely won't be able to come up with a solution in a short time. Strange, there should be no rating for a book with more than 400,000 words. The quality of the author is not too high, but it is not too low either. It should be around 8 points.

Overall it's pretty good to watch, but it skips some one-liners of supporting characters that have nothing to do with the protagonist. [Thinking] When listening to the book, it feels like it doesn't connect well. But the author's writing style and logic are very online, and the name is very interesting hahahahaha Hei Xingxing

The author writes well. Although the puzzles are borrowed from a small amount, most of them are original and the logic is very smooth. I love this kind of subject matter! Come on!