Reborn!: The Poor Girl with a Bottomless Appetite

After reading the first few chapters, I really have a strong sense of immersion. The author's writing style is delicate and bitter, like cocoa melting on the tip of the tongue. The gentle taste is full of bitterness when you taste it. However, unexpectedly, the overwhelming aroma spreads in the mouth in the next second, covering up the previous astringency, and the aftertaste is long. The heroine is really cute, so strong, with a mature soul in a small body that has suffered a lot. In fact, I think she is so good, and Gang will like her, but it seems that there is no progress as I imagined... So I will put it aside for the time being. Maybe I am a little selfish, but I want the heroine to feel love, a lot of love. She deserves it.

Speaking of which, I actually liked the life when the heroine had no contact with Vongola (?). But after actually living with Sawada Tsunayoshi, I can clearly feel that the heroine has become much more relaxed. She has met a very good person. Congratulations to her for finding a family that she can always be with ('▽') I like the heroine's character very much. Although her mother and adoptive father were extremely malicious, her grandparents raised the heroine very well. Later, when I saw the story of the heroine missing them, I was very moved. It was very well writtenദ്ദി(•˕ •マ.ᐟ And I really like Invincible, the almighty protagonist, the existence with super high strength value, it's awesome. *͈ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈ෆ However (ᗒ‸ᗕ), there are a lot of typos/incoherent sentences, which actually really affect the perception. It's a pity that it's too late. The article has been completed and cannot be changed. It's a pity. ᖰ ᵕ᷄≀ ̠ᵕ᷅ ᖳ Just see this [love]

The existence of Mino is perfectly integrated with the original plot. Whether it is daily life, the corpse incident, the ring war, the future chapter, and the inheritance chapter, it is well covered without feeling like a running account. It felt like I was reliving tutoring all over again. And everyone is also very impressed by Mino's arrow direction. REBORN is really handsome. Rely on me and so on. The charm of a mature man is perfect💯It is rare to write a clip where the big devil is charming and sexy. Takeru and Kyouya are all natural. The key is that Shamal and Speddo are something I never expected. They are also very silky, which is rare! ! ! The extra chapter is not an emotional one but cuts off the scumbag father and takes off again, which is very cool! ! ! I like the poor girl who struggles to have enough to eat, Nana Mommy's favorite, and the girls get along well with each other! Great article! !

This book is really well written, the characters are very well restored, the heroine's personality is very rich, the girl is so cute, she has full abilities, including cooking skills, the normal interactions are quite good, the description of the battles at the back is rich, the writing and layout are very good, and the emotional lines follow. The machine drops are also very good. The part about summoning the skeleton throne is so cool to me. The character of each character is perfect. Little Nono is also perfect. In short, he is considered a god among the few tutoring fans. Come on, I hope you don't stop updating [Adoration][Adoration]

I think the most important thing about fan fiction is that the characters created by the author can be well integrated into the original comic world without the original OOC protagonist. I personally think this article meets these standards, which is really great! Not to mention the characters created in many fanfics can be integrated into it, and the original characters in the anime are all OOC! This fanfic is really worth reading!

Five stars! Must be five stars! It's so beautiful! ! Nono fits in very well with Tsuna! Even if the fighting power is too strong, Tsunayoshi and the others still have their own appearance. It's not too embarrassing, it's very smooth, the people are cool and cute, I love it! [Blowing a kiss] If I hadn't watched Tutor before, I might have thought that Nono herself was a character in Tutor! At the same time! Big~ Hungry, rice! [Send heart] p. S I really want to kiss Nono, Hibari/Tsunayoshi~ [Love]

The heroine is very miserable. Her childhood glory was just the superfluous affection of her grandparents, but she strives to live every day. Her rapid learning ability and extremely superior physical fitness in all aspects allow the heroine to effectively become a decathlete in a miserable life (similar to the author's one-stroke description of mastering skills through experience). In the early stages of brutal growth, she was treated differently by the protagonist group, joined, and became a "protagonist group nanny" similar to most books. There is a bit of a routine, and there is a tendency that only the heroine who vaguely feels valuable is worthy of being loved? Worthy of love even with flaws… Reasonable development, characters are not OOC, four stars

I had been looking for a long time but couldn't find a good tutoring fan, and I had given up all hope. I just happened to get it today, and I wanted to take a look, but I finished it in one go. It was quite interesting [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Generally speaking, it is a very good tutoring fanfiction, especially in the early and middle stages. Although the protagonist is added, it does not appear to be abrupt and is very reasonably integrated into the plot. However, in the later period, in order to highlight the beauty, strength and misfortune of the protagonist, Tsuna even changed the basic character of A Tsuna. A Tsuna can be cowardly and has various shortcomings, but he will never be jealous or hate someone who helps him just because of Kyoko (even if he likes Kyoko), even if it is just his inner thoughts. The author portrays the protagonist as a person who can firmly believe in taking the right path, but Gang is definitely more than the protagonist. He has always been aware of his own bottom line and wants to protect his family and others. In order to highlight the protagonist, adding this part of the description of A Gang is definitely a failure of this novel. This is also a problem that many fan novels have. In order to highlight the protagonist, the personality of the original character is changed. However, the most important thing in the fan novel is not the original plot (the arrival of the protagonist will change the original plot), but the personality of the original character. If the original characters are no longer the original settings, then this novel is just a novel in the name of a fan but has nothing to do with it. Fortunately, this part only appeared in the later stages, and the early and middle stages are still very good.

It's very interesting. It's mainly in the first person, with occasional third person. The plot is very interesting.