Where's the Rebellious Rebirth I Was Promised?

I've finished reading it, but I don't really want to go any further. There's nothing that attracts me anymore. Personally, I think Li Fanxiu and Zhang Weiyu in the first part are better looking. This is mainly reflected in the fact that the characters of the friends around the host are particularly well portrayed in the first part. The tragic experiences of the heroine, including the heroine's sister, and the helpless feeling of despair in life can make people resonate. Secondly, the description of the host family in the first part is more substantial, including the strict and loving father Wei, and the strong and sensible sister.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is good, not brainless, the plot design is reasonable, and there will be no traditional brainless slaps in the face. The author is well versed in online writing. The male and female protagonists are also well portrayed, with flesh and blood. The supporting role of Zhu Zhu is even better, basically bringing the characters to life. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the progress of the love line is too slow (I don't blame the author, this kind of character image itself cannot be fast) but I have to say that it is almost 400 chapters and I haven't eaten the meat yet😆 It's really a bit too much In one case, the author always mentions the characters of the previous book from time to time, mainly not by others but by the female protagonist. This is a bit offensive. After all, these are two books. You can link them, but if they are too frequent, it will be counterproductive and boring to new readers (I am a new reader, and I have not read the last few books). To sum up: it is worth recommending, it is better than Wu Nao Shuang, it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in tomatoes👍👍

At present, I see the heroine officially confessing his love to the heroine, and he is in the entrepreneurial stage. . The author is actually quite good, and the characters are very three-dimensional. Especially the protagonist, a bastard who is "not thorough in his bad deeds and impure in his good deeds". The protagonist and heroine are a typical combination of a yellow-haired gangster and a good girl. I personally quite like this combination. There is no big problem with the logic of the plot. Or maybe it's because I always like to compare this book with other books of the same type, so the male protagonist always gives me a feeling of being strategic but not passionate enough. I don't know whether it's a good thing or a bad thing if the protagonist is too sophisticated. There's no sense of "how can young people be considered young if they're not arrogant?" Now~ That's it, there's really nothing to comment on. How did you make the protagonist a strict henpeckist later on? So boring.

It's really good, and it fulfilled all my fantasies about Bai Yueguang. Maybe Bai Yueguang can only be reborn again to make up for it. IQ Online, the business war is really interesting to watch and not boring. I personally think that what best embodies it is not the male and female protagonists, but the sophistication of human nature that Zheng Ping said. The character descriptions are very three-dimensional, the heroine's psychology is really good, and the language can better reflect the entire character. I have to say that the character design is really good. Especially Su Ting, Shen Ya and Liu Linlin made me suddenly realize how luxurious love is in this fast food era, but the love between Li Changle and Yang Guoer gave me another shot of tranquilizer. Finally, I hope the author will write some extra stories about Li Changle's previous life to make up for Li Changle's regret that he was timid and did not cherish the things that were unobtainable when he was young [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I hope that the results of this book will get better and better, and that the author will have a son soon. I wish that the brothers who read this comment will also gain a daily love and a happy family. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Come on, the author, try your best not to be unfinished. According to me, who has been a bookworm for more than ten years, this should be the first novel I read on Tomato without skipping a beat. Although the filling skills and writing skills are a bit poor, it is very good. At least I didn't skip a chapter. It is a very good daily novel. It comments on those who say that the male protagonist has a bad personality. The male protagonist was a gangster in his previous life. It is not normal to use the thinking of a gangster to deal with things. The character of the author is very good. You finished it in about 150 words. I think you will become popular. I have not read any of the books mentioned in your works. I think a work is your own son. If you don't carve it out carefully, your next book will basically have no drama. Your book really has the potential to be popular. I, a reader, suggest that you should carve out this work carefully first. The potential of this one is very good. Come on.

I only reviewed two of the author's books. I'm halfway through the second one. In fact, the writing is very good. The characters are flesh-and-blood. And when you read the author's books, you will find that the unreasonableness is most likely foreshadowing. Don't rush to complain. Read on slowly. The author will explain it later. Don't use God's perspective. Use the character's perspective. You will find that human nature is normal.

It's a good read, but there aren't many chapters. I think there are very few chapters that I can read a little bit, but if I forget it, it would be a pity to miss it. In my opinion, this book has a very distinct character creation. The author's character creation is based on the character's own personality and perspective. The plot unfolds very smoothly, unlike some books where the characters are inconsistent and contradictory when the plot unfolds. Moreover, all characters have their own strengths and weaknesses, and they are very real. Unlike ordinary romances, they are perfect in every aspect. For example, the male protagonist's academic level is above average, his appearance is slightly above average, his playing skills are not high, he has a bit of a bad taste, and the way he achieves his goals is a bit sinister, etc. The female protagonist is relatively perfect, but for a period of time she admired the male protagonist in another book by the author and mistakenly thought she liked it. I haven't read the other book. The female protagonist may be a little annoying to some readers, but I think this is very true. After all, the male protagonist of the other book is also very good (this book has an introduction), and appreciation is inevitable. But this book clearly stated that it was for appreciation, and it did not say that the heroine had too many entanglements or dramas with the hero of another book, so I think there is no problem. After all, it's human nature to appreciate good people. To sum up the advantages of this book: the characters are very distinct, not the conventional perfect male and female mainstream, but it is still very comfortable, the plot is smooth, and even relatively real. Moreover, in this book, I can always feel the male protagonist's extremely positive views from his words and psychological activities. This is what makes me very comfortable. Author, I wrote such a long review. First, I saw that your writing was very good but it only had a rating of 7.0 Or so. It was purely because there were few readers and few ratings, so I wanted to give you a boost as a reader. Second, I want you to update more. This is not enough, hahaha. I have written almost 600 words, and the author has to write more than 600 chapters no matter what [shy][shy][shy]

Pros: The writing is good, the plot is not brainless, and the characters are well created. Disadvantages: The male protagonist's character is a bit complicated and it seems very draggy. Also, I always mentioned that the previous one mentioned a bit too much, which made it a bit annoying to read. Even those who have read both books will find it annoying, let alone new readers. Overall it's okay and worth watching [Like]

Compared with other articles of this type on Tomato, the author's writing skills are relatively good, and I feel that each plot is well drawn out and exciting. However, maybe now that I am a little older, I don't have a strong sense of involvement in this kind of writing, but it is still very exciting. I feel like the author used to write about women.

The characters are vivid and full, and each character has flesh and blood, making people unable to help but fall deeply into it. The author's writing style is superb, the text is delicate and vivid, and he describes various scenes and emotions deeply. All in all, totally addictive and highly recommended!