This is not a traditional rebirth story, so please don't judge the male lead by the standards of rebirth novels.
(A traditional modern campus novel: no System, no cultivation, just everyday campus life. A boy uses a dream to work up the courage to take his first step, and the two of them fall for each other.)
On the bus home for the weekend, Li Zhixu summoned up the courage to tell Yun Xiangnuan that he'd had a long, strange dream. In it, he and Yun Xiangnuan got into the same university, fell in love there, and eventually got married.
Yun Xiangnuan looked at the boy who had barely spoken to her in their two years as classmates, gave him a polite smile, and said tactfully, "Excuse me, could you move? I'm getting off."
I think the writing is quite good. I don't know where there are so many bad reviews. The male protagonist's behavior is also in line with the temperament of a young man. But judging from the facts, although he is a male protagonist, he is much worse than the female protagonist. There are not many shining points, and he is even more mediocre compared to other boys. By the way, there is a section in the middle where the male protagonist recalls the impression that the heroine's mother was not there in his "dream". Combined with the previous plot of taking painkillers, it is likely that the heroine's mother will die of illness after the college entrance examination. I thought the plot would be that the male protagonist could combine the dream with the death of the heroine's mother, but he turned around and forgot about it... He believed deeply in the dream, but at the same time he didn't care much about the dream. It was a bit inconsistent... From the perspective of a reader from a God's perspective, it even seemed a bit stupid. I think that although it is just a fake dream, the clue of the dream is actually quite interesting. It can be used as a propeller for the main plot, instead of throwing it away after using it at the beginning. The fake dream happened to run into the real reality, but coincidentally produced wonderful changes. The one-to-one correspondence turned into a real dream, and at the same time it solved the regrets in the dream and changed the reality. Mom is a regret, and maybe there are other regrets too, such as classmates, friends, family, studies, career, etc.
Not a bad start, keep up the good work
It's a good start, give the author a big boost first
The characters feel quite vivid
Mark a place, raise the book first, and wait for me to read this author's first book
It looks pretty good. It doesn't have too many tricks to make money. It mainly tells campus love stories.
Looks good, please update more.
Very good, the content is very fresh
It's really well written.
Has this happened before? 😏😏Why is the original book gone? 🤦