How to Play a Delicate Beauty NPC in Infinite Worlds

Everyone is welcome to comment. I like this type of infinite flow very much, but the writing style is limited, the logic is weak, and some lines are also problematic. I hope everyone can tolerate it. Moma [blowing kiss] Sorry! Because this is my first time writing, the wording, transitions, and plot are messy. Thank you for your understanding and support. I will continue to work hard. Thank you for your tolerance [send heartfelt]

I haven't finished watching the first world, but the first world is really messy and hard to understand. I don't even know how Gu Ming appeared. Suddenly there was an iron door, and then there was Gu Ming inside the iron door. It seemed like a large part of it was deleted in the middle.

Now I'm reading the first copy: many people say it's not coherent. It may be that the author uses multiple perspectives to write, which makes it confusing. Some supporting characters were also given names. To be honest, except for the protagonist and the people in the protagonist group, the supporting characters rarely remember their names. And I can't even remember it. Simply use red hair for short hair and long hair. Generalizations are fine too. Every supporting character has a name. Can't remember. There is another one that is not a problem. I just looked at the first copy, and now there are three people named Gu. The three of them should be attacking in slices. But appear in the same perspective. Some people say they can't tell which one is which. After all, they all have the surname Gu. Looking dizzy. I can't stand it either. Finished reading the first copy. There are many incorrect sentences that cannot be connected. It reads weird. I didn't understand the first copy either. It's so baffling. It just gave me the feeling that I had had a weird dream. I am very silent. Okay, I give up. I hope the author will change it again.

I haven't finished reading the rest. Actually, the first plane is quite confusing, but the emotional line is nice [face covering] I've read it all, come on! It can be seen that the author's writing style is getting better and better, it is very beautiful [blowing kiss]

The plot setting is beautiful! The author can use less third person pronouns when writing, and can use character names appropriately to make it smoother, because every time I read it I can't tell who is who and who is doing what [face covering], I hope it can be improved.

It's pretty good to watch, but the story line is incomplete. I wish I could tell it all. It's so hard to catch my appetite. The story can only be generalized, and some can't be generalized. But I really want to know the story of each copy. I cried without a big boss to analyze it. TT, and there are many bugs. After reading the book review, I can accept it and read it again. This article is really a small problem, and it is very interesting. [Congratulations] It's really good. I love this super gentle beauty who is also smarter than she is. The protagonist NPC helps the player with tasks. Her heartthrob attribute is quite obvious so far. It looks good. Five stars⭐

Everyone is fascinated, but the protagonist is not stupid, he is intelligent, calm, and has some nagging about the system. The storyline should be faster. I hope it will be updated.

Although the front is a bit messy, I can't help but it looks so good, hahahaha, the writing is getting better and better, the plot is also very good, the wife is also very beautiful, and the slices are very lickable hahaha. The smart and charming wife is looking forward to seeing the player recognize her identity as a player and prompting for more updates. She is so awesome! !

Nice! If the protagonist is not a virgin, he will not feel aggrieved! The copy of I Have a Kitten at Home is really great! Hahahahaha my wife stepped on the dogs under the cat's claws! Now I see it's almost finished, I recommend it ~ The dungeons are advancing layer by layer. It can be seen that each dungeon is making progress. The Shura Field is very fragrant.

I think overall it's very interesting [Congratulations], but don't be like me, feeling that the first chapter and the second chapter are not connected, thinking that they were deleted (I believed other comments), so I found a bunch of pirated articles and played around to find the differences [Thinking] It's a bit confusing, I recommend reading more comments