Starting at the Ninja Academy

I have read nearly forty chapters. The writing is very harmonious and there is nothing dark about it. It is very good. If you want to read more Naruto dark stories, you can read Su Lu [Chigua] [Chigua] It's actually very comfortable to watch, nothing fancy, and the character relationships and timeline are generally fine.

Although the novel is a slow-burning type, the story is very different from those of Naruto with clothes flying all over the place. The original personality characteristics of each character have not changed too much. Overall, it is very good. It is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read. Thank you (ง•̀_•́)ง for the author, please update as soon as possible, don't worry about other people's opinions.

The plot is very reasonable and not too exaggerated, and the characters all have reasonable personalities. It won't change much. I've read a lot of this kind of novels, and all other novels are boring. I don't know what to say about this novel. I personally feel pretty good. Is this outline finished?

Very good. It's not easy to see so many movies that set Kushina as the heroine and not slander Minato.

The plot is good, and there is no problem with the author's three views and the protagonist's three views, but the emotional line is still handled too hastily. It does not seem to be a slow burn, but it may be because each chapter has 4,000 words, which does not show a slow burn. I hope the author will continue to work hard and will always support the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Still pretty

That's pretty good. Okay.

I come from the book world. After reading more than 20 chapters, I became more and more interested in reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's very beautiful, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Beautiful, love watching. Just a little less. Come on, author!