Naruto: The Root of the Kinoshita Clan

I would like to give 5 stars for encouragement. I hope that the writing will get better and better. It can be seen that the author has put in hard work and the writing style is also good. After all, it is a rare original version of Naruto in recent years. By the way, I would like to give a few comments: (1) There is no need to have so many psychological and environmental descriptions; (2) Maybe the general trend of novels is to have more chapters, but Naruto fans like this still have to write their own things; (3) Tomato's Naruto traffic pool is relatively small now, and I hope the author can stick to it.

It's well written, with a bit of a step-by-step approach. It's much better than the current fan fiction where the protagonist rises to the top in one step. At least I haven't seen any OOC plots so far. They basically match the characters and don't go too far beyond the Naruto worldview. Just write out the influence of the butterfly effect.

The writing is very good among Naruto fanfics, but the pace is a bit fast and the main plot is not detailed enough. It would be much better if the author added some transitions. It's obviously the first time I've written this kind of novel. I feel so powerful that I don't know where to use it, so I can expand on the outline. However, the writing style is very good, the characterization is very good, and the plot arrangement is reasonable. I hope the author can let more readers read this article. It's still okay to improve to 9 points [I understand]

I didn't skip the reading, there are no poisonous points, and I added at the end of the chapter the parts I didn't understand. I believe that even a non-fan of Fire can understand such an article. The bond of passionate youth meets all the requirements of Naruto fans, but there are too few. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. I will give you three Power Generations for Love to support [Thoughts]

It's well written and the main character is not off-putting so far. Including the length of explanations, there are a little few updates, and there are also a few daily interactions between the characters. It feels unreal, like treating NPCs.

Currently, the only Naruto fanfic that meets my expectations. The other fanfics either focus on the description of power or the writing is too poor and lacks ups and downs, making it very dull. This Naruto fanfic already has a "feel". The links are connected one by one, and the connection is very natural. It has enough refreshing points to not be brainless. This is the best among the best.

This is very beautiful, but the pace is too fast and the strength grows quickly, but after all, it is dancing on the tip of a knife. If you can't die, you will become stronger. What I love is that there is a clear and visible way to improve the protagonist's strength. It is not like system cheats and dead pigs filling water with water.

It is a rare author with a lot of brains and layout. It has a fairly standard neutral protagonist template, a reasonable background and supporting role arrangement, and it also has the passion that Naruto should have. My evaluation is: comparable to Sister Juan

It's awesome, the only Naruto fanfic I can read.

Nine points or even ten points is good