[Naruto] Becoming Tobirama Senju's Disciple

Okay, okay, it smells so good that I got up in the middle of the night to comment. The plot is decent, not invincible but not aggrieved either. The protagonist's personality is both white and black, which means that on the surface he looks gentle and has no scheming, but in fact he has a lot of tricks, but these tricks are used to protect rather than hurt. In short, he is gentle and sinister, and he has a good mind (he needs a male mother). The three views are upright and firm, but due to the situation in the ninja world, I am currently mentally unwell. No cp, but I have some entanglements with some people, but it is very reasonable. If you are really uncomfortable, don't treat it as an emotional entanglement, just treat it as an incident (it is what it is).

He is a relatively rare type of protagonist in Naruto stories. The protagonist really loves his family and has arranged a way for them, but he has not arranged his own. I hope it's not too cruel (´｡･v･｡`) At present, it seems that the protagonist's strength is not at the cheating level, so the protagonist uses the methods he can think of that are suitable for this era to arrange a future retreat for his family. Although the method may not be very glamorous, I think the combination of ninja status and status during the Warring States Period is not difficult to accept. After all, only by staying away from the ninja industry can the mirror be safer and the most likely to die of old age rather than die accidentally or be plotted by the hackers. At the same time, it can be regarded as keeping Jing Jin away from Hei Ze's sight, as well as his parents. At present, I don't quite understand how the protagonist arranges for his parents to leave him and so on? But there is one thing I prefer about the setting of this book. It's the protagonist's strength. It's not incredible, but it's not terrible either. It's average, right? It may just be a bit better, but it is still far worse than those who cheated in later generations. At present, it seems that it is not comparable to Madara, Hashirama, Tobirama and the like, so it is reasonable to use some, um, not so powerful methods to let the family leave Konoha. And actually I think that if it is very powerful, it will not be convenient for the family to leave, after all, it will easily be targeted by Black Zetsu! This might become the material for the Samsara Eye. After all, Hei Jue would not think that being able to save his old mother would be a bit more fault-tolerant and could be used as insurance. Then there's the heroine, who seems to be Xiaochun who is sleeping with her, hmm... Maybe. Actually, I don't have much objection to the heroine, etc. It mainly depends on the author's writing style. If the writing is good, people will like it even if there is a heroine. And currently, it seems that the focus of the protagonist should be his family. Even if there is a relationship line or something, it should be done after the family has arranged it. So even if I don't like watching movies with female protagonists, I think the problem is not too big, and the plot may be biased toward war. After all, the war is about to begin, and Hashirama won't live for a few years. Compared with the so-called emotional line, I am more worried about how long the protagonist can live... This is not because of lack of confidence in his strength, but because the protagonist does not seem to have such a strong desire to survive. I'm just a little worried that after the family arrangements are made, probably before the war, the arrangements will be almost the same. I'm afraid that after arranging everything, the protagonist will have little hope and then die. What should I do? I'm so damn worried about this! But with a female protagonist, I feel like I don't have to worry so much (I'm still a little worried, and I'm not sure about the weight of this female protagonist in the male protagonist's heart). At least there are still people who are worried about him and miss him. Let him not be too desperate for the ninja world (after all, the protagonist has become numb to the ninja industry of killing people and so on. Maybe one day he will feel that whether he is dead or alive, it does not matter, etc. It is not impossible! It is difficult for the protagonist to care about anything other than family. ! ) After all, there are still a few young men in Uchiha who are hard to guard against in the future, and the protagonist doesn't know how old he will be at that time. Whether he can live well until that age is a question ╮ (╯_╰) ╭ And the protagonist doesn't have so much sense of justice. He just needs to take care of his own family. Well, he is a time traveler after all~ At the same time, I am also worried that this article is really short, but I really like this subject matter, so I hope that the protagonist will not die so soon. Really (›´ω`‹) even if it ends relatively quickly, I hope it will be a good ending for the protagonist and his family.

Ma'am, you're so fucking beautiful! Woohoo! It's rare that it suits my taste. The protagonist's IQ is online and there's a plot. Now that I see it, I'm probably sure it won't have a female protagonist. It's so damn good-looking. I really like the mental state of the protagonist. It's such a heart-pounding article. The character of the protagonist is probably the melancholic Bai Yueguang. Wow, why is there no more? As for the fourth battle, and the emotional scene with Tobirama, wuwu, teacher, don't leave! The Book of Blood of Ten Thousand People is begging for a sequel. The teacher ended it a bit too suddenly. I thought it would take 20 pictures to finish, but it ended like this. The Book of Blood of Ten Thousand People is begging for a sequel. It's really good-looking, Teacher! ! Teacher, if you write a new book, I will definitely read it! ! ! ! Teacher, I love reading your books! ! ! ! ! !

The protagonist is calm and composed, he just wants to return to modern times, and he can stay true to his original intention even in the face of some seemingly good temptations. The article mainly talks about repaying the kindness and training of Uchiha and his family, what happened when he replaced Kagami as Tobirama's disciple, and finally faked his death and left. Lightning protection: 1. The protagonist likes Xiaochun who is sleeping with him, and Xiaochun also likes him, but the two are not together, and in the end they become a relationship of mutual use (more than friends but not lovers) 2. The male protagonist had sex with Tobirama, but in the end the two would not be together, nor did they like each other. I hope some people can take off my love brain.

Although it is a bit short, the plot and writing are really good. The story line has only one straight line and is very simple. In short, the protagonist simply wants to protect his younger brother and family, and at the same time keep a little bit of Uchiha blood. There are not so many conspiracies and complicated story lines. The final ending is actually expected. I feel that I can continue to write later, but I feel that this is enough and enough is enough. In fact, I really want to see the Shura Field of Night and Tobirama in the later period, but I feel that Tobirama is not the kind of person who will be addicted to love, so it is not impossible to stop there. Finally, I am very grateful to the author for bringing the night story!

I won't step on the pigeon text again. Don't give up, ma'am, it's very well written. It is said that it is really easy for tomatoes to step on pigeons [face covering]

What a heartwarming plot and brotherly love. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up. I hope the author doesn't cheat. It's rare to have such a literary qvq. I hope Xiao Jing and Xiao Ye are well.

I really like the character of the protagonist, gentle, restrained and powerful. There is less space for fighting descriptions, and the overall story is more about dealing with people.

The male protagonist is very charming, but there are a lot of typos. I hope to write more about the interaction between the male protagonist and Tobirama. I like to read it.

Write a book review. Possible red flags: Missing words are serious, but it does not affect the overall reading; the relationship with Koharu is a bit regretful, they used each other at the beginning but felt that the protagonist got stuck in the later stage; and Tobirama did it (to be honest, I want to watch the extra if line) The rating may seem a bit low, but the content is actually good. It can be seen that the author is very thoughtful, but it is a bit short. Many plots would be more exciting if they were written in more detail. I look forward to more works.