I Played a Passerby, Then Got Mistaken for a Member of the Protagonist’s Crew

I will be a long-time fan from now on, and apart from other things, there are very few articles of this type. The comic cosplay forum also has a system. There are really very few articles on this subject, and even fewer of good quality. I have only found three or four so far! And this is not just one world, there will be other worlds that I like to travel to quickly, with a bit of a villain flavor. Although it seems beyond expectations, everything is actually under the control of the protagonist! It's just not too cool! As long as you maintain this quality and keep writing, madam, you will definitely become popular! A small knife is pleasing to the eye, but a big knife is not afraid. Anyway, someone else will be the one to kill him in the end, and he will never be able to kill the heroine. So you can use more knives. Even though people say they like happy endings, in fact the tragic plot will make it more unforgettable! I like this kind of thing because no matter what the role is, it is fake. It can only hurt others, but it will never hurt the protagonist himself. What's more, there is also the factor of fast travel. It seems that the only drawback at present is that there are too few updates, really too few!

The setting of this book is that the protagonist, as a creator and promoter of the plot, needs to gain the attention of the audience, similar to the position of the mastermind behind the scenes. I personally believe that the protagonist should have strong control over the plot, which highlights the important position of the protagonist in the audience's heart and can more easily stir the audience's heartstrings. This is also one of the important points of this book. In fact, I think that in articles with this type of theme, whether it is the main plot or the branch plot, the protagonist should appear as a planner, leading the direction of the plot, and deeply affecting the characters in the plot. As the protagonist who the reader can substitute to a certain extent, this moderate refreshing point can improve the perception. Some people think that the protagonist has disappeared. I personally think it is because this point has not been achieved. There are two reasons for this. One is that there are too many branch lines, and these branch lines have no strong relationship with the protagonist in terms of look and feel. I guess the author may have added these branches for the purpose of enriching the world view, but in terms of results, these branch lines make quite a difference. Some readers are in a fog. It can be said that in a novel with this comic structure, this kind of result is foreseeable. The solution to this problem is also very simple, that is, the protagonist controls the formation of the comic and shows the reader the process of creating the comic. This sense of control can not only provide readers with fun, but also strengthen the connection between the main line and the branch line.

Probably the viewing time is relatively short... The current progress is about one-third) Overall, the author's creativity is very good, the subject matter is very novel and the imagination is great, including the fact that the dialogue between the inner and the system does not use quotation marks is very detailed. After all, it is still what is thought in the heart. However, the shortcomings of writing this way are also obvious. It is a bit difficult to distinguish the author's narrative and the psychological activities of the characters (especially the protagonist). In addition, you can feel that the author wants to express a lot of things, but there may be some places that are not easy to understand due to the lack of writing skills. All in all, I still like this book very much and look forward to the author's subsequent growth in writing skills🥰

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The plot is new and interesting, but the barrage discussion caught my eye. It would be fine if they were unified to the end of the article, but it would be an uncomfortable experience to be stuck in the middle.

Wow, it's a new book, take a bite😋 It smells so good, have another sip😋 It's so delicious, have another bite 😋 Budui! 😩😩 So bitter😞😞 Don't worry, keep eating😋😋 So bitter😩😩 Hao Chi😋😋 So bitter😩😩 Hao Chi😋😋 ... Why is it gone? 😡😡😡😰😰😰😭😭😭😭

4 Stars is the ultimate score, including five stars (seems like it's troublesome if the tomato score is too high) This is truly excellent short wear, the content is wonderful Lots of foreshadowing, and a lot of sugar knives If you love to eat, novelists like us should eat this kind of knife [crying] The first story is really exciting, and the writing is also very good. You must come and see it (I can't eat the knife alone) I hope that the new world can be so exciting after the big year (The pressure must be quite high [blowing kiss])

Nice! I dare say this is definitely one of the top twenty books I have ever read! (Those popular ones like Toka don't count) It's very attractive and I finished reading it before I knew it.

The writing is good, really good. It is a rare work written by Tomato with excellent writing. It's a pity that after seeing the scene where An Quan and An Yanxi had a disagreement, I got angry. In my opinion, An Yanxi's behavior and practices are double standards. This is not a problem in itself, because it is okay to regard "double standards" as character characteristics. The problem is that the author doesn't think so, and the subsequent plot design is obviously biased towards An Yanxi (An Quan's family was just broken, but An Yanxi lost his sister). At the same time, from about chapter fifty-five to the current update, the content of this book has been in a depressing atmosphere, making it unreadable. The pace is a bit slow and there are too many characters. How long does the author plan to write this first copy?

What's nice is that it's written very carefully, because the author is a novice and can understand it. But, it is very detailed. Just like reading the text description version of the comic, the heroine actually does not occupy much space. It feels a bit like a pseudo-group portrait. The heroine is positioned throughout the short story but there is not much actual space.