Love from the Demon King
来自魔王的爱
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 490k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- European Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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In booklists 9
Any Magical Adventure Novels with One Female Love Interest and No Harem?
It's fine if there are lots of female characters, as long as the male lead is devoted and doesn't flirt with other women! Something where he transmigrates to a magical world would be great!
Looking for High-Quality, Passionate Xuanhuan Novels
Any Western Fantasy Stories from a Female Lead’s Perspective? Nothing Like Female-Oriented Quick Transmigration
Looking for books similar to A Western Fantasy World Full of Tropes.
Good Western Fantasy Novels
Looking for books similar to Lord: Raising Girls in a World of Agony (Lord of the Mist).
Any Western Fantasy Novels with a Grand World and Beautiful Prose?
I love Western fantasy for its expansive worldbuilding and rich storylines, especially novels about a group of protagonists. Magic academies, royalty, nobility, high priests, vampires: I absolutely love those settings. But the last few books I tried had such awkward writing. I want something better written.
Western Fantasy With a Strong Heroine, Preferably an Ensemble Team Story
I'll read any kind of Western fantasy. I'm not picky 🤫
Lord, Western Fantasy, Magic Knight
Looking for Novels With a Mage Protagonist, Please
Any Good Novels Set in a Western Fantasy World?
I want to read books like A Western Fantasy World Full of Tropes.
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I'm not going to be too bad for a new author, but I'm going to make a bit of a sharp sound next. The performance is too stiff, to be honest. Everyone is there to speak, no priority. Moreover, there is a lack of description for some scenes, and more dialogue is used to promote the plot (at least in the early stage), which makes your novel look like a script. At least the script also has narration and other things to assist us. Also, your pacing is too messy and lacks foreshadowing, and because of some of your shortcomings, I can't understand what you're trying to write in your plot at all. In conclusion, I can only say that it is indeed the work of a newbie, and even the mistakes made are so new. But it's not that I can't read it. I can only say that I hope the author writes better and better.