Jormungand in the Lost River

A very good story that fascinated me deeply. Here, I saw a person, a living person; a world, a world that was more real than reality. I saw a person, an ordinary person who could not be more ordinary. You will be confused by what you have done, and you will cry because of the regretful and unwilling story. She really looks like an ordinary person. Although her identity is not simple, she is a classic ordinary person who cannot be more classic. Living in confusion in the world, being involved in inexplicable events again and again, seeing the indifference of the world, I will be moved by some things, warming that empty heart... Every character here, even an inconspicuous supporting character, has his own story, unlike some novels where they are just puppets to meet the needs of the plot. They give me the feeling that they are more like flesh-and-blood people who have their own thoughts and will laugh or be sad about some things... I saw a world, a world that was more real than reality. It brings the warmth and coldness of the world, and the corruption of power, one by one before our eyes. It is no longer a cold setting, nor a lifeless background. It is a stage called the world. The characters in the author's works dance gracefully on this stage called the world, performing their own lives. Just like reality, the performer is either a legend or an ordinary life. The author's writing style is very in line with my taste, and the world view is also very large. Although it is not the best novel I have ever read, it is definitely the novel that made me write the review most carefully, and it is also the novel that resonates with me the most. The author's psychological portrayal is very delicate, and his grasp of human nature is just right. Falling into the abyss for eternal life, fighting openly and secretly for power, in order to survive... One person after another, one thing after another, appeared before my eyes like a drama, scene after scene. Moreover, the author is good at quoting classics, one after another, documents that I am familiar with or unfamiliar with, appear at just the right place (such as "The Divine Comedy" and the song at the end of the first volume), so that the whole text does not appear mediocre, nor does it appear as exaggerated as those articles piled up with only gorgeous rhetoric. I am also an author (on other platforms), so I know how hard and difficult it is to write. I hope the author can persevere and finish writing this story. In my eyes, every story is a real world, and every character is a living person. We should not give up easily, please keep writing. I don't want to see a good story end hastily. I am looking forward to the ending of this story, whether it will be gorgeous and powerful, or plain. This is my plea to you. Finally, I would like to express my most sincere wishes to you that you will succeed in your studies, work smoothly, and live a satisfactory and happy life. Come on! [Like][Like][Like] I read the remaining volumes in one go. It feels a bit underwhelming. Some people say that the article written by the author is a bit of a riddle, and I can't figure out the cause and effect, but it may be my own personal problem. I feel that the entire article is actually quite smooth, and there is no messy feeling. What impressed me most was Duan Ping's first sentence in Chapter 16. A book friend said that the author's writing was too riddle, but if you read the previous articles carefully, you can find the corresponding foreshadowing. (I originally wanted to find the original text of the previous paragraphs to prove it, but Tomato cannot save comments and it is so speechless that I am too lazy to read it) Of course, it is also possible that I have read too many riddles and have become somewhat accustomed to them. I can immediately think of the causes and consequences. This is purely a personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't comment.

It's a good book. It made me resonate with depression. The author's writing style is very good. It's also the most profound description of another world and "destiny" I've ever seen in Tomato. The author should not stop talking! ! ! ! ! Beep beep, I've finished reading now, and I'm done spreading flowers!

This is a masterpiece that rarely gives me the feeling of reading a serious novel. The rhetorical sentences in it all have the flavor of a serious article. In terms of writing, use description to promote plot development and character growth, and concisely describe specific components that support important content. It can be seen that the author carefully planned the context of the article and made the story as exciting as possible. The tone of the story is depressing, but it's not that great. The author believes that the redemption can only be achieved after seeing the latest chapter. Perhaps like many similar novels, it is struggling between human nature and divinity. Inner conflict is the ultimate path to growth. In many scenes, the protagonist communicates with divinity through dreams. This is certainly a good way of writing, but it seems too frequent and the emotions are similar. I hope to enrich the thoughts contained in it, although the author has done a good job. After seeing the latest, I feel that this eloquent narrative style is very good, and the author also shows his ability to write daily life plots. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to subsequent development. Happy New Year. [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

"Bian Bai", the writing style is excellent, and there are few descriptions of women's clothing, body and female body. The Western world view of swords and magic is written in detail. The heroine travels to the Western Fantasy Continent and meets the second heroine. She grows up step by step, and has daily work + daily battles. He kept getting stronger, and then reunited with the second female lead. It was very sweet, with all kinds of conversations, posts, promises, wedding dress selection, interactions, falling together, falling in love, falling in love. The description of the if line is also good, with different choices, the writing is very beautiful, and the various sadnesses feel a bit pointless ~ I have to say that I have magic power in a different world, can do magic, and be with the person I like. How can I have so many memories of my previous life? Cherish the present. It took the heroine 211 chapters to figure out this truth. I was convinced. This can only mean that when she was a boy in her previous life, the heroine was with her children. She has never experienced life, marriage, raising children, supporting the elderly, etc. Returning to the theme, this book is a must-read for those who like Western fantasy. The writing is really good, the background setting is very good, and the emotional line is also good.

Among the Western fantasy novels I have read, this book is really good. I am a person who likes stories. The purpose of reading books is to witness one story after another. These stories may be good or bad, but I always try my best to read and think about them, because as a reader, I am a witness to the story. I follow the protagonist's perspective and experience one adventure after another, feeling the joys and sorrows of (him, her, it, him). The memory of these stories remains, and even if the stories no longer exist, at least I still remember them. I have no literary talent, nor can I say any gorgeous words of praise. I can only say that in my opinion this is a good story. No matter what other people think, at least I think so. Thank you to the author for allowing me to witness this story. A story must have a beginning and an end. The ending may be happy, sad, subtle, or rough. There must always be an ending. I hope the author can persevere so that we can see the ending of this story, the final chapter of this otherworldly adventure.

It's a really good work, it's my favorite subject matter, the characters also hit my mark, and the author's writing style is beyond words. This simple yet mysterious narrative really hits the strike zone. I can only say that I love it so much. However, I personally feel that the character expressions still need to be enriched, including the protagonist and supporting characters. For example, Roland Sir is one of the few characters in the work who has more descriptions, but the background of the character is relatively vague. Other supporting characters, such as Yoel and Kelly, are only mentioned in a few strokes, lacking a sense of three-dimensionality or even presence. As for Li Yue, the description is indeed a bit vague (maybe I didn't think carefully). It was not until the end of the first volume that I finally realized, "So that's how it is." Li Yue's behavior and psychology of escaping from identity and reality really came to the surface. However, if you look back at the details of the "imagined girl" earlier, you can also learn something. From this point of view, I have to say that the author is still very strong👍. (I have no resistance at all to people like Liyue [love]) As for the plot, as everyone said in the comments, it feels like the development is a bit fast, and there are a lot of battles and events, but there is an illusion that the amount is small. This may be a side effect of the "simplistic narrative", and maybe it can be enriched. The description of the battle is impeccable, but the development of events feels a bit fast, even jumping, one after another, and the atmosphere is slightly tense and urgent. Perhaps more daily life can be added to the events. For example, when Li Yue first arrives, there may be some narration of city exploration, or daily interactions with members of the demon hunting team, to enrich the image and personality of the supporting characters. After reading the first chapter, I found that the author's plot framework is still very good. Every event does not seem cumbersome and useless. I need to do some foreshadowing, polish it, and describe more scenes to slow down the pace and make the events less abrupt. This can make the content fuller without making empty jumps. The above is my personal opinion after reading the first volume. I can only say that I really like this work. Although it has just started, it is already starting to take shape. I hope these suggestions can help the author greatly and become the motivation for the author's creation [top post]

I feel that the author pays more attention to the atmosphere. If you can read it patiently, you will still feel it (a lot of words and sentences). However, it is a very pessimistic fact: in this era of fast food, and in this fast food tomato, the author really does not have any group audience. It is like an ordinary person who lives in the city and does not live well, but goes to the deep mountains and wild forests to survive in the wilderness with nothing. The author seems to have come to the wrong place. In short, the book is good, and it is quite interesting to slowly experience the struggle of thoughts. This book is not a transformation story, with two female protagonists, but I feel that the author may be a boy (sorry if this offends me). The female protagonists are very capable and avoid a lot of, well, how should I put it? (I don't mean that only boys can write this kind of heroine, but I feel that if a girl writes it, there should be more, that's about it)

What's this? This is a work of art! A complete work of art! Σ( ° △ °|||)Reading this book is like appreciating a magnificent epic. The plot description is amazing and the environment description is fascinating. After reading the first volume, I couldn't help but praise it. Although I may be a little dizzy when I started reading it, because the big jump in the plot content is a bit overwhelming. , But if you watch it carefully, you will feel the immersive shock. Author, are you going to publish animation or movies? Seriously, the author has a side job. (▼ヘ▼#)[Anger] Give me all the five-star reviews! Fill the author's mouth with five-star reviews! ! Ｏ(≧▽≦)O

I have only seen the early stage. The writing is good and there are many riddles. However, the atmosphere is well created and the emotional transition is delicate. Instead, the riddles become a motivation to attract people to watch. People look forward to the moment when the mystery is revealed. I really like this kind of protagonist who is in confusion, but the surrounding environment brings to the protagonist. Not just confusion, but also various guidance, allowing the protagonist to gradually explore and gradually uncover the world through various events, giving me a feeling of the early stage of Lord of Mysteries. I really like this writing method, letting the settings serve the plot, and setting the settings bit by bit as the plot progresses. I hope the author can keep writing. This book really poked me There are many shortcomings in the ending, but there are also many advantages. Many plots are too simple and the explanations are not clear enough. But then again, is this a sacrifice for the overall atmosphere? Generally speaking, the emotions are delicate and the melancholy atmosphere is well created. It is an outlier among online novels. It is still very interesting. I recommend it.

It's very good. I really like the author's descriptions of daily life and love. I think it's because I was impatient and didn't read it carefully in the early stages of the novel. This is also a common problem in foreign novels. I felt that the early stage was more of a riddle. But after reading the second volume, I felt a lot better. [Blow a kiss]. The contradiction and madness of the protagonist are very well portrayed. [Like] [Like]. Although the subject matter is niche, the writing is very good. I have read so many Xiaobai novels and I feel more comfortable reading the previous one [shy] I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Love][love]