A Living Hell from the Start: If There's No Game Over, Does That Mean I've Won?

The appearance of another world is really unexpected, and the details are well controlled. There are many characters, but they are not repeated. I can only sigh, "The heroes of the world are like the crucian carp crossing the river." There are not many jokes, but it also adds depth.

I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly good-looking. The climax of the whole story is non-stop and exciting. It is the top among tomato fantasy, after all, it is the best in history. It has been two years and he is still updating. I will not give up.

See Chapter 104 My personal suggestion is to add more elements to the system and avatars. ① You can try to fuse the avatar. The existence of other weak substitutes is very low, and they are becoming more and more numerous and mixed. ② Improve the setting of main tasks and side tasks. So does the lottery. After all, except for paying attention to these when receiving rewards, the rest of the time is like a small transparency, and the rewards are not written out in advance. When receiving the rewards later, I feel that the rewards are a bit confusing. Why do you think this task has this reward? ③The avatar has evolved and the use of avatars has been strengthened. Most of the time, the stand-in plays the protagonist himself and is not very good at manipulation. Moreover, the substitute's weight level is relatively low just after being drawn. His strength cannot defeat the immortals, and his ability cannot reach the level of immortals. You can upgrade faster when upgrading. The concept of ability can be stronger. ④ Take the time to write a few chapters to describe the characters that appeared earlier. Otherwise, they will become more scattered as we go to the later stage. Write the connection between the characters and make the characters fit the main line. ⑤The collapse of heaven, the vast world, the separation between immortals and mortals, and the struggle between immortals and magic. You can find an opportunity to unify the main elements of these articles and improve the world view. Well, I feel like I talk a bit too much. I thought this book was well paced. The content setting is rich and the character descriptions are also fascinating. In summary, the content, plot, and characters are rich. But I didn't feel the main emotion. Unlike those cool articles, you don't know what you read after reading them. The content is repetitive and the same. Sum up this book in three words New knowledge. Novel. Rich

It's okay, but the process of grabbing people is a bit too long, and there are too few memes. Please provide more interesting memes.

The author is rich in imagination and writes very well about combat power. However, the world view is opened too fast and I may not be used to it. The events in this world are not over and then jumps to the next world, which gives people a confusing feeling. Because of the perspective of readers, they will prefer the first one described, so I always think it is the main one. The character will return to the first world to join the sword sect or pick up the previous leaks, but seeing that he has never been there now, he has to accept new information. This is why I said there is a sense of confusion, and I feel that the first world is well written. Why do people say that the procrastination of the sword sect and so on are all well written.

Xianpin, the writing is not bad at the beginning, it is as long as noodles but not smelly, it just makes people a little irritated. The subsequent plot is well connected, and the memes are included in the article in a way that less appears and more is used, and less wins more. It is really writing a fanfic about memes instead of using memes. The protagonist is almost invincible among his peers, but he has the setting of a large and small world in the same sea of ​​chaos. The addition of characters who can crush or defeat him at the right time makes him not have the characteristics of invincible fast-food novels that are more exciting and less likely to cause impotence. Summary: md is less and good-looking Ending: Well, yes, it's me. This is 5 stars. More to come!

There are novel themes, the characters have souls, and the most important thing is that there is no sense of contradiction. It is rare that all people and things develop in a reasonable and reasonable way. The characters have independent thoughts and three views, and there are no flaws. It is very comfortable to watch. It is the kind of "this story is not because he is the protagonist, but because of this story he becomes the protagonist."

It's good-looking, don't let the jokes put you off, it's quite good, it has brains, reason, and jokes. But I am sane throughout the whole process. I recommend reading it. If there is a twist, don't complain. I see that there are no poisonous points. I recommend it. ૧(●´৺`●)૭ I hope the author will work hard. Come on I've seen Chapter 398 so far

I've been reading this book for a long time, and overall it's very good. The author's imagination is very big, and the various strange settings and developments in the plot are often unexpected. It's also interesting to play jokes. Many places are very abstract, and the mental state can only be said to be invincible. Especially the protagonist's abstractness, his behavior is often unexpected, but inexplicably reasonable, and it fits the style of the entire book particularly well. The plot is not just purely funny, but also has the necessary plot advancement and world view. The plot has foreshadowing and conclusion. The key is that the climax of the plot is really exciting. Is there anyone other than the protagonist who can do it? (Kira's mysterious pose) In short, it is a book that is very suitable for relaxing and reading, and the more you read, the more you will enjoy it. If you like novels with big ideas, lots of jokes, and abstract protagonists, I highly recommend it. (You are really awesome in the final work, you guy!! Can you still be a hit even with such a small audience... I admit that your popularity is far higher than that of Situ An. This book is really explosive and beautiful, and you will definitely become famous all over the world in the work (of course not the "I'm going to sea, everyone needs to support me" kind of thing, the final abstract work should not be like this, right... Right?) You have to live on, you guy...) (┯_┯)

It's good to read, but no one likes the name. The cover is not good. In the early stage, Dihua let people who like wits go. In the later stage, wits are very good. Tiyi opens a trumpet and writes with brains. When you read the first chapter, you will be crazy about wits. More talents will stay. And most of the people who like to read novels are just reading novels. There are very few old bookworms. Without these, there will be no traffic. In the early stage, Dihua opened a trumpet and published a trumpet. The title of the trumpet was changed to "Collapse of the Great Road, Weird Cultivation of Immortality, Start of Hell, I Sweep the World as a Stand-in for Meme"