Witch Hunt? I Really Can Use Magic

Very beautiful The plot is very ups and downs The world view is based on the Middle Ages, but the world view can be further developed. As for the power system, I think it's rather vague now except for the protagonist. I don't like the rhythm very well, it's still too little. Character creation is also possible. Each character has his own thoughts, interests, and stance, and the characters also grow. I hope the author can shape the world view better, include more details, and balance the world view and character creation.

The best thing is the opening... The protagonist's character is a mixed image. He is neither the traditional pure benevolent hero nor the completely self-interested type that has been common in recent years. But twisting the beginning like this is a bit... However, I think it's okay. The choice made doesn't seem to be the optimal solution, but the story is interesting. One thing about this book is actually quite awkward, that is, its narrative logic is a bit similar to a classic long popular novel, but in this way the plot is more interesting. And although the story is indeed interesting, readers may have a question: why do you have to save people? Regardless of whether it's three-seven-twenty-one, stacking your own combat power on top of him, wouldn't it be very efficient? Although there are not many skills given in the article that are of this type, you can try a few more in case you get them. (However, I have read a lot of books of this type, and it is good now. However, I feel that it might be better to rewrite the beginning because I feel that there are still some gaps between the writing style at the beginning and the rest.) However, the narrative rhythm of this book is more similar to that of a long popular novel. This kind of subnet article It will be difficult to catch up on updates... So you may be more inclined to save several chapters before reading. Fortunately for new readers, the amount of updates in this book is actually not small at all, but an event may require tens of thousands of words. This means that the review may have only been a day, but readers may have been waiting for several days. Oh, there was a typo in the voice input method. I think the target group attracted by this profile actually has a problem with being one-of-a-kind, although this is certainly true. But if people come here for this label, they probably want to see him kill the world alone. Generally speaking, this label is more inclined to the pseudo-invincible style. If we want to talk about the advantages of this book, it is mainly the plot and character settings. It's the kind of story that tells a good story. But if you come for this label, although it is indeed difficult to kill and penetrate, people who come for this label actually expect to kill and penetrate. (Although now it looks better written this way, but well, it's not as expected, although it does look good written this way.)

It's very interesting. I collected it a few days ago and haven't read it yet. I read it all night long today. I don't see anything poisonous about it at all, and many people in this comment section are saying it is poisonous for no reason. Come on, don't always be misled by those black people and influence your thoughts.

The writing is okay, slow, but the writing style is particularly delicate. In many moments, I felt that what I saw was not the characters in it, but the abbreviation of my life. Thank you, the author, for deeply touching me. I don't have much to say about how good this book is. I just want to check my reading time.

It should be okay to give a 5-point self-evaluation, right? This book was purely written by an old reader who couldn't find a book he liked, so he decided to write a book to pass the time while waiting for updates from other authors. The background of the novel is a realistic fictional medieval period. The original world was not one with low demons, but directly without demons. There were secular lords, a powerful church, and the Inquisition (Inquisition) was established. An era of high-pressure beliefs is also an era where women have no status. The protagonist can obtain magic through the system and master supernatural powers. The prerequisite for obtaining magic is to sign a contract with a woman. Request and clearly inform the other party that they need to give up their faith and cannot pray or participate in the sacraments. At the same time, after the other party dies, the soul will belong to the protagonist (or system). If this woman has potential, it is equivalent to having a profession in a certain game and directly obtaining a set of corresponding skills. If this woman has no potential, it is equivalent to having no profession. The protagonist needs to share his magic with her in order to use magic. Is this a cool article? I really don't know. It seems that I didn't write this book because I didn't have fun reading it, but because the book I found on Tomato seemed to me very stupid, so I wrote this book. This is not a fun book, so reading this book with your brain may be the best choice. If you feel good, it just means that you have stepped on your sweet spot. Sometimes I am struggling and confused, and I will write a plot that has nothing to do with the main plot just for the sake of a fun point. I will also compromise. For every villain and every supporting character, I will do detailed decision-making analysis for them. Let their actions be in line with their interests, rather than being a target for the protagonist and deliberately disgusting people so that they can reap the pleasure of being slapped in the face. I'm a newbie author. It's a bit painful to write today. I thought about it and I have to admit that I am a novice, so if I step on a trap that the author should step on, there is no need to regret it. If you stepped on it, you should do it. If you didn't, it's a kind of luck. I'll deduct one star myself. This book is not good, I can only hope that it will get better and better in the future.

It can be seen that it was written carefully. Although there are some poisonous points, the subject matter chosen is my favorite, so I can tolerate it. After all, he is a new author, so it is already amazing to be able to do this.

It's okay for now, but it feels weird for the protagonist to do things in someone else's body. Later, you can write a body creation or transformation article, "It is recommended to look like Kafka (the cover looks like Kafka's mother)". [Cry][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It is known that the author updates one or two chapters every day. If he updates one chapter, the number of words will be significantly more. If he updates two chapters, the number of words in each chapter will be significantly less. The total number of words in the two chapters is equal to the number of words in the update.

Five-star encouragement, it is difficult to understand that the head of a remote village wants to design to kill the protagonist, the earl's child (only son?),,,,,,

The setting is good, the writing and story rhythm are well grasped, and I read it in one sitting. It's a pity that the author has to cut the book later and just make an ending according to the rhythm. It's too little and I haven't enjoyed it yet. In the middle section, it is unreasonable to go around looking for trouble in a riot, but the rest is fine.