You Said a Knight's Charge, So Why Are You Using a Barbarian Charge?

Overall, I am still looking forward to seeing the follow-up content, although the current motivation for following updates only comes from the legend. But just after reading chapter 10, three Riddlers appeared, 2 big and 1 little. The two big ones were Lord Blacksmith and the little one was the main character. Generally speaking, the writing skills of Internet article writers are generally insufficient. They forcefully use their writing skills to conceal their writings, but they also end up with a thin line of grass and a gray line. The actual impression is not good. Unless this foreshadowing is related to the main outline, it absolutely cannot be discarded. Without these foreshadowings, the entire novel would be impossible to write. Otherwise, please follow the principle of Chekhov's gun and bury it at any time. I think this can better enhance the look and feel of the novel. Let me evaluate it first, and then I will read about 30 to 50 chapters to see if it changes my perception of this novel before I review it. I hope that one of the lord's riddle and the blacksmith's riddle can be solved in these 20 to 40 chapters.

Very well written in most places For a growth-oriented protagonist, the stakes are not particularly high. Cooperation is necessary where cooperation is required. There are areas where you need to train yourself to become stronger At first I thought it was the stereotypical aristocrat who was the bad guy. Found the Baron to be pretty good It's not a brainless piece of writing, but there are some things you need to think about. It's also historically accurate, not a stereotypical medieval witch hunt. The only thing I think is toxic: Many equipment and skills are given to the female protagonist. In the early stage, you should give them to yourself first instead of being a licking dog.

The author self-evaluates, briefly introduces the writing ideas, and avoids pitfalls for non-target readers in advance. [Core Cool Point]: The legendary skills and equipment are used as extraordinary means to crush the realistic medieval natives. [World Background]: This article will strictly research the relevant historical data of England [around the 12th century], and strive to be true. There will be a large number of historical and humanistic details in the story, and it is not a purely fictional fantasy medieval period. [Writing style]: Do not pursue medieval language expression seriously, try to be as easy to understand as possible, and adapt to Chinese readers. It does not exclude the use of unique Chinese expressions to create Chinese dialogue humor. About the character design: All supporting characters have normal IQs and are consistent with their identity and motivation. The female character may have a good impression of the protagonist, but she won't do it mindlessly. There is no distinction between men and women when the protagonist slaps him in the face. Others: No farming, that's the point. No harem. Not invincible (except duel). Not a virgin, but intending to be a human being. Don't blame yourself. If you do something bad, it must be someone else who forced you to do something bad.

The most intuitive thing is that in the beginning, when the lord sends soldiers to suppress the bandits, only a dozen people can be found who do not compete for military service. This is very consistent with the capabilities of small local lords in the Middle Ages. It seems that the content is really medieval. Of course, take another look

Why is it only 6.0? Why is the rating so low? I've only read Chapter 24 now. Is there any plot behind that I can't accept? So far, the writing is very good. The descriptions of the plot characters are good. Except for the slightly childish dialogue between the protagonist and the hunter, but for Tomato, it is already very good. The description of the lord is also great. For the Middle Ages, he is a well-behaved and qualified lord, but the protagonist comes from real society. The collision of the culture and morality of this era is the essence of this kind of writing (of course, the system is also essential). I will look at it later. The author has worked hard, knights are like knights, lords are like lords, this is enough

The theme is novel, I hope to see different professions in different people, the protagonist is omnipotent and there is no point to look at, the method of spawning monsters can be diversified, randomly spawn monsters, or spawn monsters at fixed points, and form a team to fight the boss.

It's very creative and makes people feel like "I want to keep watching it", but I don't understand why so many words "hour" are used in Western Fantasy. If it's the habit of AI, can you replace it with Ctrl+F [awkward laugh]

It was very enjoyable to watch. Although the main character was in trouble, he didn't kill mindlessly. Instead, he took action at the right time. It was very satisfying. The supporting characters also had their own thoughts and were not stereotyped. I finished reading it in one go, but I was a bit dissuaded at the beginning, which made me quit every time I read it. Later, because this author's previous works suited my taste, I came back again. But after I persisted in reading, I read more than a hundred chapters smoothly.

It's rare to see a legendary Western genre. The key is that it's written so well and how true it is. I hope the author will work hard to update more, but be careful about your health. It doesn't matter if you can't explode. I still want to see you finish this book and read your new book.

The male protagonist travels through time and becomes a serf, Current ability: One choice per day, Content: Knowing the medieval world, just basic swordsmanship and healing, exposure and healing, forgetting about a woman you don't know, venting your emotions to the ruler of the territory (forget it, this kind of book can actually be recommended, alas, just read the specific content)