Heaven-Defying Comprehension: I Deduce Forbidden Spells at Hogwarts

It's not bad, and the content is quite novel, but some essential details are omitted, such as the purchase of a wand. Ollivander believed that wands should choose wizards, which could also reveal the protagonist's personality. Also, with the protagonist displaying such genius, it's impossible for him not to attract the attention of Dumbledore and the Church of Stigmatism; there's too little…

It's alright, well-written. I hope the author can add more dialogue and descriptions of everyday life, etc. It's a bit dry now; perhaps more descriptions of the protagonist as an environment character and classmates could be helpful.

A man was receiving an IV drip at the hospital when he suddenly started laughing hysterically. When asked what he was laughing at, he said, "I'm laughing at the IV drip..."

The idea is good, but I feel that you could strengthen the protagonist's role a bit, making many things the protagonist does. For example, the protagonist didn't know he would create the Mirror of Inquiry, but he had the idea and expanded on it, achieving success with a hundredfold return on his efforts. This process would be more interesting to write.

It's good. The romance is... Well, as long as there aren't too many women involved, it's fine. Otherwise, it could easily be mistaken for a harem novel.

It's a pretty good book, though I'm a bit curious why the rating is so low 🤔. Aside from the ending, which I wasn't entirely satisfied with, there are some commendable aspects, and it does have its share of occasional "poisonous" moments [smirk], but personally, I don't think they significantly impact the overall reading experience.

The subject matter is excellent, and the chosen system is perfectly suited to the Harry Potter series. The division of wizarding powers is too chaotic, and this system is just right. I suggest that other Harry Potter fanfiction authors take note. The only pity is that the ending is too hasty. Although I don't know what the author was thinking, this novel can definitely serve as a template.

The writing is fluent and well done.

Not bad, keep it up!

It's pretty good. Why was it discontinued? You can participate in the storyline, acquire knowledge and materials, and gradually build your own wizard tower, develop your wizard club into a wizard guild, create your own small subspace world, and then unlock otherworldly summoning to learn about those worlds and explore them.