Heaven-Defying Comprehension: I Deduce Forbidden Spells at Hogwarts

Not bad, the content is also very novel, but some necessary content is omitted, such as buying a wand, because Ollivander believes that the wand chooses the wizard, and it can also give a glimpse of the protagonist's character. Also, the protagonist shows such a genius that it is impossible not to be noticed by the old man Dumbledore and the Sect. There is too little description of them in the early stage. At the same time, there is another point. The dean was afraid that the protagonist would have no money, so he gave him gold! ! ! One box, but after buying the necessities, only one or two galleons are left? ? ? It's a bit ridiculous, but that's a bad thing. There is also a bit less description of the original protagonists like Harry Potter, which may make some people feel a little strange, as if there is nothing similar except that they are in the same school. Some people came in because of the title "Hogwarts", and they don't simply want to see you open up a new path. There can be more in the future. Overall, as a new book, it's pretty good. Come on, the author, and don't stop updating.

It's okay. It's well written. I hope the author can add some plot dialogues and descriptions of some daily trivial matters. It's a bit boring to read now. I can properly describe the protagonist, environmental characters, and classmates.

There was a man who was getting an intravenous drip in the hospital and suddenly started laughing wildly. When someone asked him why he was laughing, he said: "I was laughing on the intravenous drip..."

The idea is quite good, but I feel that the author can strengthen the role of the protagonist and make many things done by the protagonist. For example, the protagonist did not know that he would be asked to ask for help. He had this idea and expanded on it. He succeeded with a hundred times the effort. It is more interesting to write about this process. What you are writing now seems as if the protagonist's achievements depend entirely on a golden finger. Forget it, I thought carefully that the pace was too fast, maybe I just wanted to write a running account. Drawn into the Witcher stream but you wrote this. . .

It's good to watch, it's an emotional drama, emmmm, as long as there aren't too many girls, it's easy to read as a stud novel.

I feel like it's a pretty good book. I'm a little curious as to why the rating is so low [Thinking]. Except for the unsatisfactory ending, there may not be anything else worth mentioning. There are indeed occasional poisonous moments [smile], but I personally feel that it doesn't particularly affect the overall perception. In terms of characterization, it's just passable [Chigua]. There's not much dedicated characterization, but the overall impression can be roughly guaranteed. The plot is pretty good. There are some shortcomings, but the whole thing is smooth. The overall structure is also good. Personally, I feel that the key nodes are not missed. [Chigua]. The main thing that makes me feel good about this book is that it creates a new system in the world of Harry Potter that fits the world well, even though this system is contrary to the original work. Based on the comprehensive evaluation, fans with stronger receptivity can give it a try. Those who are interested in HP but don't know much about the original work, and those who have read it roughly or have not read it, it is worth trying [learn it].

The subject matter is very good, and the selected system is very suitable for the Harry Potter series. The division of wizard's power is too confusing. This system is so suitable. I suggest other authors of Harry Potter fan series to learn from it. The only pity is that the ending is too hasty. Although I don't know what the author thought, this novel can be used as a template. At least among the Harry fan series I have read in Tomato, this is the first one with such a rigorous system. It is such a pity!

The writing is smooth and well written.

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's good. Why eunuchs can participate in the past knowledge and materials of the plot? Slowly, they can build their own wizard tower, develop the wizard club into a wizard union, build a wizard tower, and build their own small subspace world. Later, they can start summoning to other worlds to learn the knowledge of other worlds, and then explore other worlds.