Hogwarts: Parallel Dimensions

First 🤔 🥺 😢

It has great potential and is worth a look 💕

The setting of meditation seems very uncomfortable, it is too different from the original work, and there is no plot or character benefit. It is also the same as not being able to turn the book and needing to breed characteristics. It is set purely for the setting. The biggest requirement for fan fiction is that it cannot conflict with the original work.

There is a bit of the author's personal style in it. If you want to create a Harry Potter fantasy atmosphere, you may have to start with the description of the environment, but online novels don't care about that. From the current point of view, the author is still okay. Personally, I feel that people's names are a bit flawed. It is difficult for Chinese people to remember the names of Western characters. Moreover, the first name is two or three characters, and the last name is two or three characters. Sometimes the first name and the last name appear alternately when describing the same thing. Because most of them are fast reading, the reading burden is added to the readers invisibly, causing the readers to think carefully after reading, which may make some people stop reading in confusion. Give me a five-star update

I can only say that based on the current situation, looking at the overall situation, looking at the past and present, and taking into account the average level of different people, the analysis and conclusion may be that, in summary, it is likely to be found that, although it may not sound good, it can be regarded as a good work anyway. This can only be expected at this stage.

It's quite good-looking, and the author is full of details, but it's just a little lacking. Big boost, author, don't give up (I've been deceived emotionally by other authors before 😢) I will always support you. (I have three numbers)

Come on, don't stop

In the end, the master was mindlessly abused, right? [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][punch hard][punch hard], it's really disgusting I understand the protagonist of the upgrade stream, and there is something interesting about it, but the abuse of the protagonist in the end is really disgusting. I originally thought this was a good book, but in the end I really gave up 🤮🤮 That's it, bye

After reading more than 40 chapters, the plot has no ups and downs. The author added a lot of private settings and imposed a lot of seemingly reasonable restrictions on the originally idealistic Harry Potter, which is not interesting.

Ordinary, I don't know what I want to express