The Outcast: Playing Sikong Zhen, I Shock the Old Celestial Master

You can also join the company, there is a system to be afraid of trouble, and you can do it

Currently positioned at chapter 35. Overall it's pretty good, the writing is fluent, the logic is flawless, and the plot is okay. I thought Zhang Lingyu was seriously OOC at first. He killed the protagonist for Xia He as soon as he appeared, but it turned out to be the instructions of the Heavenly Master... The identity of the protagonist was a bit big, and he was the source of trouble at the beginning, being targeted by the Heavenly Master. Later, for one reason or another, he was in Tianluo Dajiao, surrounded by enemies, and his goal was to kill everyone, emmmm... It's okay, the number of words is still too few, I'll see how you edit it after Luo Tian Dajiao is over [laughs evilly]

66666 It is best to kill Longhu Mountain

If you feel it, with Zhong Kui, you shouldn't be afraid of the Three Corpses Technique. Of course, this is my personal understanding.

Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I won't touch it anymore. Please give me one more chapter. I won't touch it anymore. Please give me one more chapter. Really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and scratching now. I beg you, just one more chapter. Please, just one more chapter. I can't stand it anymore. My head is going to explode. Quick! Just one chapter, please, please, please, please, I can't stand it anymore, I can't stand it anymore, I can give you any amount, I won't touch it again, please, can you do it for the last time, let me go, let me go, give it to me, please, how much is it It's okay, brother, it doesn't matter how much it costs. This is the last time, I beg you, give me another chapter, please, please let me go. If this continues, I will die. My head is dizzy, my body hurts, my body temperature is cold, and my eyes are burning. I really can't stand it anymore! ! ! ! ! Please, give me one more chapter. Comments copied and pasted

It's quite good. It's a new approach. It uses the world under one person as the background. It tells the story of the protagonist of this book. It doesn't have too much contact with Zhang Chulan and Feng Baobao. It basically just passes by. The disadvantage is that the plot moves quickly. The number of words should not be too many in the future. Some places are not written in too much detail, but overall it is good and worth reading. I hope you can stick to it and stop being a eunuch. Great masters also write books one at a time. Write each book well and don't let your readers down. Just take your time and you can also build a book club group.

Author, I would like to wish you a Happy New Year! But I still have a problem. The two chapters you updated later are not as long as the one you updated earlier.

It's super good to watch, especially the battle with the old master. It's so exciting. I'm really looking forward to the subsequent plot. I hope the author will update it soon [Blowing Kiss] I don't know if I'm the only one who thinks Wang Ye and the protagonist are too close to each other.

The green-haired turtle won't say much more.

Although there are some problems with the narration, it is still readable for the time being. There are no serious poisonous points. I have caught up with the latest chapter. I'll give it four stars first. It depends on the situation. After all, there are still a lot of piss spots. If Xia He doesn't die, he will give it one star.