How Many Times Do I Have to Say It? I'm Not a Traitor!

It's good to read, and the overall idea is relatively clear. The author also loves foreshadowing. After reading the extra chapter, all my doubts were answered. It is a rare and good book among other world novels that I have read so far [shy][shy]

There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the writing style is a bit rusty, but it feels like someone's vest. The concept is great, and the outline I set seems to have been revised halfway, but there is no deviation overall. There is still a lot to write. After all, the orcs have just started. With the current setting, it can be a classic Japanese RPG game with a Western fantasy theme.

Finally, I can read Chapter 70. It's Carl's birthday after here, which is the first climax of this book (the end of the agreement, the activation of the town barrier, and the removal of the magic ring). Here, I expressed a wrong opinion about Carl's three souls because I didn't understand it, but I made a guess: The dragon egg originally had a soul Elves and Karnad cannot have children So the elf and Canard used the dragon egg to give birth to a baby, but something happened. (The child they gave birth to originally had a soul, but it couldn't be born normally, so the elf split an additional elf soul), plus the dragon soul of the dragon egg That is the dragon soul of the dragon egg The human soul born of Carl and the elf (And the split elf soul) But [Carl] felt threatened, so he committed suicide, and the protagonist's soul I don't know why I entered this body with two souls left. According to my understanding, this is probably the case, but. What's in parentheses is my own imagination. If there is anyone who understands, please correct me. After reading Wang Yue'er's extra chapter later, I still didn't understand what I said. What does it mean that his and her souls are incomplete? Is it similar to twins? One Birth, Two Souls [Thinking], good-looking, well received

A little messy, but okay [laughs]

I also finished reading this book in one sitting, and I couldn't help but admire the author's superb writing skills. The plots are layered and interlocking, which is fascinating. The characters in the book are also very charming (♡>𖥦<)/♥, which is endlessly memorable. It is truly a masterpiece.

The author mentioned that he drew lessons from the setting of the game Life, but Long Yue's situation is obviously more difficult than that of Blank, and he does not have Blank's inhuman abilities, and there is no Blank in this world to lead the human race forward, which makes it even more difficult. After reading it, I feel that although I borrowed it from Game Life, I do have my own ideas. It's great, it's really great.

[Make faces] I came here from where people raped me. I want to see the elf sister act like a spoiled brat [Pout]

It's a very imaginative book, the growth line is very clear, the emotions are good, and the plot is not procrastinating. It's very good. The only thing that isn't good is that the foreshadowing and hidden details are not very good. From a reader's perspective, it looks a bit confusing. I have to find someone who understands it from the comments.

In terms of general rationality, this is a good book, full marks.

Personally, I think it's very interesting, and the echoes are wonderful. The content is imaginative, and the world view is rich in fantasy. I like it very much, but I don't understand why there are so few people.