A Mortal Woodcutter's Path to the Dao

The work is very good. Book lovers must be patient and don't miss a good work [Like] The plot before the third level of Qi training is a little slow, but it also vividly depicts the hardships of cultivating immortality and the protagonist's character. The character of the protagonist is quite good, with a firm mind, self-discipline, prudence, and perseverance. There is no poison, no perverted troublemaker, and no overflowing Holy Mother heart. When the protagonist buys the third level of Qi training and is promoted to an outer disciple, the plot becomes very exciting, the setting is reasonable, smooth and attractive. Finally, I hope the author will create more and update more, and write about the world of cultivating immortality in his heart as soon as possible [Like][Like][Like]

The writing technique of this book is an excessive accumulation of descriptive rhetoric, just like a sweet candy. It cannot be said that it is not a sweet delicacy, but as you chew it, you will inevitably have a disgusting emotion in your heart. As for how to stack rhetoric, you will understand after reading a few chapters. Emotions can surge like mountains and oceans at every turn, and abysses can be as oppressive as mountains and oceans at every turn. In addition, there are many clichés in the plot. As soon as the protagonist buys something, an NPC young master comes to show off and slap him in the face. After beating the younger one, the older one comes again. He uses it over and over again, and he is not a son of a man. Changing maps too frequently makes the elites of the sect become casual cultivators. There are many illogicalities. But overall, this book is still a novel above the pass line, and it is still readable. The author just makes the mistake of novices who like to pile up words. He is diligent in updating and the level is above average. Still giving five stars for encouragement.

This author is very perseverant. The performance of this book seems not to be good either. I can still keep writing. Just like the main character is imprisoned, the sect makes you suffer for your own good. Then the author should suffer a little more and keep writing, and he will definitely achieve results.

The author loves to use extremely exaggerated sentences to express the protagonist's emotions [face covering], a hint of despair and a hint of unwillingness.

Can anyone explain this? I saw that Elder Jindan was leading the team to support the demonic invasion. Why were there no foundation-building disciples? Only the top geniuses of the sect could practice Qi to perfection. We can't just follow the protagonist's level in setting all the settings. It's okay to explain it at least.

The author updates too slowly, tempering the body, training the tendons, breaking bones, training the grain, training the heart, training the liver, training the spleen, training the lungs, training the kidneys, training the essence, opening the pulse, guiding the qi, gathering qi, condensing the qi, transforming the qi, training the qi, building the foundation, gathering elixirs, dispersing elixirs, condensing elixirs, transforming elixirs, becoming elixirs, golden elixirs, yuan elixirs, half infants, condensing infants, dispersing infants, transforming infants, Yuanying, Yuanshen, distracting gods, combining gods, transforming gods, condensing, dispersing , combine body, combine qi, combine base, combine elixir, combine baby, combine god, combine spirit, combine soul, small success, medium success, great success, transforming the void, refining the void, cave void, dispersing the void, returning to the void, blending the void, breaking the void, void dao, heavenly void, asking the void, breaking the void, asking for the tripod, Mingxuan, cavexuan, void extreme, empty silence, Mahayana, overcoming the calamity, peeking into the sky, becoming an immortal, ascending, false immortal, false immortal, becoming an immortal, transforming an immortal, earthly immortal. Adult Immortal, Immortal Infant, Half Immortal, Quasi Immortal, Virtual Immortal, Yaxian, Mortal Immortal, Zeng Immortal, Human Immortal, First Immortal, Heavenly Immortal, True Immortal, Xuan Immortal, Yuan Immortal, Taiyi True Immortal, Taiyi Xuanxian, Taiyi Yuanxian, Daluo True Immortal, Daluo Xuanxian, Daluo Luo Yuanxian, Jiutian Tianxian, Jiutian Xuanxian, Jiutian Yuanxian, Shangxian, Yuxian, Taixian, Jinxian, Taiyishangxian, Taiyiyuxian, Taiyi Taixian, Taiyijinxian, Daluo Shangxian, Daluo Yuxian, Daluo Taixian, Daluojin Immortal, Nine Heavens Supreme Immortal, Nine Heavens Jade Immortal, Nine Heavens Immortal, Immortal Lord, Immortal King, Immortal Star, Immortal Lord, Immortal Lord, Immortal Saint, Quasi-Emperor, Immortal Emperor, Immortal God, Nine Heavens Immortal King, Nine Heavens Immortal, Nine Heavens Immortal Lord, Nine Heavens Immortal Lord, Nine Heavens Immortal Saint, Nine Heavens Quasi-Emperor, Nine Heavens Immortal Emperor, Hunyuan Golden Immortal, Hunyuan Taiyi Golden Immortal, Hunyuan Daluo Golden Immortal, Chaos Immortal Lord, Chaos Immortal King, Chaos Immortal Lord, Chaos Immortal Emperor, Chaos Immortal Saint, Hongmeng Immortal Lord, Hongmeng Immortal King, Hongmeng Immortal Lord,

It's nice to watch, the descriptions are very detailed, and the world view and Golden Finger are very novel. I hope the protagonist can use Goldfinger to become more powerful.

When I open a new map, I suddenly can't stand it anymore.

The details are quite exciting and give people a refreshing feeling, unlike ordinary people's routine of playing games and upgrading. Come on! Take good care of you!

Overall, well written. It's not boring or repetitive, I watched it with gusto. [Eat melon] I hope there won't be any love or affection later on, which will irritate my eyes. You have to upgrade your treasure, change the map, and then become stronger and stronger. Give it five stars to show your support.