Harry Potter: Miss Malfoy's Path to Becoming a Top Achiever

Ladies (Potter, Nott, Malfoy, Weasley, Snape, Riddle, Black, Diggory) This is one of the few White Moonlight books in my HP. I like such a heroine. She has ambitions and desires. The heroine has a unique feeling of being a lady. I initially thought that the heroine came from time travel (I am superficial. I have read too many time travel books and it is a bit superficial). She can be picked up and put down. She has a superior IQ. It is absolutely impossible to suffer a loss. You can also fall in love. I also like Theodore in order to fight for a great cause. I won't say much. There is a feeling of silent giving, which is comparable to that of Sri Lanka. A kind of wanting to carry everything silently and alone The author's writing style is still very solid. The description is more detailed and humorous. I feel very comfortable and happy when I read it. I can read it from beginning to end and the author can finish it. It can be said that this book satisfies my regret for Theodore. I hope it has a good ending in the end (except for Ghost Tom [face covering]). I just hope that the author can update it quickly. Well, because I hold my mobile phone late every day, I can't get the first place. Author, please update it quickly. I may not be able to get the mobile phone after a while. ╰(*´`*)╯ You won't lose money if you invest in it. Really, you won't lose money if you invest in it. I highly recommend watching it. Think about it, you've become an old fan after watching it for a while now, so show it to me with all your strength.

After reading this book so far, the overall feeling of this book to me is very novel. The heroine "betrays" the family and enters Gryffindor. At first glance, it seems to be copying Sirius Black's behavior. However, the further I read, the heroine gradually understands the meaning of family and the responsibilities and obligations brought by the family's support and shelter. This is different from Sirius. When I first saw Lucius "forcing" the heroine to marry, I was quite angry. He didn't consider the heroine's feelings, and everyone around knew that the heroine wanted to marry, but the heroine was kept in the dark. Not only did the heroine feel depressed, but I also felt depressed watching it. I was also very excited when I saw the heroine choose Gryffindor when she entered Hogwarts. I thought it was great and a powerful revenge. But looking at the subsequent development, the heroine gradually understands her father's thoughts and understands the responsibilities she has to bear. It can be seen that not only the heroine's strength is slowly growing, but her ideas are also slowly changing. From these points, we can see that the author has really put great thought into the plot and content. When reading this book, you will unconsciously be brought into it and take on the roles in it. It is very fascinating. I look forward to the author's next arrangements! ! ! Come on! ! !

When I clicked on it, I thought it was another stupid and mindless article, but to my surprise, it was surprisingly interesting and great. Well, can we do a spin-off about Theodore and the heroine's wedding and the heroine and Selwyn's engagement [][][][]

I quite like it. The writing and plot are both good. I also like the character of the heroine. She is a camellia who pursues freedom, loves life and her family. She belongs to herself. I originally wanted to give it five stars, but the author made too many personal assumptions and didn't pay much attention to the original text. The atmosphere in the comment area was very bad, which affected my mood. In addition, I would like to give you a small suggestion. I think the author writes emotions very well, but! It's not about the relationship between the heroine and the hero, it's more about some regrettable single relationships or intense family conflicts. It's not very good at setting the protagonist's love. Deciding on the hero too early will make many male protagonists dissatisfied and affect reviews. It will also limit the emotional development of the heroine and other characters and limit her personal charm. I suggest the author maybe You can try the single-protagonist mode. When writing the outline or plot at the beginning, you only specify the female protagonist. Based on the plot direction and inspiration, determine whether the female protagonist has a CP and a partner. It is true that there will be fewer readers who are chasing the male protagonist, but the emotional line will be much smoother and the heroine will be more fleshed-out. Of course, this is just my idea. The author has a good grasp of the writing style and the plot, but next time I write a fanfic, I'd better read the original book or movie, because many people who read the fanfic are just following the plot settings of the original book. There is a cute realism, which ignores the author's advantages in writing books. Personally, I think the author's writing style and plot should have a higher score on Tomato. Come on

Super pretty! To be honest, this is the only HP I have read. It's not like I haven't seen others. Others are either unfinished or too long for me to read patiently. It took me three days to read this book. It is neither too long nor too short. It is very suitable for impatient book lovers like me. Leave a paw.2024.8.8 [Blowing kiss]

Nice! Sylvia and Theodore are just... Amazing, their love isn't exactly passionate, but it shows in every little thing they do to each other!ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧The heroine does not save the world at the end like other HP heroines, but everything she does is to pave the way for victory and the love of GGAD (⑉°з°)-♡! ! ! Very happy. The ending is sloppy, but still sweet. Poor Sylvia, she paid a price for this ending (x_x;). What makes me most uncomfortable is that Sylvia Theodore in the parallel world was really kind to him, but Theodore died first, and Sylvia also disappeared to save Theodore in this world, but in addition, they in the parallel world met on the other side! ! (●°U°●) "This may also be a different kind of he! Finally also in my imagination! In one dimension! In another world! May Sylvia and Theodore be happy! ! I wish the author and readers of this book happiness! Hapiness! !

At first I read this book because there were very few male protagonists called Theodore, but later on I was really shocked. I originally thought that like other fanfics (not all fanfics), it would be about getting to know each other, falling in love, and finally working together to defeat Voldemort. However, unexpectedly, this book did not write much about the relationship between Theodore and the heroine. I can only use these two words to describe it as "bland". There is no vigorous love, this book is closer to real life, with a dull beginning and a dull ending. This ending suits them very well, and I hope Theodore in the parallel world can also be happy. After reading this article, I feel I have no regrets for Xiao Duo. This is his ending, a beautiful and happy ending.

I read it in one go at 15k words [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] The character creation in the early stage is quite exciting, and the transition from immaturity to maturity for the heroine is also pretty good (ღ˘˘ღ) Narcissa's love for the child, Lucius's psychological transformation process, Draco's care for his sister, Xiaoduo's feelings for the heroine, even before GGAD, the writing was quite natural [Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart] The only 1️⃣ small regret is that the battle at the end would have been more exciting if there was more ink💋When I saw the end, I always had a feeling of unfinishedness [almost crying] [almost crying] I want to see the sweet love between the heroine and Theodore [shy] [shy] and GGAD's daily life hehe ('▽')

After reading this book, it is really well written. The author has created a brand new character, which is not limited to love and love. There are also many protagonists' own character lines. However, the ending is too hasty. I hope there can be more extra stories.

I accidentally discovered this very niche book. I originally opened it with the idea of ​​killing time, but I found it to be unexpectedly good-looking. I really like the description of the heroine's psychological journey in the book. It is relatively delicate and makes everything the heroine does reasonable. The heroine's spirit of not succumbing to reality, not waiting for death, daring to resist, and yearning for freedom can be expressed very intuitively. Among them, the part about family affection is very reasonable! Very touched! (Except ooc) (I love Narcissus Mom) Also, this book also has GGAD! ! ! Of course, this book also has flaws. The ending is a bit hasty. Originally, I wanted to see the heroine kill Luodan herself, but suddenly, Luodan was destroyed by the group of people from her own generation. . . And there is another problem, that is, Dumbledore's Army established by the heroine in Durmstrang seems to be of little use, and it only overthrew Karkaroff at the beginning. I originally thought that Dumbledore's Army would grow stronger and stronger under the leadership of the heroine, and then eventually compete with the Death Eaters, but nothing happened. . . Ah, but overall it's still very good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]