Pale Shadow of the Stray Arrow

Ah, I can see the ratings. I can give myself a score based on everyone's feedback. And I would like to respond to the questions that have received more responses here. The most difficult thing to do is the Yecang mission [laughs crookedly]. I also knew it would be difficult to do it when I wrote it. If Ye Cang is not sent back to report information, the plot of Sunagakure will not be able to unfold. I can only say that I sacrificed it for the sake of the plot, and I was mentally prepared when it was released. The pitfalls will be filled in later (or in other words, I have already filled in the pitfalls, and the relevant chapters will be available to you this month). I can't think of a better way to address my own deficiencies and accept criticism. Then answer some of the more frequently asked questions. 1. Regarding the age of the protagonist. As for the timeline, I specially sorted out one chapter among the 50 chapters. I have a personal opinion for reference. Originally, Kirigakure's timeline was very messy. 2. CP is currently not locked or scheduled. 3. The protagonist is too young and his combat power increases too quickly. Ah, I only realized this after I posted it, because I started writing the story from Konoha 42 years after setting up the world view according to the timeline of my own understanding. In terms of combat power, it is more appropriate to set it to about 12 years old. It can't be changed. That's all for now. If you have any questions, please leave a message below [top post][please pay attention] ps: There will be three updates per day in January! Please watch and collect! The Star Recruitment Act is open!

Personally speaking, this novel is really thoughtful, and there is no nonsense about time-travelers, especially the plot of watching the fire from the other side of the three stations. Yagura wants to copy the successful case of Laomei, but unfortunately he cannot give a proper method due to experience. At this time, the third generation uses his own death to teach Yagura the last lesson. It is perfect. The ending of the third generation is perfect, and Yagura's growth at this time is also natural. Generally speaking, Yagura is better at the intelligence and unique perspective of the time traveler, and Sandai is better at experience. The complementarity of the two will eventually make the Mist Ninja strong.

I have rarely seen articles like this, it's very nice. The content is clear and unique. I have never seen it before. And I would love it if this article wasn't a harem article. After all, a girl shouldn't like to watch a harem, come on! (ง ˙O˙)ว[adoration][adoration][adoration]

Yagura, hehehe, Shota hehehe is so cute. ． Hey hey hey

It's very interesting. Apart from Yagura's weird age, the writing is quite good. I really like watching the interactions between the little ones [Sending my heart] I hope Yagura will be as short as the original and become a cute and adorable group pet [Adoration]

It is rare for me to review a novel seriously, and my evaluation is very good. It is different from previous Naruto fan fictions, such as "starting in Konoha", "following Narusa's plot line", "having Sharingan or Byakugan", "it is difficult to deal with the original character changing the meaning of the original", "wanting to be a rebellious ninja", "developing a relationship with the original character or protecting or saving an original character" Ah wait, the starting point of this novel is not even Konoha Village, but Kirigakure Village. Moreover, the protagonist himself is a Jinchuuriki. There are some plots that are not in the original novel. All in all, I recommend [like]. The only flaw is the update speed. I finished it in one go. Alas [face covering]

It's a very good book. The main character, the Holy Mother, wanted to kill her own people, but she only wounded them and let them go after telling them not to come again. Then her information was leaked. The enemy killed hundreds of fog ninjas, but the protagonist just said "don't come" and let them go. It was very well written and I loved reading it.

This is my first time writing a review, so I apologize. I clicked in because this is the first one I saw in Tomato that wrote about Kirigakure or Yaso. I personally like Yaso very much. After all, who doesn't love Legitimate Shota (?). And the plot is also very good and complete. Although there are not many foreshadowings (you can also say that there are not, although this is a bit heartbreaking), it is better than those that have too many foreshadowings but are difficult to recover in the end. The only thing is that the timeline is a bit messy. It feels like all the useful people have been forcibly mixed together at one time. Although it is a private setting, it still feels a little bit inconsistent. Overall, it's still well written (it's not like I write a beginning every time and then delete it), and I hope it won't be as aborted as other articles I've read.

[Blowing kiss] It's really nice to watch. There are no messy cheats. It's very consistent with Naruto. The protagonist has obvious growth. The death of the third generation is a clear dividing line when he takes up the role of Mizukage. Originally, Ye Cang was a bit offended before, but here he gives perfect explanations. The protagonist is very good at taking advantage of information gaps and standing from Kirigakure's perspective without violating his own ideas. But it's such a pity. First, the ending ended too quickly. In fact, there could be a lot more, but it's understandable. Second, the line between the protagonist and the full moon is the last secret to give the answer [laughing]. I was right. There is no extra story [crying]

The protagonist has flesh and blood. Although he relies on his identity as a time traveler to gain opportunities, he does not rely too much on his identity as a time traveler. He still maintains half of his soul that belongs to this world. The writing is quite nice and makes readers feel deeply involved. Moreover, this round is a slow-burning novel. , To be honest, I am growing little by little. I generally can't say that I am particularly good, but I am not bad enough. I slowly started to burn out later on, and it is a slow burn. The slower it gets, the better it gets. I hope the author will stop being arrogant and impetuous, and continue to work hard. It is best to be a full-time author of eight chapters a day [Sending Hearts]