The Mark of Yipsi

Hi, this is the author. I believe you are already familiar with some of the characteristics of our protagonist, "Lord," and I really care about your opinions. Is it getting better or worse? I'm asking for your suggestions here to add some plot points that the audience needs. This book is my first work (but I've been brainstorming for a long time, so...).

Judging from the writing style, the author doesn't seem like a novice, because the foreshadowing is handled quite well. The protagonist seems eccentric, but that's just the surface. So far, we've only seen the player's side; the human side hasn't been shown yet. So overall, this book has great potential. However, this book isn't suitable for most readers with limited experience.

Personally, I think it's worth reading. The protagonist's mindset is like a gamer; every action is based on his mood. He's chaotic and evil, definitely playing like a player, though he's also pushing the main storyline. Don't overanalyze the book; focus on watching the protagonist's unconventional actions. The protagonist: "That's just how we players are!" 😏

Well, firstly, in my personal opinion, this novel is excellent. However, for new readers, the first impression might be that it's "chaotic." To be honest, I only just figured some things out myself. Firstly, the main plot is messy. It seems like there isn't a main plot at all. The protagonist just fully embodies the roles of a player and a calamity.

I was almost fooled by the cover. I thought it was some kind of completed literary work. Let me see what this is all about.

Yes, so far there aren't any major flaws. The protagonist travels with a game-like mindset but doesn't lack human form. Some scenes are described in a rather ornate style, and the author seems to have a lot of free time, often browsing the comments section.

This score is a bit strange... After reading the comments, I feel that if the author hadn't said anything, the score might have been a point higher, or even more... I didn't read the comments, I just read it directly. If you treat it as a typical toilet paper-style isekai (another world) story, or a game, then this work is completely unacceptable.

Novels that dare to focus on the protagonist as the central figure are truly rare. The rest are all either setting the protagonist in another world to show off or simply using cheat codes to show off in their current state. It's a bit disorganized, but it resonates with gamers.

Don't stop! It looks like it's about to end. I came with joy; I was full of kindness and malice towards all, for I am a hero.

This is the most gamer-like protagonist I've ever seen.