Fantasy Card Maker: Starting with Succubi

It is recommended to continue to update. The total number of words is still too small. Many people may not click in even if they see it. Also, this is what I saw on the recommendation list.

The previous ones are all good, but the stunt card is a bit poisonous. It feels like this one suddenly appeared when it was good. Come on, author.

I don't know if someone is maliciously rating this. It was 9.3 The day before yesterday, but today it was only 5.9. I feel pretty good, driving is relatively stable

There are stories that are erotic, time reversal and immortality should be written well. I hope it won't end up in a small dark room. It probably won't happen now. Come on [thinking]

The character cards will be greatly improved in the future awakening stage. You can provide your own ideas below (for example, many people want to see the loli transform into a royal sister). In addition, everyone is welcome to like and vote for your favorite characters! !

Finished reading, overall good 1. The character creation is quite rich and the writing style of Tomato is considered very high. Each important character takes up a considerable amount of space and leaves a deep impression on people. As a harem novel, there is no preference for one or another, and a character does not appear for a long time. 2. The setting is not particularly new, but there is no bad point in reading the whole book. It is just that the description of the battle scenes is average. In the later stage, I must have rushed to finish the book because the results were not good. It was a bit sloppy, but it can be regarded as a top-notch novel. 3. Although it is an abandoned unfinished book, it is considered to be the best among many unfinished books. There is no sudden interruption, and there is no hasty explanation after two chapters. Instead, the plot is reduced first, the plot is quickly advanced, and a separate awakening is written for each character, and then the basic world view is explained, and finally the follow-up plot outline is added. This is the end. 4. If the author continues to write books, he hopes to read more well-known books and improve his writing skills. Especially when describing scenes of dialogue between multiple characters, how to distinguish who is speaking. This is not a big deal for casual reading, but it is very awkward for careful reading. I wish the author a happy life, smooth work, and better results with his next book!

I have fallen in love with this book now. I hope the author will write it well, don't update it too often, don't be too poisonous, try to avoid clichéd plots, and focus on maintaining the character settings.

I really think it's pretty good-looking, with a lot of imagination and rich characters. The ending is a bit abrupt

The plots related to time are very complicated. If you are not careful, the plot will collapse. I hope to see this book reach 500,000 words.

I don't understand the part about time travel. I don't know why I have to guard against Leah. It feels like there's a foreshadowing.