Surviving in the Sanctuary: I Have a Card House

The creativity is quite good, but the main character's character design is average. The whole story is generally set up and the desire to read it is average. Overall, it's a bit stronger.

The article is good, it seems to be acceptable, and it won't be a brainless wait. The current four main characters: 1. Protagonist (card sales and other routes) 2. Chu Yang (a person with good luck in a certain world who is similar to the Son of Luck, a bit silly, and can be said to have a better relationship with the protagonist) 3. Team leader (a person who wants to make the world or the higher-ups better, maybe a little strict but has a bottom line, not the kind of brainless villain) 4. Nanako (another person from a world with higher development, who may have many transactions with the protagonist later) are all described well. But maybe it's because it takes up a lot of space to explain to people who don't understand cards, which makes the plot progress slowly. It just feels like it's all explained, a bit watery. Of course, explanations are also necessary. After all, not everyone understands cards and the world view of the novel. However, I still hope there will be more plots, or more! All in all, there's just not enough to see, please update more soon! I'll give you four stars first to attract readers (four-star reviewers will read more). I'll give you a follow-up review and make it five stars after a few more reviews. Of course, the premise is that it's not toxic to your current chapter. Don't be proud, come on! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

It's simply not enough to read. Only with a deep knowledge of cards can you write such a colorful story. Do you dare to publish a hundred chapters and save it?

A slow-paced business flow card upgrade article, suitable for people with patience. The setting explanation is relatively clear, and it doesn't matter if you haven't played Hearthstone before. It is integrated into the author's own world system, and it can be seen from the details that it has been well thought out. The reason for the low rating may be that many people feel that there are too many setting explanations, and that Xiao He's attitude towards the protagonist and the protagonist's response at the beginning made them feel unsatisfied and had no patience to continue watching. In my opinion, this is a business flow card upgrade article with great potential and stamina. I hope the author will work hard and not write it down. Finally, if possible, Xiao He's speech urging the protagonist to go online can be changed. It may be easier to arouse readers' resentment. Although I don't care, Xiao He is really an ideal person, and I quite like the author's portrayal of him. Will recommend it to other fans (rejection horses)

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It is recommended to increase the length. I personally think that the introduction of the cards can be a separate chapter or say it in the comment area. If you don't want to write about this update speed, you don't have to write about it. Don't miss it.

The writing style and plot are both above average for online articles, but the author is too procrastinating when writing. It often takes several chapters to explain one thing clearly. In addition, the author often updates according to the circumstances. Can you believe that updating every two or three days can actually be regarded as a time when the author is more diligent? ! ! [Petrochemical] Moreover, the chapters updated by the author are short and concise, which is not enough to read👀. Therefore, if you want to read this book, you must be prepared to follow the updates for a long time and the author often disconnects from time to time.

I'm not like you. I can chat with as many people as I want. If I don't post jokes, I feel very lonely. If I don't post jokes, others will think that I have quit the Internet, been in jail, or died. I only have a sense of existence by posting jokes.

As a poker player, I quite like this kind of writing. Although I don't quite understand why there must be relatives who have never met before. Maybe there is a related plot behind it. I am sure that the author is a senior poker player and should have a complete outline. There are many settings, so it may seem complicated to passers-by, but aside from these, it can be said that it is worth watching. This is a Hearthstone story.

After the previous background introduction, it is still very good. If you want to be a businessman, you must have a reputation and buy things. You are also afraid that others will find out and ask you to buy things on your behalf. Oh, so far I have not found the use of this core building for choosing a store. These are not important, the important point is to stop updating.