The Reborn Grand Secretary Seeks Revenge with the God of War General

It's a good story, with two male protagonists attacking each other. I've always felt that the relationship between the two men should be evenly matched, instead of weakening one of them or describing Shou as soft, cute and well-behaved. Come on, even if Shou is a man, he has the spirit of a man. This story is very good. It's not about romance, it's about two strong characters, but it's always a drama with one baby at a time. Another thing is that now that I have seen it, the writing style in the article is generally good, but there are a lot of sick sentences, which is quite uncomfortable to read, especially the wrong use of some words, which makes people doubt the author's cultural literacy. For example, I remember that there is one chapter in more than ten chapters, "Now the middle minister of Xu Xiangfu is her housekeeper, and Xu Xiangfu includes herself, which is the four masters." The author probably wants to express that she is in charge of the middle minister of Xu Xiangfu. The next two are also repetitive. There are also some logical inconsistencies, such as the uncle Wei of King Kang in 118. King Kang called him uncle. In his uncle's inner activities, King Kang became his daughter's son. Is this Wei so-and-so the uncle or grandfather of King Kang. There are also some mistakes in the application of common sense that I will not list one by one. Putting these aside, the plot is still very good and it is my favorite story.

It's good to read. I want to wait until it's finished before reading it. It's really painful to follow the update. I'll save it first. This article really resonates with my taste.

The protagonist has a good personality and doesn't have much of a protagonist aura. What's important is that everyone has a mouth. When things are said and done, there aren't that many bloody plots. It's simple and brisk.

The main CP is very sweet and the sub-CP is very touching. I highly recommend everyone to watch it. You will never get tired of the plot of rebirth and abuse of a scumbag [Sending Hearts]

This is the first time I've seen this kind of storyline. It's not only the two male protagonists, but also the story of the emperor and Yinuo's father. In the story, the emperor is good, but his son is not. The eldest prince and the second prince initiated a palace coup because of the instigation of a fraternal princess. Fortunately, the emperor was not too poisoned because of Xu Qian's reminder, and he used the trick... The eldest prince is really bad, the second prince was instigated and brainwashed in the end... The humble third prince wins... The two male protagonists attack each other, but in my opinion, the general is more inferior [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The logic is clear and the writing is beautiful. I like the character Yinuo very much. He dares to love and hate, and dares to face all the hardships in his previous life. After being reborn, he enters the official career and changes his destiny. Although there is also a palace fight, it is not very dark.

It's good-looking. It's not a love story, but the couple of secondary CPs are also very interesting.

The plot, emotions, and characters are all very good, and the straight-forward emotions are the most touching. The political part is too much, and it's really hard to watch. But after all, it's revenge, and the background story is quite complete.

The overall writing is quite good. The story line belongs to my favorite direction, but it is too short. There are also some plots and emotional processing that can be more delicate, more foreshadowing and excessive, and the plot line of the male protagonist's promotion can be extended, so that it will be more exciting.

The ending is perfect, the plot is compact, the characters are vividly drawn, and the writing is smooth. The ending of the story is a little rushed, but overall it's good.