The Broken Dragon in the Abyss

The biggest advantages and disadvantages of this book are: from language to thought, it almost perfectly reproduces Jin's martial arts. In terms of language, Kim's humorous, serious and funny style can be seen everywhere. There are more than 500 chapters in the dozens of chapters about the Battle of Yanmen Pass, including city siege, duel, and cavalry raid. The scenes are so large and tragic that it is rare to see them. I read a lot of martial arts, military, and history books at that time, and I could only read this long description of ancient battlefields in this book. The overall degree of completion is very high, and the fate of the main characters is clearly explained in the end. When the story unfolds in the first 100 chapters or so, there are a little too many clues, and I also find it a bit cumbersome. After reading it, I will slowly pick it up. It feels like a tree. The author started by writing about the branches, and then gathered it at the roots. Overall, the later parts of the book are better and faster paced than the early ones. Why is it said that replicating the Kim family is also a disadvantage? Because of innovation! All in all, it is a good book worth reading. I stayed up for 6 nights to read it, and it brought me back to the feeling I had when I read the trilogy many years ago.

It is indeed a good book, no worse than those by Jin Yong, Feng Ge, and Sun Xiao. The descriptions are vivid, the language is humorous, and the characters are well drawn! I hope it will be another traditional martial arts masterpiece after "Kunlun", "Heroes" and "Under the World"! I am optimistic about you, the author is great!

The plot is compact, the logic is reasonable, the fighting is exciting, and the foreshadowing is full of wonderful points. The characters are all vivid and agile, and it has the style of ancient times. It is a rare martial arts masterpiece in today's environment and is worth watching. The meaning is still not finished. . Look back again

Great book! Several tragic characters are vividly portrayed with flesh and blood. The story has a lot of meaning. Everyone strives for the mission they were born to shoulder: whether it is national hatred or family hatred, they are determined and dedicated to the end. They are all right, but in the eyes of the world, they are evil. It's admirable and deplorable. He died before leaving the army, which made the hero burst into tears.

Some of the characters have a hint of Jin Yong. This is the highest level of Tomato pure martial arts I have read. Those who like traditional martial arts can trust my taste. The shortcomings are also obvious, the male protagonist is not outstanding

It's pretty good, let's just talk about a few shortcomings. ① Judging from the first chapter, Beggar Wu should know the protagonist's father, but in subsequent plots, the author seems to have ignored it. It doesn't mean that all holes need to be filled in, and all stories need to have follow-ups. It's just that there is no intention here, and there is no blank space. If there is no follow-up, it will just appear abrupt in subjective feelings. ②The protagonist gives people a sense of drifting with the flow. What he wants to do will always change directions midway due to other reasons, even if he has responsibilities on his shoulders. It's not that the other things I do in the middle are wrong, but sometimes I really feel like I don't know what my priorities are and I don't have any responsibility in my heart. The second point above is where I feel the novel is most lacking. The first point was realized after reading the last chapter and then reading the first chapter. There is another omission that I mentioned in the review before. The author is definitely a breath of fresh air among the entire Tomato web articles (of course, it may be that I have a shallow knowledge and am addicted to cool articles and have not seen other good works). I strongly support it.

The characters are vivid, worthy of the crowd, the writing is humorous, and the protagonist in the early stage is ambitious and weak. After about 200 chapters, he becomes more capable and becomes more and more exciting later on.

The author grows up slowly, and the later he gets, the better he gets. I hope the author will hurry up and write a new book However, it is recommended that the author pay more attention to the main body and make the branches and leaves more concise.

Very well written, "Under the World", "Heroes", and this is your book. I hope the author can write better martial arts novels!

Very well written, give it a thumbs up